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Watching Brad

Well, as you've probably guessed, there's no update this week. Instead, I've been concentrating on the long-neglected 'Taking Care of Jason' and I've completed and updated 2 new chapters there. However, I also posted an 'explanation' of recent events in that thread and I'd like to repost it here as it's just as relevant to this story as it is to 'Jason', and it might help you to understand my situation and why things have been so difficult for me. (Unedited.)

Well, it's been a long time coming, but it's here at last. The next update and, as promised, it's a double-chapter update. (You'll see why when you read it.) Both chapters will be posted below this but, before you get to them, please read this bit. It's not an excuse. It's an explanation.

You all know that I have back problems, but I'd like to explain to you what the problems are and how they affect me. Most importantly, when my back finally gave out in the late 1980s, my spine twisted in 3 different ways. One, it is twisted laterally, meaning that, were you to look at me from above, my shoulders and pelvis wouldn't line up. Two, when viewed from the front or back, you would see a definite curve at the base and my pelvis would be tilted. Three, when viewed from the side, you would see that there is no 'S' curve that you normally see. I've lost the bottom part of the 'S' and now more or less resemble a candy cane instead.

All that usually adds up to a lot of discomfort and makes walking difficult. There's no cure and surgery would do nothing to make it better. With it comes good times and bad times. I recently went through one of the worst bad times I've ever experienced and I'm not afraid to admit now that it scared the shit out of me. Not only did it make walking more difficult than usual, it seriously interfered with my balance this time and made walking even that much more difficult. That's partially what sent me into a mild depression. I was certain I was destined for a wheelchair.

Believe me, it's extremely difficult to write porn when you're in pain, scared out of your wits, and depressed.

Things are better now, though. Not back to normal, but better than they were and I finally felt inclined to do some serious writing for your reading pleasure.

I hope these chapters measure up to your expectations and. . . ahem. . . your 'enjoyment'. ;)

Enjoy, and take care always. (*8*)
Neil
 
I can not even begin to describe my thoughts, and feelings, when I hear of such physical distress! My Heart, and Prayers, Sincerely go out to You, Neil! I do SO wish there was something I could do to help "make it better"! But, alas, I know that I can not ... and, am therefore ... at a tremendous Loss!

I do not "Know" You! And, yet, through your Writing, and Posts, I DO Know there is a Fantastic Being encased in that body! Which only makes me wish, even more, ...

Not only am I in Awe of Your Talents, but also of Your Perseverance under such personal circumstances, to bring "Us" the insights, and entertainment, that You do! Which makes You even more of an individual that I've come to Admire!! (ww):=D:..|

"God BLESS You!", Neil!! (group):hurray:(!w!)

I can not, at the moment, think of Anyone else, who epitomizes more the concept of ... no matter what ...

Keep smilin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz ;-)

THANK YOU!, for what You do, even More!!
 
I would like to double what Chaz has said above and add that I too hope you are able to continue writing. It would be a terrible loss if you had to give it us. H&K Vic
 
Yes, I have to agree.
The pleasure is all mine. I thank you for the time you have put into both stories and I pray for you!
 
WATCHING BRAD
Part 199​

"You scored big time, didn't you, Ted?"

Despite the fact that our four ‘boys' were playing with the Hot Wheels across the yard, Brook kept his voice soft and low and leaned toward me so I could still hear him clearly.

"How so?" I kept my own voice equally soft and low.

"Well, Brad sort of just dropped out of the sky and landed right into your lap, didn't he?"

"I suppose so," I replied. "And?"

"Well, you lucked out, didn't you?" He must have noticed the confusion on my face because he continued. "I mean, Brad just shows up the day you move in beside him and you're so perfect for each other that you both decide to be gay and fall in love with each other. It was kismet, wasn't it? Saved you all sorts of hassles trying to find each other the usual ways."

I thought about what he'd said and couldn't make heads nor tails of it. "Sorry, Brook," I told him honestly. "I'm lost. I haven't got a clue what you're getting at."

He paused only briefly before forging ahead. "Okay. Try this. Most people spend years and years trying to find the right person for them to spend the rest of their lives with. ‘True love' if you will. Many find it, or the closest thing to it, but some spend their entire lives looking and never find it. You and Brad didn't even have to look. You were meant for each other and true love found you. Like I said, kismet. That's blatantly clear to everyone who knows you. I'm one of those people who's been looking his whole life and I'm still not convinced I found it. Not you, though. You lucked out."

Now I understood. "What's wrong with David?" I asked. "You two are perfect for each other."

"Are we, Ted?" he replied skeptically. "Are we really?"

I opened my mouth to reply but my thought was brought to a complete and abrupt halt by the squeals of two little boys running toward me yelling, "Daddy! Daddy!"

The twins came to a stop beside me, their faces full of happy smiles. They had lost their T-shirts and a quick glance toward David and Brad showed that they, too, had lost theirs as well. I didn't have to ask what they wanted. Justin simply stood there and lifted his arms straight out at his sides. I picked up the bottle of sunblock, squeezed a generous amount into the palm of my hand, and gave the plastic bottle to Jeremy so he could take it to his Daddy Brad and get himself prepped against the afternoon sunshine. I rubbed my hands together slightly and began applying the cream to Justin, taking care to see that all his newly exposed skin was covered before spreading the remainder of the cream on his face, ears, arms, and legs.

After a quick kiss, he was off to rejoin the others. Brook and I watched as David and Brad applies block to themselves and then they knelt down so Justin and Jeremy could rub the sunblock over their backs. Jeremy did his Daddy Brad, of course. Justin worked on David. When they were finished, they climbed aboard the freshly-oiled backs of their ‘horsies' and rode them around the grass. It was funny watching them trying to hold onto the slick bodies of their horses as David and Brad trotted them around the yard on their hands and knees as the boys screamed in glee. Finally, they galloped back to the jungle gym and the Hot Wheels track for round two of their races.

"So, you were saying?" I said to Brook.

"Where was I?"

"Questioning whether or not you and David are right for each other," I reminded him.

"Right," he replied and he took a few moments to gather his thoughts once again. "Right," he repeated. "Well, you probably don't realise it because you've never had to do it, Ted, but it's not really that easy being gay and trying to find a partner for a long-term relationship. It's a lot harder when you're gay and black, and it's even harder still when you're gay and black and you have a thing for gay white men. Almost impossible, in fact."

""It can't be that hard," I tried to reassure him. "You found a partner at least once that I know of. Gee-sus, Murphy Brook. You live in The Village! There's got to be thousands of gay men there."

"And how many of them are my type and how many of those would be into black guys?"

"For someone as handsome and sexy as you? Plenty." I pasted what I hoped was a most sincere smile onto my face.

Brook's smile was polite, but then his face turned very serious once more. "That's very kind of you, Ted, but I don't think even you believe that."

My heart went out to Brook. I could see that this was of great concern to him. "Is it really that hard to find someone?"

"It's a lot harder than you might think, Ted. They don't just fall into your lap the way Brad did with you."

"David did," I reminded him.

"That's the thing, though, Ted. Did he really?"

If the look on my face didn't portray my confusion, I hoped my words did. "Okay, Brook, you've lost me again. What are you saying?"

"I'm saying that I've only ever been in one LTR in my life and. . ."

"What's an ‘LTR'?" I interrupted.

"Long-Term Relationship," Brook replied abruptly. "Anyway, you know part of the story, but not all of it. You know that it was abusive, but there's more to it. He never laid a hand on me but he was really good with words and he made me feel guilty and submissive. I didn't realise that he was treating me like a slave. He sat at home most of the time enjoying life and living off my paycheque. He rarely had a job. He kept telling me that he loved me and, if I really loved him, it should be my pleasure to take care of him, both financially and sexually. My love for him blinded me to it and it took me a long time to see through his façade and kick his ass out the door."

"Oh, Brook. Surely you don't think David's like that?"

"How can I be sure? How do I know he's not just using me as a way to stay in Canada?"

"David wouldn't do that," I told him.

"How can you be so sure?" he challenged me. "You've known him only a week or so longer than I have. How can you be so certain that's not what he's doing? I mean, it's pretty damned convenient that he picked me out of everyone else there at the wedding. Believe me, Ted, I don't want to believe that of him. I've fallen in love with the little bugger, but I can't seem to convince myself that it's real. I'm terrified that he's only using my for his own purposes."

"But David loves you, too," I said. It wasn't much of a response to his challenge.

"He says he loves me, but so did my ex. And the only thing he loved was the fact that he didn't have to lift a finger or pay a penny in rent."

"Does David do that?"

"Well, no," Brook replied. "He does a lot around the place and he has enough money saved up to keep himself going for quite awhile. He even helps pay the rent and groceries and such, but what if he's doing all that just to string me along until he gets what he wants out of me? How can I be sure he didn't just see me up there at the front of the church and see ‘sucker' plastered all over my forehead? Tell, me, Ted. Convince me I'm wrong because I'm doing everything I can to convince myself that I'm right, that it's all an act and David's going to dump me as soon as he gets what he wants."

I had to admit that everything Brook said about David could have been true, at least from his perspective. David could have been using Brook and everyone else to find a way to stay in Canada, but I had the advantage of knowing a few things about him that Brook didn't know. I counted them off to Brook on my fingers.

"One," I told him matter-of-factly as I stuck up my left-hand thumb and touched my right index finger to it, "David fell in love with Canada before he fell in love with you. He was looking for ways to stay in Canada even before the wedding. Granted, you offered him an easy solution, but I don't think David is like that. If he was, I don't think he would have been trying to find legitimate ways to stay here. He still is, for that matter. Remember, he said he wanted to do it on his own before he would even think of marriage, and that would be the easiest way." I stuck up my left index finger and moved my right finger to its tip. "Two, David didn't know you were going to be singing at the wedding, and he certainly didn't know you're black." I moved to the next two fingers respectively. "Three, he didn't know you're gay unless his niece told him. And four, I already knew he was into black guys, but no-one else did, and I certainly didn't tell him. But, from what he'd told me, I figured you were just his type. At the reception, he practically got down on his knees and begged me to introduce you to him, and the rest is history." I lowered my hands. I still had the baby finger to count on, but I left it at that for the moment. If push came to shove, I still had an ace up my sleeve. "I swear, Brook. I didn't tell him a thing. And I certainly didn't try to hook you guys up. Warren's the one who likes to play yenta. Not me. I knew you two would probably be perfect for each other, but I kept my mouth shut and let things happen on their own - if they were going to happen at all. Whatever you guys feel for each other, whatever you've discovered about each other, you've done it all on your own."

I could see that Brook was contemplating my words. He bowed his head, staring intently at the ground between his feet. I, too, was thinking about what he'd told me and I found another spark which I hoped I could fan into a flame of hope for him.

"You said your ex used to expect you to take care of him?"

Brook met my gaze again and nodded his head. "Yes."

"Did that apply to sex, too?"

"Pretty much," Brook replied. "He told me right from the start that he was a top and I loved him so much that didn't mind being the bottom for him."

"What about David?"

"David?" Brook said.

His eyes suddenly had the strangest look was in them. I had no idea what it meant and I hastened to apologise. "I'm sorry, Brook. That's none of my business. I'm sorry. I never should have asked."

"No, Ted," he said swiftly. "No. I was going to tell you anyway, wasn't I?" He fell silent once more and sat back into his chair, staring vaguely into space somewhere. I could see him thinking again. I gave him the time he needed. "You made me think of something, that's all. I couldn't figure it out at the time, but it all sort of makes sense now. It was your wedding night when David came back to my place. We sat on the sofa for quite awhile just talking and talking for over an hour. I don't even remember what we talked about, but I remember the time going by so fast. Next thing I knew we were necking and kissing and getting to know each other very well. He's a helluva kisser, by the way."

Brook paused a moment to smile and wink mischievously. "Anyway, David started the sex right there on the sofa. He didn't even take off his shirt let alone the rest of his clothes. Mind you, he'd removed his suit jacket, shoes, and tie when we got there, but that was all. He did everything and all I had to do was lie back and enjoy it. It was my suggestion to go to the bedroom and that's where he finished me off. And then he seemed quite surprised and actually frightened by the fact that I would even consider reciprocation. When I tried to open his pants to return the blowjob, he panicked. At first, I got the impression that he didn't want me to see him naked. You know, with him being so short and all.

"Size has never been an issue for me, Ted. At least not penis size. At the time, I thought that maybe David was afraid that I'd think he was inadequate, but afterwards, when I started thinking about that night, I started seeing it from different perspectives and I came up with all sorts of reasons for his behaviour. It's funny how you can see things so differently now matter how irrational they may be. Somehow I'd convinced myself that David was straight and yet he wanted to stay in Canada so badly that he was willing to suck cock for it. Even black cock. The fact that he'd find getting a blowjob from a gay black man so abhorrent didn't even sound odd to me. It's funny how your mind works sometimes."

"I know, Brook," I told him seriously but with a smile. "Believe me. You're talking to an expert at screwing up rationality. Sometimes, when you get your mind set on something, rationality goes right out the window and you see only what you convince yourself you're seeing."

Brook returned the smile and nodded his head in understanding. "Anyway, it took me a long time that night to convince David that I truly wanted to return the favour. I'll be honest, Ted. By that time, I really wanted to see him naked. I'd never been with anyone that short and I was. . . ‘intrigued', shall we say. I finally convinced him to let me do it and then it took even longer for me to get him to relax enough for him to even get an erection. I almost gave up trying, but I guess his feelings became too much for his inhibitions to handle and I finally got a reaction out of him. After that, there weren't any more reservations. I told you before, I think, that David's a grower. He certainly isn't inadequate when he grows. He may be small in stature but certainly isn't small in the endowment department. And I'm not kidding when I tell you the guy's got a helluva body on him. You've seen most of it already. But the size of his dick isn't why I fell in love with him, just as you've said you didn't fall in love with Brad because of his size. David seemed so full of love and tenderness that night, and I thought he was the most gentle and caring man I've ever been with. It was only later, when I realised that I was falling in love with him, that I began to question his motives.

"I have this nagging feeling that I'm making another mistake, Ted. How can I be sure that David is being honest with me, that he's not just using me for his own ends and that he won't dump me the moment he gets what he wants out of me? How can I believe him when he tells me he loves me? When I think about it now, everything he's done for me can be so easily faked."

It was time to reach into my sleeve for the hidden ace. "Because, my friend, when David looks at you, he has the same look in his eyes that Brad gets when he looks at me, and I know Brad loves me."

"That doesn't prove anything, Ted," Brook objected. "Anyone can fake that. Hell, even Paul Barnardo could fake looking at me like that if he really wanted something from me bad enough."

I played the ace. "Would he get an erection just by kissing you, though?"

"What?"

"When David kissed you awhile ago, you gave him a hardon. You can't fake that, Brook. Erections don't lie."

I left Brook to contemplate my words as I went into the house to grab cold beers for the grown-ups (the only one we would have that day because David would be driving home later) and pop for Justin and Jeremy. I threw together a plate of cookies and snack cakes as well. I didn't know if my words would help Brook, but I hoped they would. I didn't want him to make the same mistakes I had made, especially by doubting David the way I had doubted Brad. I had almost lost my entire family with my stupid thinking and paranoias. I certainly didn't want to see the same thing happen to Brook and David before their relationship even had a chance to really take root.

I made a quick detour upstairs to grab our cameras while I was inside so I could get some pictures of our little party and, especially, the twins playing with their uncle and father. Brook was still sitting there on the patio, just as I'd left him. He was still sitting under the shade of the pergola and still staring at ‘the boys' as they played with the Hot Wheels.

"Snacks and pop and beer!" I called out to them as I set the tray onto a small patio table. The twins came running with enormous and hungry grins on their faces as I snatched up the camera and began snapping pictures. David and Brad followed behind, walking instead of running, but laughing and joking and smiling and looking just as happy as the twins. I noticed for the first time that, since David had coloured his hair to a more natural shade, he did, in fact, resemble a smaller version of Brad, just as his niece, Lori Smith, had once said. Still, they made a beautiful and (if I might add) sexy pair as they walked side-by-side toward me. David was wiping the sweat from his face and chest with his T-shirt as he walked. Brad carried his in his hand.

"Can we go swimming, Daddy?" Justin asked.

"It's hot," Jeremy added for good measure.

"In a little while," I said. "After your snacks, okay?"

"Okay," they replied in unison as they grabbed their favourite snacks onto a small paper plate and, with pop in hand, sat cross-legged on a couple of cushions I'd tossed onto the patio for them.

"Wish I'd known we were coming here," David said as he indicated his ragged cut-offs. "I can't swim in these shorts, can I?"

"Dad wouldn't like it much, no," I replied. "You're wearing underwear, though, aren't you?"

"Yeah."

"Could you wear them on a beach and not get arrested?"

"I don't know," David said. He was grinning widely and snickering as he looked at Brook. "Would I?"

"You're wearing the light green ones, aren't you?"

"Yeah."

"Do they cover everything?" I asked.

David laughed out loud this time. "Yeah, they do." He quickly unbuttoned the denim shorts and slid the zipper down, spreading the shorts to show the briefs beneath and quickly spun around and flashed his backside. They were adequately decent even if Mom and Dad came home early.

"They'll do," I told him.

"Great!" he said as he did up his shorts again. "Brook's are just like mine except they're more teal. He can swim in those." He grabbed his beer and took a chair beside Brook.

"You noticed?" Brook asked. He sounded surprised.

"I always notice," David replied with a wink and a huge smile.

"Can we wear our underwears too, Daddy?" Justin asked excitedly.

"No," I said. "You can wear your swimsuits like your Daddy Brad and me."

The twins' faces slouched into a sad pout, their bottom lips pushing out and looking puppy dog sad. "Uncle David can wear his underwears," Justin said.

"So does Uncle Brook," Jeremy added as sadly as his brother. "Why we can't, too?"

"No," I said more emphatically.

"Aw, come on, Pops," Brad said with his chipped-tooth grin. "Lighten up. Let's all go swimming in our underwear. What can it hurt?"

"Yeah, Daddy," Justin said. "What can it hurt?"

Needless to say, after we all stopped laughing, I relented and we all went swimming in our ‘underwears'. Now, I tell you this for a reason. We all had lots of fun, swimming and diving and laughing and playing in the pool, but not once was there anything close to the beginnings of an erection from any of us. We were all the epitome of decent and proper gentlemen. It was only afterward, when Brad took the twins inside to go pee, that they wanted me to take a few pictures of them together. I was surprised to find out that they didn't have a single picture of the two of them in the same shot. They were still dressed only in their underwear but weren't the least bit embarrassed to be photographed that way. I snapped a few pictures of them standing side-by-side with one arm around each other's back, chest-to-chest and hugging each other, and with David sitting in Brook's lap with his arms wrapped around Brook's neck. For one of them, David sat sprawled out on a chaise lounger, his legs crossed at the ankle. Brook knelt behind David, wrapping his arms around his lover's chest from behind and a few pictures of him bending his head around to kiss David on the cheek. For a finale, Brook stood up beside the chaise and bent over David to kiss him directly on the lips. I took several photos of the kiss from beginning to end and, when it was finished, David's briefs had expanded considerably.

Later, I showed those printed pictures to Brook when David was busy elsewhere. He seemed genuinely surprised by what he saw as if he'd never noticed David's reactions to him before. "Well I'll be damned," he said quietly as he closely examined the pictures which clearly showed the growth at the joint of David's muscular and deeply-tanned legs. Brook looked at me then and said, "It's really me that does it to him, isn't it?" he asked quietly. "I wasn't imagining it."

I didn't reply. I didn't have to. Brook's question had been rhetorical. He'd finally answered a question he'd been asking himself for weeks. When he looked back down at that picture of David again, I saw that familiar look in his eye once more. This time, though, the look was magnified by the moisture of tears just waiting to be born.

To Be Continued
 
Great chapter, I can tell that you are feeling at least a little bit better:D
 
Yes, glad Brook is feeling better about David.
Another wonderful Chapter Neil!!! Thank you
 
WATCHING BRAD
Part 200​

We had done our best throughout the entire weekend trying to prepare Jeremy for the moment that Brad would have to leave for work on Monday morning. When that moment finally arrived however, when Brad climbed into his truck at seven o'clock and drove away, Jeremy stood beside me near the drive, holding my hand and watching until Brad's truck turned onto the road and disappeared from sight. And then he stood there for a minute or so longer.

I was just about to switch myself into serious ‘Daddy' mode and deal with the situation when Justin, who was holding my other hand, leaned forward and looked around me at his brother. "He promised, Jeremy. Daddy Brad won't lie."

Jeremy continued staring down the driveway for a few moments longer before looking up at me. I thought perhaps he would hold me responsible once again for Brad going away but he didn't. "He'll be home for supper, my Sonskyn," I told him.

Jeremy said nothing in response but his eyes made it clear to me that he had adopted a ‘wait and see' attitude. I suspected he would doubt our words until he saw his Daddy Brad home later that afternoon.

Fortunately, Jeremy became distracted when Terry showed up that morning and he and Justin began telling her all about the fun they'd had the day before running around the back yard and swimming and playing in their ‘underwears'. Dad listened intently as he had the other forty-seven times the twins had related their story since the afternoon before. Mom and Lindsay were quite bored with it, however, and couldn't be bothered listening to it anymore.

The first thing I did when I got to work was to phone the architect and make an appointment to go see him about the changes to the house we wanted to make. I'd taken a copy of the house plans to work with me. I was told that I could see him any time between ten and eleven o'clock. I was there promptly at ten and got in to see him almost immediately.

"My secretary tells me you tried to burn down my bathroom," Trevor grinned as he shook my hand in greeting.

"Actually," I replied without a grin, "your bathroom was practically the only thing left standing."

Trevor's face dropped. "Oh, geez," he said apologetically. "Me and my big mouth. I'm sorry. Was it really that bad?"

I nodded my head. "Pretty-much totalled," I told him.

His face became awash with sympathy. "Shit. That really sucks. I hope you can forgive me."

"Forgiven and forgotten," I told him. "But that's why I'm here. We bought some plans to build a new house but there are a few changes we'd like to make to it. I'm hoping you can do them for us, and we're kind of in a rush."

"So, you don't even have a house now?"

"Nope. We're living with my parents just outside of town."

Trevor became all business then, pulling his shoulders back and taking a professional stance. "Right. Are those the plans?" he asked, nodding toward the cardboard tube tucked beneath my arm.

I handed him the tube. He took it and popped off the lid and began pulling out the plans as he walked toward a drafting table. I followed him. "Right. Let's see what we've got here." He unrolled the plans onto the table and weighted down the corners to keep them flat. His practiced eyes quickly scanned the floor plans as his index finger traced a few of the lines. He nodded his head as he did so. "Nice," he said softly. "Very nice." He turned his head toward me and our eyes met. "So, what do you need done?"

I quickly explained to him that I wanted the stairway changed from a curved staircase to L-shape with a landing at the elbow.

"Easy enough," he said. "Anything else?"

"I want to know how hard it would be to put a small basement under the diningroom here," I explained as I pointed, "and I want to know if this closet under the stairs can be turned into a stairway down. I want the stairway to be wide enough for us to get a freezer down there."

Trevor scanned the plans again. "Yes and yes. Finished basement?"

"No," I replied, "but I want it wired and drained."

His finger scanned the plans and he nodded again. "Right. I can hook you up to the weeping system no problem. The wiring would be up to your electrician. I assume you want the basement head height?"

"At least."

Again he scanned the plans. "I can give you two metres no problem. Any more and it will take a bit of finagling."

"Two metres is plenty," I told him. "It's just for storage."

It was done. Trevor quoted his price and, because of his little gaff earlier, assured me that it was a quick and simple job and he promised to have the plans done for pickup by Friday at the very latest. His secretary would call me if they were available earlier.

With that little chore finished much more quickly than I had anticipated, I phoned Terry and told her what I wanted her to do, then went back to work until the appointed time. Terry was waiting in the parking lot for me when I went out and we exchanged keys as we had planned. She handed me the keys to the van and I gave her the keys to my car. The bags she'd packed at my request were on the front seat. She left me there and set off back to Maple Grove where she would drop off my car and pick up her own car, and then she would take the afternoon off - with pay, of course. I drove the van to the soccer camp to pick up Justin and Jeremy. They didn't know it, but they would be spending the afternoon with me. Heck, I didn't even know it until an hour or so before. I was making it all up as I went along.

The twins were excited to see me and came tearing across the soccer field toward me with Justin in the lead. Lindsay came over as well, walking beside Daniel who was carrying both of their lunches. I knelt to meet the onrush and the twins greeted me with lots of hugs and kisses and plenty of excited chatter before Lindsay and Daniel arrived.

"Hi, Dad."

"Hi, Sweetheart. Hello, Daniel."

"Hi, Mr. de Villiers," came his reply.

"How would you guys like to go to dinner with me and the boys?" I asked, still kneeling with my arms still wrapped around the twins.

"We have our lunches here," Daniel said as he held them up.

"You can eat them later," I told him. "Do you have a cell phone to call your parents and ask if you can go with us?"

Daniel just shook his head back and forth. "That's okay. I don't have to ask."

I reached into my pocket for my cell phone and handed it to him. "I'd rather you call and get their permission. Sweetheart, could you show him how to work the phone, please? I'm going to get the boys changed."

As the twins undressed in the back, I sorted out their clothes from the bag Terry had packed and handed them to my sons. Then, as they got themselves dressed again, I talked to Daniel's mother to affirm her permission to allow Daniel to go with us.

Pizza was the unanimous decision so off we went to a place I knew which served individual slices. The kids could select all their favourite toppings. We went to a nearby Dairy Queen for an ice cream dessert after which I dropped Lindsay and Daniel off for their afternoon session at soccer camp. There would be only four more afternoon sessions before the camp wrapped up for the season. With Justin and Jeremy safely buckled in their car seats behind me, we set off for the grocery store and to what I hoped would be a happy surprise for Jeremy.

The twins knelt in the basket of the shopping cart as I pushed it into the store, past the checkout counters at the front, and toward the deli at the far side of the store. There was only one other customer at the counter - a young woman carrying one of the store hand baskets - when I steered the cart around the various shelves of bread and rolls and pastries. I moved the cart beside her and stopped. Brad's broad back was facing us as he shaved paper-thin slices of meat from a slab of roast beef. Justin and Jeremy were too busy peering through the thick glass at the large variety of deli meats and cheeses to notice him.

A young lady, dressed in the same uniform as Brad, was wiping clean the sliding carriage of the other slicer. She was shorter than Brad, but not as short as David. Her hair was long and pulled back in a pony tail. It was only slightly darker than Brad's hair. Like Brad, she wore a hair net on her head and a store baseball-style cap. She quickly finished her chore and approached the counter saying, "May I help you?"

"We're just waiting," I said softly and nodded toward Brad.

She glanced quickly at Brad and a cheerful smile split her face. "Oh, I know who you are. You're. . ."

But I cut her short with a touch of my finger to my lips. She glanced at Brad again, then back to me and touched the side of her nose with one finger. She understood. She then turned her attention to my sons, standing up on her tiptoes so she could see them over the counter. "Oh. Aren't they just adorable."

"Thank you," I replied softly and, just as I did, Brad scooped up the shaved beef from the slicer and turned around to place it on the scale atop the counter, weigh it, pack it in a small plastic bag, attach the price label, and hand it to the young lady with the grocery basket. He didn't notice me standing there.

"Will there be anything else?" he asked politely. His smile was professionally friendly and enough to send a rush of blood into my nether regions.

She quickly replied, "That's all for today, thank you."

But Jeremy had recognised Brad's voice and was scrambling to his feet in the cart even as she spoke. The woman was just taking the package from Brad's hand when Jeremy shouted, "Daddy Brad!!"

The woman beside me jumped, almost dropping her package, but then she quickly composed herself and made her exit. By that time, Justin was also standing up in the cart beside his twin brother. Brad beamed at the kids. "Hi, Jeremy. Hey, Justin." He added a simple ‘hi' to me as well.

"Sharon, this is my husband, Ted," he proudly told the store clerk standing beside him, "and these are our sons. This one is Jeremy and this one is Justin."

Sharon's hand stretched over the counter, offering it for me to shake, which I did. "It's so good to finally meet you," she said politely. "Brad's told me all about all of you." She rose once more to her tiptoes and looked over the counter. "Your daughter not with you?" she asked.

"No. She's at soccer camp," I explained. "I thought the boys would like to see where their other father works. I hope you don't mind."

"Oh, of course not," she said with a wave of her hand. To Brad she said, "I'll clean up for you, Brad." To us, she said, "It was so nice meeting you."

"The pleasure was all mine," I smiled.

Brad leaned his arms against the countertop looking down at the boys and smiling. "How was soccer?"

Justin replied, "Fun!" but Jeremy said, "Can I stay with you?"

"I'm afraid not, Champ," Brad told him. "I'm working and you're not allowed to come back here."

"Okay," Jeremy mumbled with undisguised disappointment.

We had to step back a bit then and wait as Brad tended to a customer. Jeremy's eyes were locked on him, watching his every move and marvelling anew at a process he had seen done many, many times. Somehow, though, it was much more interesting to him as he watched his Daddy Brad doing it.

As we waited, Sharon peered over the counter and distracted Jeremy long enough to ask, "Do you boys like pepperettes?"

The boys looked at me. "Do we, Daddy?"

"I don't know that they've ever had them," I told Sharon.

She slid open the glass door behind the counter, grabbed a pepperette and broke it in half, handing each of my sons one of the pieces. They thanked her in tandem. Jeremy's attention immediately returned to Brad as he absentmindedly munched on his half of the pepperette. Justin, on the other hand, took one tentative bite and chewed slowly, then spun around to face me with a very satisfied smile of approval on his face. He held out his pepperette for me to take a bite. I returned his smile of approval.

We didn't stay much longer after that. Brad had work to do and so did I. I had only taken Jeremy there so he could see for himself that Brad hadn't abandoned him yet again. Ultimately, when Brad came home for supper later that afternoon as he had promised, Jeremy's ‘wait and see' attitude disappeared and didn't return.

Before we left the store, I bought some honey ham (which Brad sliced for us), some pre-sliced Swiss cheese, some cheese rolls from the bakery department nearby, a small tub of margarine, and a squeeze bottle of mustard in case the twins started feeling peckish later in the afternoon. Oh, and I bought a dozen pepperettes to wash down the sandwiches.

Justin and Jeremy played quietly on the floor of my office with the toys I'd asked Terry to pack for them. Twice, when they thought I wasn't paying attention to them, they snuck out of my office and skedaddled to JWs office to get a treat from his candy bar drawer. I'd already talked to him about keeping their sweet treats to one bar to share and he said he would. The last thing I needed was for them to be bouncing off the walls in my office and around the shop.

David joined us for supper that evening. He'd spent the day working in the back yard at the house with Mark and had brought a change of clothes so he could accompany me and Brad when we went to hire Grant to build our new house. I'd called Grant on Sunday before David and Brook went back home to Toronto. We set up the appointment to meet at Grant's house at eight o'clock.

We arrived at the scheduled time to iron out details and to make the final arrangements. We would also discuss a few concerns I had, the most important of which was a question I had once asked of Grant and used his response as an excuse for not building the big house. I asked the question again, hoping that his response might change to the affirmative. "Are you sure you can't finish the house by Christmas?"

His response was immediate and abrupt. "Yes," he said, his head bowed slightly. "I'm sure."

My heart sank and my shoulders sagged. "I was really hoping you'd be able to so our kids would be in their own home for Christmas."

Grand just smiled mischievously and looked at me from beneath his bushy eyebrows. "Well, now. I didn't say they wouldn't, did I?"

I was stunned and confused. "But. . . but you just said. . ."

"I know what I just said, Ted," he added, cutting my sentence short. "I told you I couldn't finish your house, but I didn't say anything about not getting you inside it in time for Christmas."

Now I was stunned and confused and completely baffled. "I'm sorry. I don't understand," I told him bluntly. "How?"

Grant leaned back into his chair and sucked in a deep breath before speaking again. The corners of his lips were still curved up in that mischievous little grin. "The builder I intend to use won't be completely available to do any serious building until well into September. Maybe even early October, depending on the weather. Until then, he can only send in a skeleton crew which can at least get the foundations poured. Cam charges a bit more than usual, but his work is exceptional and he's worth every single penny extra. His father started the business just after World War Two in 1946 and Cam's been running it since the early eighties.

"Now, when it comes to building houses, they can do miracles on television, like that show with the loud-mouthed git in the droopy jeans who builds a house in a week, but we don't have the luxury of thousands of people helping us. There's no way we can build your house by Christmas, especially with winter coming on, but there's a way to get you inside by then if you're willing to put up with a bit of inconvenience and pop for the few extra grand it would cost."

I looked at Brad and his eyes told me he was with me all the way. To Grant, I said, "Yeah. Sure. Tell us what you need."

Grant stood up and exited the room, returning shortly with his copy of the floor plans. He unrolled them onto the table. "Here's what we do. We concentrate on the downstairs and finish it enough for it to pass inspection and be livable. Then we temporarily close off the foyer at the front livingroom and from the laundry room to the stairway, here and here." He drew his finger along the lines to show us where he meant. Effectively, he closed off the foyer and made the upstairs accessible only from the front door. "You'll have to enter and exit the house through the garage and laundry room or the back door for awhile but, as long as you have all the amenities on the ground floor - kitchen and bathroom - we can treat that floor as your living space and the unfinished upstairs as a reno. So, you'll be living downstairs while we're working upstairs. They'll probably still be doing some finishing downstairs, too. Painting. Trim. Stuff like that. That's where the inconvenience come in, but it shouldn't be too bad. When the upstairs is finished, we tear down the temporary walls and do the finishing work there."

"Is that legal?" Brad asked.

"Ask your father that question, Brad," Grant said. "He'll give you the same answer as I would. As long as the living space passes inspection, it's perfectly legal. It wouldn't be any different than building an addition to your house."

Grant answered my other questions and assured me that he could and would build me a house which was better than minimum code. He also assured me that he would make it as fireproof as he possibly could as long as I was willing to pay the extra money that it would cost. When he told me approximately how much the improvements would add to the budget which, in the grand scheme of things was practically negligible, I felt I would be failing my family horribly if I didn't go with the best. I'm sure, if the people were told the cost, they would gladly pay it to have a better and safer home.

We sealed the deal with a handshake. Signatures would come later when the contracts were properly written up. Grant would build our new house for us. He'd already been working ‘behind the scenes' as it were and he assured us that work would begin in earnest very soon.

David ingratiated himself to Grant after that as we sat together at the diningroom table enjoying fresh cups of coffee. He quickly drew Grant into a discussion of differing building codes between Canada and the United States and convinced Grant to share his photo album of his building accomplishments. By the time we left for home and sent David on his way back to Toronto, he had the name, address, and phone number of the construction company which Grant was going to hire to build our house. Both Brad and I got a huge hug and kiss on the lips for doing little more than introducing David to Grant. David, it seemed, was one step closer to seeing his dreams fulfilled.

‘Soon' came much faster than I expected. The very next afternoon, Grant phoned me at work.

"Is the house ready for demolition?" he asked.

"What?" I said. "Already?"

"Saturday morning," he replied, "if it's ready."

"I suppose it's as ready as it's ever going to be," I told him. "We just have to dismantle the hot tub and deck."

"Can you get it done by Saturday?"

I assured Grant that it would be done. I did that with my fingers crossed, hoping that David would be able to get it done for me.

Meanwhile, Brad and I scoured the apartment listings throughout the week and found only five new listings in our school district. We dismissed three of them immediately merely from their descriptions and made appointments to see the other two. One was extremely reasonably priced and more than adequate in size, but a small apartment complex was under construction right beside it. We left it on our list as a remote possibility if we couldn't find anything else. We didn't even get inside the door of the other one when Brad and I showed up for viewing. The woman was already there waiting for us.

She was smiling when she greeted us, but looked around me and Brad, one side and then the other. "Oh, dear," she said. "I was hoping to meet your wife."

"I don't have a wife," I told her.

An undeniable look of confusion fell over her face. "But you said you were married?"

"We are," Brad said.

Her look of confusion melted into a look of disgust and abhorrence. "I'll see you burning in Hell before I rent this apartment to you!" she said.

"You can't do that," I told her. "It's discrimination."

"So, sue me!" she shouted and slammed the door in our faces.

Had it been worth the bother, and had I thought it might possibly teach the woman a lesson, I might have done so. Fortunately for her, I had too many more important matters on my plate at the moment to worry about her ignorance and attitudes and archaic beliefs.

Thursday evening, with help from Barry and Nathan and David, we carried the empty, heavy hot tub over the stone wall into the Hayes' backyard where it would stay until we figured out what we wanted to do with it. David and Mark had already completely dismantled the deck and fence and it now lay in neatly-bundled piles behind John's house

The house was ready for demolition.

Bright and early Saturday morning, my entire family drove into town for the big event. We took lawn chairs with us and set them up on the lawn in front of Brad's parents' house. Everyone came to watch - Barry and Nathan, David and Brook. Grant, of course, was there to supervise everything. He wore his white ‘supervisor' hard hat and had brought matching miniature hats for the twins. Their eyes flew open wider than I'd ever seen them go and they screamed in delight when Grant handed them over. Justin and Jeremy wore them with great pride and refused to take them off for any reason. Bill and Warren, who had got caught up in traffic just outside of Mississauga, arrived later in the morning. Even Terry came by to watch and help Mom and Bernice with lunch.

The huge flatbed truck carrying the large demolition backhoe arrived shortly after nine o'clock. The twins watched intently from where they sat on the grass at the property line as the workmen set up the heavy-duty ramps at the back of the flatbed. The gigantic machine was fired up and slowly began to roll down the ramp on its caterpillar treads. It dug deep, mangled trenches into the grass as it crossed the front lawn, ultimately taking up station near the burnt-out shell of our house.

"What is it doing, Daddy?" Justin asked as he climbed into my lap and settled himself in position so he could watch the proceedings. To my right, Jeremy climbed into Brad's lap. Our friends and family all sat or stood around us. A few neighbours and passers-by had gathered as well by this time, observing from their chosen vantage points on both sides of the street.

We'd already explained to the kids that the house would be torn down that morning. Lindsay understood what that meant, but it was apparent that Justin and Jeremy didn't. "They're going to smash it all apart with the big machine so we can build a new house."

"Like when we break the Lego houses?" Jeremy asked from his perch on Brad's lap.

"So we can build new houses?" Justin added.

"Yes," I said. "Just like that."

We talked amongst ourselves as Grant did what he does best until he stepped back near the street. The chatter was soon drowned out by the sound of the mighty machine as the engine roared to life. I held my breath as the arm of the backhoe stretched and lifted high into the air. The bucket hovered over the roof, its jaws open wide and ready to devour the final link to our past. Time seemed to stand still as a million memories my life in that house flooded through my mind in a single instant. A huge lump formed in my throat, threatening to choke me and my stomach turned flip-flops inside me. My heart raced and pounded within my chest.

And then. . .

With a might roar and a mightier crash, the bucket came down onto the roof, smashing through it as if it were made of Tinker Toys and reducing the roof to splinters. The huge arm continued unrelentingly downward, tearing through the wall with a crunching sound that sent shivers up and down my. It raised into the air once more and the machine rotated slightly before the bucket ripped through our house once more.

Again and again.

Justin lifted his hand from his lap and waved with his fingers. "Goodbye, house," he said sadly before laying his hard hat-clad head against my shoulder.

By lunch time, the remains of the house were being loaded onto a continuous succession of dump trucks and being taken away for disposal.

By the time we went home to Maple Grove that evening, I owned a huge hole in the ground.

To Be Continued
 
WOW Chapter 200! What a story this is and very deserving of a 5-star rating!
Now that the old house is gone a building of a new home and more ventures to their lives. This is so exciting!!!!
Thank you Neil.
 
this storey just keeps getting better and better, cant wait for more.
 
Congrats on 200 Neil....I've enjoyed every step along the way.

You're a great friend for sharing your marvellous writing talent with us all.

Thank you.

Trent
 
Oopsie

I've run into a bit of a stumbling block. For a long time, I've been working toward something in the story. I had it all worked out in my head and began writing it in this next chapter. However, as I wrote, I also began researching it more intently and now I'm not at all certain that it could or would happen.

I know it's just a story and I shouldn't worry about it too much but, if it doesn't make sense and seem realistic to me, it won't make sense and be realistic to you, either.

If I can figure out a way to make it work, I'll finish the chapter. If, however, I decide it was a stupid idea, I'll have to come up with something else and rewrite most of the chapter. I've had this idea in mind since I decided to burn down the house after the wedding, so I hope I can make it work somehow.
 
Oopsie

I've run into a bit of a stumbling block.

If I can figure out a way to make it work, I'll finish the chapter. If, however, I decide it was a stupid idea, I'll have to come up with something else and rewrite most of the chapter. I've had this idea in mind since I decided to burn down the house after the wedding, so I hope I can make it work somehow.


:eek: I thought it was a Lightning strike!!! :cry: #-o :help:
 
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