Part VI is below. No, it's not the big "climax." Not yet. I felt I had a little more to write before getting to that. But it's coming next, as will the characters in the story.
Thanks for reading and for all your positive feedback.
The story so far:
Part I: Dr. Bruce, although an eye doctor, is the only one at the arena who steps forward to help his 18-year-old tenant Trey after the junior-league hockey player took a puck to the privates. Bruce was asked to make sure the blond stud's plumbing worked. Suffice to say, it did. All eight inches of it.
Part II: The coach asked Bruce to perform physicals on four new recruits ages 18 to 20 next week, and Bruce starts fantasizing over the possibilities. Meanwhile, Bruce has a heart to heart with Trey, who's struggling with his sexuality. Then Bruce finds a spy hole into Trey's room and confirms that the kinky kid seems not to be straight as an arrow.
Part III: Dr. Bruce performs memorable physicals on four hockey players ages 18 to 20, but the patient who sticks in his mind is Brendan, a perfectly toned 5-foot-7 stud from Manitoba. Brendan agrees to have his first prostate exam, with remarkably messy results. Brendan also catches Trey's eye.
Part IV: Trey admits that his penis is in fact eight AND A HALF inches, wonders whether he might be gay, insists on getting a midnight physical from Dr. Bruce, and then insists on examining the 45-year-old doctor who had let two or three years elapse since his last rectal exam.
Part V: Dr. Bruce finds Trey's spent condom and masturbates with it and then gets some sweet revenge on Cody, the 22-year-old who felt up Trey in bed. Then Brendan comes to stay the night, tells Bruce he probably doesn't like girls, and then takes care of his morning erection as Bruce watches from the spy hole.
Part VI:
On the way back to my car, Diane stopped me and asked if she could talk to me a minute about Trey. Uh-oh, I thought. What has Trey said? Did she show that every last thing that Trey and I had experienced -- from my masturbation of him in the training room to the semen he fed me the previous night -- were his decisions and that I had never pressured him to do anything against his wishes.
I told Diane I'd be glad to talk and suggested the arena's concourse. Trevor trailed behind, obsessed with his iPod.
My hand shook a little as I fed a dollar into the vending machine and dialed up a cup of coffee for Diane and then did the same for myself. Thankfully, Diane started in right away and began to put my fears to rest.
"So, Trey, he's going OK, you think?"
"I think he's doing great, Diane. It's a pleasure having him around."
"Well, he appreciates you so much. That's what he told me, last night."
"What did he say?"
"That you take time to listen, in a way that makes Trey want to talk -- which is unusual for him, particularly since his father died."
"I am very sorry about your loss, Diane."
"It was tough. Still is. I hate to say it, but we had good insurance, so money is not an issue. It's too bad Dwight won't be here to see the boys grow up. That being said, there was no question that Trevor was his favorite. So Trey, poor guy, he doesn't miss his dad at all. What a shame."
"That's what Trey let on."
"Did Trey tell you why he doesn't miss him?"
"Maybe."
"The boy from the library?"
"He did mention something."
"I can tell that Trey told you. You're just protecting his privacy. For that, I'm grateful. But Bruce, see, Trey has always had ... had ... gay tendencies. It took his dad by surprise, or so he put on. That's why Dwight beat him up, because he caught Trey masturbating with another boy. But good lord, they were thirteen! Trevor was masturbating, what?, three times a day at thirteen? Still is, actually. A mom knows these things, Bruce. A mom knows things about her sons that these headstrong teenagers have no idea that their mom knows."
No, I thought to myself, there is NO WAY my mom knew that I sometimes beat off with an electric sander -- minus the sandpaper, of course.
"Bruce you're a man of the world. Trey mentioned that you had been married and are now divorced, and that you ah, find women attractive, but that -- he was sort of signaling that, ah, you like to spend time with men as well."
"Well, I am who I am, I guess, Diane."
"And I'm fine with that. Really. Look, Bruce, Trey is 18, and he's going to do what he's going to do. I just want him to be safe. And happy."
"I think he's safe, Diane."
"But is he happy? I mean, before I moved to our little town I sowed some oats. That might surprise you, looking at me now, a single mom living in the middle of nowhere. Well, ha!, Vancouver is no San Francisco, but it's got it's side, you know. I'm not dumb, though for many years I played dumb wife with Trey's dad. And with Trevor. And, unfortunately, with Trey. I'm smart enough to know there's nothing wrong with being gay. If that's how he is, that's how he is. It's nothing I did wrong, or Dwight did wrong, or Trey did wrong. It's who he would be, or is."
"Yet you want grandchildren, don't you."
"I do. Doesn't every mom?"
"I don't think my mom did, to be honest. And from the looks of it, Trevor will not disappoint."
"You might be right. Well, the reason I wanted to pull you aside is to thank you. Look, Bruce, I love my son very, very much. And I want him to be happy, more than anything else in the world. He's very book smart, as you know, and although he sometimes lacks real-world smarts, he is smart enough to know that the hockey thing is a fad for him. It won't be his career. It's great for now, and he knows it. My son is very much a person who likes to try new things, at least once, whether it's reading a type of book he's never tried before, or spending a year playing hockey and working in a library. I know he'll get this hockey out of his system and go to college. He's got scholarship offers galore."
"What a lucky guy."
"And Bruce, since you came into Trey's life, I see a new Trey emerging -- more socially confident, outwardly funny. He doesn't always have his nose in a book. At the motel, he actually watched some trashy TV with me and Trevor. I don't think he had ever done that. Spent most of his time in his room. Of course, this morning, he was up reading about the history of Canadian native peoples while Trevor was still asleep and I was watching HGTV. Good ol' Trey ..."
"Well, Diane, it's been an honor to know Trey. And to get to know you a little bit."
"Same here, Bruce. Well, we should be going ..."
"We'll be in touch."
"If you ever get out my way, look me up. We could have a glass of wine, at least."
"I'd enjoy that. Very much. Drive safely, Diane."
* * *
I had intended to hit the Y and then head to the clinic to catch up on paperwork, but the conversation with Diane got me thinking. So I went back into the arena and sat in the stands to watch the guys go through their pre-road trip practice as I thought through the recent events.
It was easy to spot Trey, even in his practice gear. The blond curls coming out the back of the helmet were the dead givaway. And there was Brendan, the littlest guy on the ice, whose breezered butt struggled to push his legs faster and faster during the warmups, in a successful attempt to skate with the bigger guys. Then Brendan almost effortlessly turned 180 degrees and skated backward -- something I never had been able to do well. Cody was on the ice too, stretching his groin. Sergei was progressing nicely, and Troy was turning into a sort of enforcer who worked to protect the smaller guys on the ice.
I put my hands behind my head, leaned back, and counted my blessings. I breathed in the arena -- the smells of propane from the Zamboni ice-resurfacing machine and air conditioning chemicals, the intoxifying sound of skates and sticks scraping on the ice, the sight of young male muscled bodies that were so tender and in fact delicious under their protective covering and their guyish veneers. I loved hockey, and I loved hockey players. That much was for sure.
* * *
I watched practice for about forty-five minutes and then thought that I really should get some exercise. The Y was across town, and I wasn't in the mood, but I had remembered to put my gear was in the car, and, well ...
Then I remembered that the arena had some equipment, not as much as the Y's, but machines and weights of decent quality. The weight room was conveniently located in the locker room, so I figured, what the hell?, I'll just spent 10 minutes with the weights and 20 minutes on the bike and call it a day.
I sought out Assistant Coach Peter on the bench and ran my plan by him. He said, sure, go ahead, good idea. Peter had caught my eye the first moment I saw him. He was in his mid-20s and had sort of guy's guy features -- a 3 o'clock shadow, square jaw, a don't-mess-with-me 'tude. But he also had doey-brown eyes that, once he packed away that arrogant smile, let on that he had a softer side, one I thought I might like to get to know. Plus, he was slim but not skinny, had a surprisingly attractive flat butt, and clearly worked out a lot. I sensed he was like Brendan in some ways -- didn't quite have the body to compete at the next level of hockey, but worked hard and loved the game.
Peter was a mystery. I knew he was engaged to a woman a little younger than he was, but repeatedly I had seen him linger in the locker room whenever the guys would be getting undressed. He did it the first time I had met him, when he brought in Sergei for his exam and asked to stay. And I had seen him do it with Trey at least twice. We, it seemed, had a few things in common.
I placed my bag in front of Trey's locker and, knowing I was alone, picked up his boxer-briefs. They smelled more like laundry soap than 18-year-old crotch, but I nevertheless took a good, long whiff knowing that an hour ago they had been on Trey's naked body and it would be several days before I would see him. Then I changed into my workout t-shirt, briefs, and cotton shorts and headed to the weight room. I wasn't in there five minutes before Peter appeared just as I was preparing to use the bench press.
"Need a spot, Doc?"
"Well, sure, since you're here. Thanks."
Peter loaded up another 30 kilos on the bar and said I could handle that. Then he positioned himself so the crotch of his black nylon pants was right over my forehead. I couldn't see any bulge, but just being so close to the sexy guy's goods made my penis stir.
After I did as many reps as I could, Peter helped me put the bar back on the stand, and as he did, I could not ignore how his forearm muscles flexed to push his veins to the forefront of his arms that lacked any fat.
"Thanks, man. That was great. The added weight pushed me. One more?"
Peter spotted me a second time, then removed the 30 kilos, and then spotted me a third. It felt great! The guy knew what he was doing. Then he asked if I'd do the same for him. I said sure.
I watched Peter load up more weight than I had expected and then recline his slender frame on the bench. As he began to pump, his sweatshirt rode up to reveal a nice washboard and more than a treasure trail.
When Peter was done, he confided that his shoulder was bothering him and he wondered whether I would mind taking a look. I said that'd be fine and suggested the training room, but Peter responded that it was not a huge deal, that he still intended to work his legs, and he'd just slip off his shirt right here, once he locked the door.
"Just Richards and me have got a key, so we should be fine."
Peter removed his shirt and sat on the end of the weight bench. His knees were more apart than they needed to be as he raised his right arm to massage his lower right shoulder where he said it hurt. His naked armpit was of someone who was 100 percent man, and hair populated much of the region between his pecs. He was a man with a swimmer's build who wanted to be buff but did not have the genes to pull it off.
"So shoulder problems at the age of, what, 26?"
"Twenty-five." Peter looked at me with his warm brown eyes as he put his hands in his lap.
"OK, 25. Yes, a little young to be having shoulder problems, Coach. That hurt?"
The slender stud winced. "A little."
"Here?"
"A little more."
"How about back here."
"Actually, that feels good when you touch it, that way."
I put my thumbs into the assistant coach's lean but strong shoulder muscles and pushed hard and gradually became more of a masseuse than a physician.
"This better?"
I began kneading the tops of both shoulders. Peter breathed in through his nose and out through his mouth. "Oooh, doc, yes, that's good."
"Let's even you out."
I used my palms to massage the young man's v-shaped back, and both his breathing and the way he pushed out his chest signaled that he was appreciating and enjoying my effort. Peter placed his hands flat on his hamstrings and moved the nylon pants down a notch, away from his crotch. Then I took a risk and pressed my half-erect penis against the midsection of his back to gauge whether this might go to the next step.
"So, you're engaged."
"Yeah, but--"
"But what?"
"Oooh, she doesn't give me backrubs like this."
I knew the door was locked, but that there was no telling who had a key and that eventually someone might come looking for the assistant coach. "What else doesn't she do?" I moved my crotch off of Peter's back, made myself almost completely hard, and began massaging his biceps as I pressed my erection hard into him. "She doesn't appreciate this part, I bet." I had placed my fingers into his armpits and was pressing pretty hard. "Does she?"
"Ah-"
"She doesn't get it, huh?"
At that point, Peter leaned back on the weight bench. From my angle, I could tell from the tent in his nylon pants that he was hard and apparently wearing loose-fitting boxers. The slender 25-year-old looked at me upside down with his doey brown eyes as he put his thumbs on either side of his nylon pants and pushed them and his red boxers to his knees. His hard penis strained at the top of the pants before landing with a "thwap" below the stud's washboard abs. From this angle, Peter's penis seemed to be about Brendan's length, but quite a bit fatter. Still, Brendan on balance looked bigger given his frame and the fact that he, unlike Peter, kept his pubes trimmed.
I crossed around so I could stand over Peter and assess his frame from the front. He was a man of contrasts -- unshaven yet vulnerable, slender yet strong, straight yet gay, a hockey player in the body of a swimmer. As I bent down and bunched up Peter's pants and boxers at his ankles, Peter put his hands behind his neck and lifted his head up to watch me visually inspect the genitalia I was to pleasure.
Peter's testicles were drawn up pretty close to his body, and fairly long strands of brown hair sprouted from his scrotum. There was a decent pattern of pubic hair throughout his crotch and well into his ass.
I got to business pretty quickly, knowing time was of the essence. I began by tonguing the top of his scrotum, where the base of his erect penis emerged. From the smell, he had not showered since yesterday and probably had worked up a bit of a sweat while putting the guys through drills on the ice. Then I ran my tongue along the underside of Peter's six inches, teasing the top before taking my mouth away and placing his penis between my thumb and first two fingers to visually assess the marvelous soft-hard state of the male erection.
I then stood and leaned over the stud, and he placed his hands on my head as if to make sure I was going to do what I was going to do. The angle was not the greatest, but we did not have much time, so I made the best of it by arching my neck to accommodate his bent erection. Almost immediately, the slender assistant coach began thrusting his penis into my face, and I relished the sensation of having the engaged man's blood-filled erection in my warm mouth. He held the sides of the bench, closed his eyes, and let his head flop to the right side. I could taste just a hint of precum, and as we picked up the pace, Peter lifted his head to watch what I was doing and then put his hands back on my head to join in the rhythm.
There was no question that what we both wanted was a quickie. I had Peter's penis in my mouth no more than 90 seconds before I felt that unmistakable hot spurt against the back of my throat. The toned 25-year-old followed up with perhaps seven more shots, most of which landed on and then oozed onto the back part of my tongue. When I removed my mouth, Peter jacked himself just a little more, stood, whipped up his trousers, and nonchalantly removed the weights from the bench before putting his shirt back on. He cleared his throat as I was swallowing the last of his tasty semen. "House rule. Don't leave weights on the bar."
I wiped my mouth and said I understood as he went to unlock the door.
"I better get back, Doc."
"Sure. I understand."
"Thanks for the help."
"Well, thank you."
"Just between us, right?"
"Yes, just between us."
* * *
I did 20 minutes of cardio and then made my way into the locker room just as the first players were coming off the ice from their practice. Peter's rocks were off, but mine were locked and loaded, and I was in the mood to soak up eye candy before perhaps jacking off in a bathroom stall. So I spalshed some water on my t-shirt and face to look like I had just had a great workout and then headed to the main part of the locker room.
"Bruce!" It was Trey. "What's up! Thought you had left."
"Well, Trey, I ran into your mom. We chatted a bit. I was going to go to the Y, but then I decided I'd just workout here. And one thing led to another, and ..."
"Looks like you need a shower."
"Whew." I smelled my left pit and got a whiff of deodorant. "Looks like I do. Mind if I borrow some shampoo, when it comes time?"
"Sure. Not a problem."
At that point, Peter came in and shot me an arrogant glare but then smiled as he said -- louder than necessary -- that it was good to see me and that I should feel free to use the workout facilities whenever I wanted to and that he was glad to have shown me a better way to do bench presses. I publicly thanked Peter for his help and then began surveying the scene. Twenty hockey players, all ages 18 to maybe 22, all in the primes of their lives, all dressed in protective gear that I found as sexy as hell, gear that in the next ten minutes would be stripped off to reveal twenty young male naked bodies. As each young man sat down to unlace his skates, I glanced at their crotches and obsessed over how the baggy hockey pants and the cups underneath teasingly conceal all clues about the genitalia that each young man had.
With the skates off, the players could intensify the time-intensive process of disrobing. First, typically, came the jerseys. Most usually lost the shoulder pads next, or maybe the elbow pads. With their torsos then covered with only sweaty t-shirts, the players then usually peeled their suspenders from their shoulders so they could push the baggy breezers down and begin to offer an onlooker some hints of their distinguishing characteristics. Most players just let the breezers drop to the floor as they then slid off their jock with the protective cup, took off the hockey socks, and then sat on the benches with their crotch bulges on display as they unstrapped the knee-shin guards from their typically naked legs.
At that point, some guys whipped off their tight underwear and headed for a shower -- sometimes wrapped in a towel, oftentimes entirely naked. Trey, typically, was among them, and he drew plenty of stares as he directed his low-hanging penis and testicles toward the steamy shower room. Other young players, more timid than Trey, walked to the shower with their underwear still on to afford themselves a few more seconds of concealment before being forced to strip so that their fellow players could examine their junk.
Because I was charged up from my time with Peter, I tried hard to keep from getting hard. I was proud of myself for staying under control the whole time Trey stripped, and he was now headed for the shower. But my penis control was severely tested when Brendan spotted me and approached wearing only his tight undies. His penis, I could tell, was hanging to the right. Sweat had made his black hair curly, and the fireplug looked exceptionally strong while standing nearly naked in the locker room.
"Bruce! Hey!"
"Hey, Brendan. How was your first practice?"
"Great. They put me through the drills, that much was for sure. What's up with you?"
"Oh, just grabbed a workout here. Was going to go to the Y, but just not in the mood."
"Hey, Bruce, thanks again for last night."
"Well, thank you."
Brendan whipped off his underwear and looked delicious from his sweaty black hair to his white teeth to his surprisingly pumped-up biceps to his toned abs and to his perfect, four-inch flaccid penis.
"You taking a shower?"
"Right behind you, Brendan."
Compared with the hockey players, my disrobing was a snap and I got naked and then scurried behind Brendan. There were six shower heads on each side of the wall, and as luck would have it, two were open next to Trey. Brendan took the far one and I took the other one.
Trey's eyes were closed because he already was rinsing shampoo from his hair. I talked through Trey to address Brendan, all the while taking liberty to fully inspect the blond hockey player whose eyes were closed and who needed to rinse the soap from his face. The water caressed his 5-foot-10 frame with steamy precision, flowing down his hairless chest, across his abdomen, into the v-shape below his waist, onto his penis, off of his penis in a way that almost made it look like he was peeing, and from the bottom of his lightly haired and droopy scrotum. There was little question that Trey's was perhaps the nicest, most intoxicating male body I had ever seen. I just about melted when Trey opened his blue eyes, looked into mine with his body turned 90 degrees toward me, noticed I was half hard, and smiled before he spread another round of shampoo before offering me the bottle and turning back into the spray so that both Brendan and I had beautiful views of his beautiful body.
When Trey turned back, Brendan began spending more time than necessary to soap up his crotch. When he asked to borrow some of Trey's shampoo, the blond stud gave his black-haired friend the same frontal view I had enjoyed before turning back into the spray to carefully soap up his floppy penis and dangling tetsticles. Brendan, meanwhile, was glad to have me on the other side of Trey so he had license to turn toward us and touch Trey, even with only just his eyes.
As we toweled off, I got a fantastic view of Trey as he put each leg on the bench to towel them off. The cooler air had made Trey's penis shrivel just a bit, and his scrotum was tighter than usual to his body. Brendan, though, was sporting some wood. I did my best to control myself and get back to the area around Trey's locker where my clothes risked getting intermingled with the sweaty gear of 20 young hockey players.
Within 15 minutes, the team was headed for boxed lunches that they were going to eat before getting on the bus and beginning the road trip. They asked me to stay, but I knew I had to go straight home and get my rocks off.
As I made my way to my Accord, Peter waved me down as I was driving out.
"Hey, Bruce, can I catch a ride?"
"Sure. Where?"
"Ah, to my house?"
"Don't you need to eat--"
I stopped myself and thought, what a dumb dumb I can be sometimes.
"Ah, sure, Peter, hop in."
Peter strapped on his seat belt and got ready to cover his bases.
"Say, ah, Doc--"
"Bruce."
"Bruce. Ah, say, what went on back there, in the weights room ..."
"What went on in the weights room? I have no idea what you're talking about."
I looked away from the road (longer than I should have) to glare at Peter with a dumbfounded look of "What are you talking about, crazy man?"
"Yeah. Well. Thanks."
"What else can I do for you."
"See, ah, my girlfriend, my fiance, she's in Winnipeg ..."
"Oh."
"And I've been, ah, you know."
"I understand."
"We've got to leave in an hour ..." Then I almost ran off the road as Peter courageously extended his left hand to my thigh. "I want to try it, Bruce."
"I'd love for you to try it."
"Where?"
"How about over here?" I steered the Accord toward a wooded area on the edge of town that served as a popular cruise spot during the warmer months but would be secluded during hockey season. As I parked the car, I confirmed that Peter had never given oral sex to another guy before, and that he was OK with doing it in the front seat of my car. I left the engine running as I unzipped my jacket, slipped up my sweatshirt, and somehow worked my jeans and boxers to my knees. I could tell that Peter was almost going to back out, but then he looked at me in the eyes and then to the erection that was in front of him. I was pretty frothed up, so when he gingerly picked up my penis in a matter suggesting that he thought he was going to break it, I almost came right then and there.
But my arousal lessened just a little when Peter took the sucking part literally and began using a technique more appropriate for the straw of a milkshake.
"Think of what YOU like, Peter," I whispered. "What does she do to you that turns you on?"
At that point, the light went on. The assistant coach took my penis from his mouth and spread his saliva over the head. Then he teased the underside with his tongue until I was again completely hard and then massaged my testicles with his left hand as he lightly jacked the bottom part of my erection with his right. Only then, and with his hand even deeper into my balls, did he let his mouth again touch my penis. He started with the head, which he kissed more than sucked, and then let his tongue explore the intricacies of the upper part of the male phallus. Then he took just the head in his mouth and placed his teeth right where my foreskin had been cut away when I was a boy, and then let his tongue explore the underside of my erection as far as it would go. Only then did he start moving his head up and down on my throbbing hardon, and only then did I begin bucking my hips so I could fuck his mouth. I was thoroughly enjoying the young man's first time, and it was abundantly clear that he was too.
We went for a good two minutes, I'd say, before I felt that I had to give him fair warning.
"I'm about ready to--"
Peter kept his mouth on my erection and was moving his head up and down even faster.
"Peter, it's going to--"
The assistant coach bit my hardon with just the right amount of pressure.
"If you don't want to--"
Then the 25-year-old weightlifter with a swimmer's build pulled at my scrotum, took my penis as deep as it would go, and knew -- as only a guy can know -- that an ejaculation was imminent.
"Ooooohhhh!"
I unloaded a nice load of semen into Peter's mouth. I could tell that he had gagged just a bit, but he stayed with me, and proceeded to take every drop of semen that I would give him. As I was going flaccid, he raised his head and I could tell he had not swallowed.
"Peter, if you want to, you can--"
"Shhh."
Then Peter opened up his pants, pushed them halfway to his knees, and spit my seed on his hand and began palming himself. I just watched him, amazed at his body and what had just happened. He closed his eyes, and I could tell he still had not swallowed. This went on for only another 45 seconds before he shot cum onto his belly at the exact same time he swallowed mine. Then he just sat there, stunned. He had not ejaculated a lot of semen, but there was enough to pose a problem. So I leaned my head over his crotch and made sure the coach was all tidied up for the long road trip ahead of him, and then delivered him back to the team bus.