HI, JD.
Welcome to JUB and the Story Forum, and Neil's fantastic tale of 21st Century Canadian Life!
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SBLove,
If you've read all the chapters and comments, you know Neil has a degenerative condition that has made his writing efforts more difficult. He' still working on his writing, as pain allows.
He's bee somewhat preoccupied the last couple of weeks. He had a bit of a spill on his way back from the store and, well.
he can tell it best - Here:
http://www.justusboys.com/forum/threads/416529-On-my-way-to-the-hospital
If you've read all the chapters and comments, you know Neil has a degenerative condition that has made his writing efforts more difficult. He' still working on his writing, as pain allows.
He's bee somewhat preoccupied the last couple of weeks. He had a bit of a spill on his way back from the store and, well.
he can tell it best - Here:
http://www.justusboys.com/forum/threads/416529-On-my-way-to-the-hospital
He's doing pretty well - use the link up at post 3316 to see for yourself - Neil's posting fairly regularly over there - be part of the conversation.
well after my 5 read I still love this story
waiting for our next instalment hope it cums real soon
I will pop on over and give Jason another read
as there both great reads,
all the best Neil hope your on the road to recover and felling a lot better.
Robbie ( A Kiwi Friend)
waiting for our next instalment hope it cums real soon
I will pop on over and give Jason another read
as there both great reads,
all the best Neil hope your on the road to recover and felling a lot better.
Robbie ( A Kiwi Friend)
"Ted is not afraid of this," she said, indicating Brad and I cuddling together on the sofa." ---Neil, you often confuse the object pronoun "me" and the subject pronoun "I". I have noticed it before but have not commented. The writing is so good, I want it to be perfect. The above quote should be "indicating Brad and me cuddling together on the sofa."
^ In order for me to write a perfect story, I, too, would have to be perfect.
I am not.
Believe me when I tell you that there are many other 'errors' in the story besides the 'I/me' confusion. The story is far from perfect, as am I.
I am not.
Believe me when I tell you that there are many other 'errors' in the story besides the 'I/me' confusion. The story is far from perfect, as am I.
Neil,
I just want to say thank you for the wonderful story. I wouldn't pay any attention to the poster above, regarding "grammar". Some people get a kick out out of pointing out others errors. It's a shame that your latest post had to be a response to such pettiness. I discovered this story, about 7 years ago. I've been in love with it ever since. I don't come here to give you a grade in English, I came because your story gives me hope that true love is out there still. Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to your next installment.
Regards,
Grant
I just want to say thank you for the wonderful story. I wouldn't pay any attention to the poster above, regarding "grammar". Some people get a kick out out of pointing out others errors. It's a shame that your latest post had to be a response to such pettiness. I discovered this story, about 7 years ago. I've been in love with it ever since. I don't come here to give you a grade in English, I came because your story gives me hope that true love is out there still. Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to your next installment.
Regards,
Grant
It's so heartening to see your recent post Neil. We've been told how much you've been going through and its sad for us fans because you've given us so much enjoyment and we have no way to repay you. Like possum, I'm a fairly recent fan - maybe two years. I'm probably currently on my 10+ read. I even have complete chapter notes as to what is covered in each. My wife says I obsess - she's right. I want to throttle Ted and kiss Brad's ass. So, just want to add my voice to all your fans and thank you for your wonderful contribution to literature.
Grant,
You say pointing out grammar mistakes is pettiness? I think not. Neil is a great writer. I am offering him some help. If you think this is being petty, I apologize to you. You tell Neil not to pay attention to my posts. I am sorry you feel that way. People all over the States and Canada are making this mistake. I don't want to see it become an accepted part of our language. I understand language is ever evolving and I am doing my best to help it evolve without too many glaring mistakes.
All the best to you,
Slaght
You say pointing out grammar mistakes is pettiness? I think not. Neil is a great writer. I am offering him some help. If you think this is being petty, I apologize to you. You tell Neil not to pay attention to my posts. I am sorry you feel that way. People all over the States and Canada are making this mistake. I don't want to see it become an accepted part of our language. I understand language is ever evolving and I am doing my best to help it evolve without too many glaring mistakes.
All the best to you,
Slaght
I know the rules. I know the difference between 'your' and 'you're' or 'then' and 'than'. I even know when to use 'who' and when to use 'whom'. However, in the heat of impassioned writing, mistakes sneak through. It is one thing to criticise the story. It is another to criticise the grammar, especially when one's own grammar is questionable.
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Hi, slaght. 
Welcome to JUB! Great to have You aboard!
However, Buddy ... I know how much work has gone into Neil's stories, and even the proof reading done by another JUBber. And, though You are Right, as Neil has pointed out, in the "heat of the moment", there are some MINOR things that can slip through.
Some might seem that pointing those little bits out could be considered "nit picking".
Is grammar Important? Yes, it is!
Butt (And, yes, I wrote it that way on purpose
), there can also be such a thing as "splitting hairs", and not seeing the Forest for the Trees! ](/images/smilies/bang.gif "Brick wall ](*,)")
I hope You can understand that You're pointing those "niggley" bits out, though commendable, can also be taken as Excessive, and overly "persnickety".
All I'm trying to say is, though You're motives are certainly Positive, and as well meant as You're intentions may be, given the overall writing that You're criticizing, the advice You're offering may not be all that appreciated.
That doesn't mean "We" don't like YOU, though!
Just more reasons to ... No Matter What ...
Keep Smiln'!!
Chaz
Welcome to JUB! Great to have You aboard!
However, Buddy ... I know how much work has gone into Neil's stories, and even the proof reading done by another JUBber. And, though You are Right, as Neil has pointed out, in the "heat of the moment", there are some MINOR things that can slip through.
Some might seem that pointing those little bits out could be considered "nit picking".
Is grammar Important? Yes, it is!
Butt (And, yes, I wrote it that way on purpose
), there can also be such a thing as "splitting hairs", and not seeing the Forest for the Trees! I hope You can understand that You're pointing those "niggley" bits out, though commendable, can also be taken as Excessive, and overly "persnickety".
All I'm trying to say is, though You're motives are certainly Positive, and as well meant as You're intentions may be, given the overall writing that You're criticizing, the advice You're offering may not be all that appreciated.
That doesn't mean "We" don't like YOU, though!
Just more reasons to ... No Matter What ...
Keep Smiln'!!
Chaz