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Where Have You Been?

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This story is based on real events from my college life, and the years after that leading up to where I am now at age 26. Just warning you that it's not a huge porn brawl, so don't expect cocks to flop in chapter 1 ;).

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Where Have You Been?
Chapter 1: Who...who are you?

Unlike high school, college was the best experience of my life. Gone were the preps, the jocks, the freaks, the hopefuls and the fucking disenfranchised. Away from the peer pressure and social insecurities from their hometowns, everyone seemed to be on equal footing. Everyone eager to meet new people and experience new things. By way of strange events, I even met my best friend in college.

In my sophomore year my grades weren't the best they could be, so I decided to take some easy courses to help raise my GPA. I was born in Venezuela, but moved to the United States shortly after my birth. Because of my heritage and already fluent knowledge of the Spanish language, Spanish class just made sense.
The first day of class was as mundane as ever with introductions and syllabuses galore, when in walked the most flamboyant guy I'd seen at that point in my life. Loud in both personality and attire, with his electric yellow graphic t-shit, teal jeans, and multicolored hi-tops. And of all the bodies in that classroom, he chose to gravitate straight towards me. "Hey, what's your name?" he asks as if a spotlight had been burning in my direction. In a very confused and shocked manner I managed to muster out "D...Dan". That was me, Daniel Vasquez, and I'd never have known then that we'd be friends for life after that.

His name was Will...Will Thompson. He carried a stocky, soft muscular build on his 5'9 frame. I found out that before his highly coveted Freshmen 15 gains that he was a former state-level diver for his high school. Although with his hairy body, I can't imagine he'd tread water all that good. He lived in the campus dorms and made some spending money doing Night-Watch, a sort of student run security for his building, twice a week on Tuesdays and Thursdays from 10pm until 4am. And twice a week I joined him in good laughs and good times.

He was gay and totally proud of it although his family, a line of conventional Black Christians, didn't approve. At that time I was still adjusting to being known as gay, however I didn't hide the fact if asked, which wasn't too often. But what I was mostly known for was my ambiguous nationality, as no one could quite figure out what I was. My mother is Venezuelan and White, and my father Black and Japanese. Both born and raised American citizens, who's genetic combination created me.

Constantly confused for Middle Eastern, East Indian or Puerto Rican; my naturally tanned skin and strong European features created an everlasting conundrum for onlookers. I stood tall at 6'1", weighing in just under 180lbs. I had a lean, somewhat muscular build due to years of athletics and running. My dark brown eyes matching my soft, wavy dark brown hair that I kept close cropped. Friends often referred to me as J. Lo because of my most standout feature...my ass. It was definitely something noticeable in even the most loose fitting of jeans.

Winter came with a vengeance as is typical of any Michigan winter. The bone-chilling weather seemed to have no effect on the student body, all who were heading out for a night at the bars. A couple hours later while watching a movie during a Night-Watch session we heard a loud bang from outside, followed by the sound of voices. Will and I, looking confused, kept watch on the door as 4 guys came shuffling in moments later. They seemed to be carrying something heavy. As they all stumbled closer to check-in, that something turned out to be someone. Another member of their group who'd gotten pretty wasted and passed out I'd imagine.

"Umm...what the hell happened to Erik?" asked Will in a worried, yet slightly condescending way.

"Haha...this guy couldn't handle his liquor, my man!" laughed one of the ones holding him.

"Just go on ahead. I'll check you guys in. Make sure he's alright." responded Will.

Another of them looked on said "Will do, s..."

!!! SLAM !!!

Before he could complete his sentence, someone lost their grip and the unconscious body met the ground with a heavy thud. The look of "Holy Shit" was displayed across their faces as they mentally started assigning blame to one another. In an instant I rushed toward the fallen soldier, making sure the guy didn't need medical attention. That drop was something serious.

"Hey...buddy...you alright?" every word coming in between quick slaps to the face to try and wake him up. The body started stirring to consciousness at my attempts. A sharp intake of air let me know that he was coming to. A sigh of relief passed throughout the group of guys as his eyes started to open. It was then that I was meet with the most gorgeous set of hazel-green, bedroom eyes. I was so mesmerized that every muscle in my body lost function. Swooning so bad that I hadn't noticed the look of complete confusion formed on his face.

"Who...who are you?" he questioned me while trying to get a grip on his surroundings. His voice was deep, and husky.

"I'm Dan." I answered.

In an instant he burst out in a laughter that bellowed through the mostly empty corridors of the dorms. Everyone looked at us as if they'd missed the punchline to some hilarious inside joke. As quickly as his laugh arrived, it was gone as he passed for what I assumed the second time that night. All was quit as everyone tried to figure out what just took place, when suddenly someone broke.

"Dude what the fuck HAHAHA!!!" screeched one of them in a fit of laughter.

"Take him to you guy's room before something else happens already!" Will was thoroughly annoyed, yet still polite while addressing them.

"YES SIR!!!" said the one who was in the laughing fit, who's name I later learned was Kevin. All 4 bent down to scoop him up with idle chatter happening amongst them. They soon disappeared down a hallway and all was quiet again.

"Don't even think about it..." came Will's voice, jarring me out of my trance.

"What are you talking about?"

"Erik and them. They may be beautiful to look at, but I know how you get with straight guys. And the last thing we need is a repeat of Matthew Shepard, hunny."

"What's that supposed to mean?" a snapped back. I was met only with a stern look.

He knew me all too well. A ton of my college hook-ups have been straight men, and I use that term loosely. The weird thing is that we haven't been able to figure out why 9 times out of 10 they approach me, rather than the other way around. The end result, however, is usually the same...someone ends up crying and bleeding. But that's neither here nor there.

"Yeah, yeah ok." I said with a chuckle and we continued watching our movie, only looking up occasionally to check-in the random student or group.

Two movies, good music and a ton of junk food later it was fast approaching 4am. I helped Will pack up for the night, I said my goodbyes. Class was a 10am, and I knew I was gonna pay for staying up this late in the morning. Right before stepping out of the dorms the urge to purge all of those liquids hit me like a ton of bricks. Though every dorm room had it's own bathroom, there were still public bathrooms on each floor. That in mind I made a b-line toward them.

Halfway through what seemed like the longest piss on Earth, the door to the bathroom opened ever so creepy. The fact that I was in a public restroom hadn't set in and I'd seen one too many horror movies were someone bites it in the bathroom so was trying desperately to stop the flow so as to not give my position away (yeah I'm a piece of work sometimes). The force was strong. I couldn't stop it. The noise continued. I let out a defeated sign.

Finally finishing, I cautiously exited the stall to see a guy slumped over the sinks. In a span of about 5 seconds I'd done a complete scan of this guys body. He was barefoot in light blue basketball shorts and a tight fitting white t-shirt. His legs, coated with a dense layer of brownish-blonde hair, were finely muscled. Every tendon and vein present and accounted for. The legs led up to what looked like a pretty decent ass. And moving on past his seemingly solid back were his arms and shoulders. Very strong looking, and without the signs of gym rat fever. Overall an amazing runners body topped off with a head of shaggy brownish-blonde hair. I couldn't make out his face and was pressed for time, so I decided to just slip by unnoticed. At least that was the plan.

"That was a mighty long snake drain you had." said a familiar, deep voice.

"Yeah well you know, when you gotta go you gotta go." I said as I turned around and load my eyes on him. On mister hazel-green eyes. He was absolutely gorgeous.

His face was slender and angular. He had a strong chin with a heavy layer of 5 o'clock shadow. The specs of blonde hair in the brown overlay glinting in the light. His cheekbones were high, met with a strong roman nose leading down to thin lips that had a hint of seduction to them. His skin colored a rich olive, due to what looked like an Italian lineage. He was sexy without even trying and I loved every second of it.

"Dan, right?"

"Huh...?"

"Dan...that's your name right? You were smacking me up out there earlier."

"Yeah I'm sorry about that, man. I was just making sure you were ok."

"Don't worry about it. I was so damn drunk I didn't know what was what. I'm Erik." he said as he stretched out his hand.

"Nice to meet you." I reached out and shook his hand. A very firm grip with light callouses. As I came in closer I realized he was a couple inches taller than my 6'1.

"Alright well I should be going. Early morning for me, so...I'll catch you later or something." I nervously said as his masculine smell invaded my senses. It was jarring that this guy was having this kind of effect on me.

"Yeah...or something..." were his last words before I quickly left and made my way out of the dorms.
 
I love the college stories. They bring back such good memories. Great start to what sounds like quite an interesting meeting. Looking forward to more about Dan and Erik.

Craiger
 
So sorry about the delay. I decided that the next chapter wasn't good enough, so I did a total re-write. But just in time is a very lengthy chapter 2.

I hope you guys all enjoy the humor, twists and turns this story takes!


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Where Have You Been?
Chapter 2: I'll drink to that!​

"I got it...Matthew McConaughey!"

"...what about him?" I asked, confused at Will's outburst.

"Erik. I think he looks like Matthew McConaughey. Well that's the closest person I can relate his looks to anyway...minus the wrinkles, and the cheap beach bum tan."

"I thought you said they were bad news?"

"Who?"

"Erik and his group..."

"They are. What's the question?" he seemed genuinely confused.

"Why are you talking about him then?"

"Because that dumbfounded look you've had on your face all week tells me you're thinking about him. So rather than detour you, I figured I'd join."

"I'm not...haven't been thinking about him." Yes I have. He was spank material the whole damn week.

"Hmm waffles and ice cream."

"Are you skitzo?" not quite interpreting what he was talking about.

"No, girl..."

(I hate it when he calls me girl.)

"...they brought out the waffles and ice cream 2 seconds ago..."

(He's gonna get fatter.)

"...so get into it, boo!"

(I'm not your boo.)

I'd made the big mistake of studying with Will in the student dinning commons; a fancy word for college cafeteria. With all of the hot guys and food as a constant distraction, I just accepted that my study partner was floating on cloud 9. Not to waste time trying to wrangle him, I dove back into my books. I felt the table shake and rattle a bit, so assumed he had returned from his smorgasbord.

"That was fast. You going back for seconds, or did you put them out of business already?" I sarcastically asked without looking up from my book.

"Well I just got here so I'm not following. What happened?" came the familiar, deep husky voice.

I looked up to see Erik staring down at me with a goofy smile that displayed his perfectly white teeth. I quickly scanned the rest of him. His eyes were as intense as ever. His tight t-shirt and jeans left little to the imagination about the perfect shape his body was in. His hair almost seemed like it was two different colors. Coming in at about shoulder length the majority of it was light-brown, but he had locks of what looked like threaded gold here and there. The muscles in his forearms bulged with anticipation as his dark Italian features read my face for a response.

"Uhh I'm sorry...I thought you were someone else. How's it going?"

"I'm doin' ok. Done with classes for the week and was hungry, but saw you and decided to say hey. You busy this weekend?"

"Not that I know of. Why what's up?" I was intrigued.

"My buddies and I are throwing a party tonight at my girlfriends sorority house..."

(And the intrigue was gone)

"...and I was wondering if you maybe wanted to come?"

"Ahh. Not too sure. I mean I won't know anybody there." the truth was that being trapped in a sorority house was far from my idea of fun. Added to the fact that I told myself I was done with these unavailable straight guys.

"ReallY? Well you'll know me. And you kinda know my friends. Just come, please?" he had a slight look of panic on his face, but it made him look endearing and I couldn't help myself.

I glanced over to my right to see Will staring at us from across the room with a heaping plate of waffles and ice cream in his hands. He had this shit eating grin on his face, while his head gyrated up and down as if giving me my answer.

"Alright, but I have some things to do beforehand so probably won't be there until late."

"Hey I'll take that! The address is 417 Ashmore. Kegs are first come but, if you want something stronger, feel free to bring whatever." he responded, walking backwards away from me, keeping my gaze the entire time.

"What was that!? Did we just get invited to a party!?" asked Will, startling me.

"Were you eavesdropping?" I'm not sure how he heard anything form that far away.

"I sure as hell was. And you told him yes, right?"

"Yeah, I told him yes. But I told him I'd be coming late. Don't wanna seem to eager with him having a girlfriend and all."

"Oh you mean Priya? Yeah she's a hot bitch alright. Definitely a hurdle if you're trying to get lucky."

"I'm not trying to get lucky! I'm just...just going to drink have a good time."

"Ok well while you're having a good time I'll be right behind you fondling every hot guy I see!"

"You have no shame..."

"Fuck no."

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The clock read 10:32 as a exited the shower. I checked the address on Google Maps and it was only about a half mile from my place, so I had some time. I dropped my towel and stood in front of the mirror, trying to find my best qualities. I was a pretty good looking guy. My eyes, an amber-brown, stood out from thick eyelashes and a dark brow. My dark brown hair always reminded me of bird feathers with it's wavy spikes. My naturally tan skin looked great stretched across my muscular body. My muscles looked so tight after I showered. The light dusting of chest hair around my dime-sized nipples, and the dense happy trail stuck in between my faint 6-pack added to my overall sexual appeal.

My greatest features were my tight bubble ass, and my very nice, thick cock. My ass seemed abnormally big for my body. With my size 31 waist, it looked like I was smuggling volleyballs back there. And then there was my cock, my pride and joy. It had seen a lot of action since I started college. It was perfect at just under 8.5 inches long, and 6 inches thick. The head was always plump and juicy, and as thick as my shaft. I was cut, but still had enough skin to play with, even with a raging hard-on. My nuts, nice and velvety, were about the size of ping pong balls and hung at an decent length. And all was framed by a decent crotch bush. I've never been a fan of being shaved bare. Minimal manscaping plus rugged good looks ALWAYS got me going.

My thoughts then drifted to what Erik looked like naked. I tried to construct a full image from visual queues I'd taken in already. His intense hazel-green eyes were like traps for peoples souls. One glance and you couldn't get away. And with such a deep voice and his ever present 5 o'clock shadow, I figured his chest was bound to have some type of fur. I imagined it being like Hugh Jackman's...you know not a bear, but definitely a man. And those muscled legs leading up to his very firm ass, an ass I imagined coated with fuzz and with a killer hairy crack. But what about his cock? I'd guess nothing less than 7 inches. I'm not really a size queen, but my ass made for a treacherous trek for anything below that length. The fantasy was cut short as Will called my phone.

"You almost ready? I'm trying to get my grope on." he actually sounded pretty frustrated. Probably from me wanting to go so late.

"Yeah I just jumped out of the shower. I should be ready in 15 minutes so just head over and we can walk from here."

"I'll give you 10, and an ass whooping if you don't hurry it up! Bye!"

No sooner had I finished getting dressed, Will was at my door. We stopped off at a convenience store on campus for some stronger drinks. I wasn't really a beer drinker, but whiskey always served me good. The weather outside was pretty chilly at 45° and it had started to snow faintly, but it wasn't too terrible so it was off to the sorority house.

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The booming music could be heard at least a block away from the house. There was a sign on the door that said to come right in and, upon opening it, the view inside was nothing short of a party scene from a movie. It was impossible to move, much less hear anything with the amount of people that were there. The collected buzz of everyone talking as only challenged by the blaring music. Will was on sensory overload and took off at the first sight of a drunk frat guy, so I wandered around the party looking for Erik.

Everything seemed to be at a standstill in the kitchen. After a lot of pulling, tugging and fighting my way throw the overcrowded house, I found that the entrance to the basement was causing the traffic jam. People coming up and down by the bucketful. I hadn't searched the entire ground floor, but if everyone was trying to get into that basement I figured Erik just might be there an descended down the claustrophobia inducing stairs.

The kegs, the heart of the party, were downstairs. And located just to the left were Erik's friends...his roommates. I hadn't paid much attention to them before, but they were all kinda hot as well. They also easily fit into the stereotype of what a certain athlete should look like in a particular sport. Kevin, the one I'd met that night as well, looked almost like a modern day James Dean with his almost doo-wop like hairdo and crystal blue eyes. I could tell he was the baseball player of the group with his sculpted arms and back.

Allen was the basketball player. Almost 6'6 and lanky, but still muscular with an ultra-tight body. His body actually made me a little jealous. Usually guys beyond my height seemed stretched, but we was totally proportionate. Carved straight from marble like a statue of a Greek God with his blonde hair, green eyes, and angular nose. He was talking to a little guy in there group named Terry.

Terry was around 5'10, and pretty meek in nature. He looked out of place, like a nerd that tried too hard to please the in-crowd. But nevertheless they accepted him with open arms, and I could see why. The kid was hot, and had a tight body to match. He was the embodiment of an HGN, or Hot Gay Nerd. His shaggy brown hair and eyes and natural pout garnered him the nickname PuppyDog.

And then there was Nathan, or Nate as he liked to be called. Nate was an enigma. He was definitely the bad boy of the group, and had the attitude to sell it. Brown hair and eyes, with a gaze reminiscent of a hawk or an eagle. He was right around 6 foot and his body showed sure signs of being a fit athlete. I later found out that he was on the college wrestling team. Something he used to both impress and intimidate girls and guys alike.

All eye candy aside, I was slightly disappointed I hadn't found Erik yet. I couldn't dwell on it long as I heard my name being shouted from across the room. It was Kevin. His beautiful blue eyes were pinned on me, and he had the most mischievous grin I'd ever seen. He walked toward me with two beers in hand. I assumed one was for me.

"Hey man glad you could make it! Erik invite you?!"

"Yeah he did! Definitely not what I expected! Pretty crazy here!" it was tough shouting over the music.

"This ain't nothing compared to the last one! Where's Will? Isn't he always at your side?"

"Not sure! I lost him 3 minutes in! Where's Erik at?! I'm surprised he's not partying with you guys!"

"I dunno! He and Priya got into a fight about an hour ago! I haven't seen him since..." he took a chug of his beer, and then continued his train of thought "...but he might be upstairs on the second level! Feel free to check it out if you want!"

Quicker than he came, Kevin was yanked away in some massive group that flooded the basement with even more young bodies. I faintly heard him tell me to enjoy the party, but the buzz of the crowd was loud. I decided to do a final once over before I made my way upstairs, and that's when I saw Nate's predatory gaze directed towards me. Was I in trouble? Did I do something to offend him? Whatever the cause, I wasn't sticking around to find out so I quickly made my way back upstairs.

Before heading up to the second level, I wanted to scour the ground floor and make sure Will was okay. Well he was more than ok. I'd found him sitting on the lap of some passed out frat guy. He was posing in a dainty, pin-up like manner as a group of girls cheered him on while taking pictures on their phones. That kid is going to have field day in the morning when those hit Facebook I'm sure. The combo of the whiskey and the beer was starting to have an effect on me, but I pushed through it and made my way up another flight of stairs.

It was very quiet upstairs. The decibels of the once pounding music seemed to be cut drastically in the upper halls. The top of the stairs made way to a long hallway with 4 bedrooms on either side, and a bathroom straight down the center. One of the bedroom doors was open so I checked that one out first. It was pitch black, but I could hear the moans of an all too familiar voice. Then came heavy panting, and the sounds of skin slapping skin. All signs pointed to it being Erik and Priya going at it, and having awesome makeup sex. I wanted to slowly walk away and give them some privacy, but the thought of seeing Erik's naked body, wet from sex, was more appealing.

The longer I looked into the blackness, the more shapes of familiar items started to give way. Shapes then became forms. And those forms were Erik and Priya on a bed. I couldn't make out small details, but I could see the definitely power the was putting into his thrusts. His ass, highlighted by the red light of the bedside alarm clock, was pumping in and out of sight with fervor. The sweet smell of sex reached me and combined with the alcohol in my system to take me completely over the edge. My cock was completely rigid, and dripping precum down the right leg of my pants. Just then a sudden movement saw them flipping positions. The moonlight from the window hit his face like a spotlight, and he was looking directly at me.

He knew I was there. He knew it was me. His body kept at a steady rhythm as he winked at me. Knew I was watching and he didn't care, and I was now turned on beyond belief. I'm guessing the new found attention was all too much for him as well. He quickly pulled out of her, arched his back, and had what seemed to be a very satisfying orgasm. His sweaty body was fully visible in the moonlight. His massive cock, looking to be about a good 8 inches, bobbing up and down with each orgasmic contraction. He was still looking at me, smiling the whole time while mouthing something that I couldn't make out.

I was so horny I couldn't stand it. I turned to leave, and noticed there was someone down the hall facing my direction. With my boner raging in my pants I tried to discreetly walk by them.

"That was pretty hot, huh?" I wasn't sure who's voice it was as I'd never heard it before. Walking closer revealed it to be Nate, the quiet and stern looking friend of the group.

"You know...every time they fuck I try to watch or listen. Shit is so hot. Makes me cum so hard." his eyes then darted down.

Following his eyes I realized that both of his hands were down his pants, vigorously massaging his cock. His breathing became rhythmical and paced, a quiet grunt escaping as his mouth opened slightly. His eyes then met mine again as he pulled his hands out of his pants. They were soaked with cum, the smell hitting my nose instantly. He brought his left hand to his mouth and began licking all of the evidence off, all the while given be a very teasing look. He then stretched his right hand out until it was about 2 inches from my face.

"Want some?" he asked innocently, like it was perfectly normal to just share bodily fluids with the nearest person to you. Before I could respond, his fingers were already invading my mouth. Probing my gums and tongue, the taste was wildly masculine and sweet. I went from sucking every finger clean, to licking from his knuckles up to him palm. He blew such a messy load that there was even some on his wrist which I happily licked clean as well.

"Want some more?" I nodded yes, and the took my hand and guided it down the front of his pants. The environment at the brim of his boxers was hot and moist. My hand slipped under the waistband, and was met with very dense patch of pubes that was severely saturated with cum. I got a little adventurous and went further, trying to find the base of his cock. My ring finger was the first to win the race as it came in contact with a very thick shaft. I was following the shaft down to the head and noticed that it was taking a good while for me to reach it. Finally reaching the head, more than halfway down his right thigh, I touched and caressed it and was met with some more oozing cum.

"Yeah..." was all he could say as I played with his still dripping head. I then worked my hand back up to his cum soaked pubes, making sure to scoop up as much as I could. It was like a cum massacre in his pants. Slowly pulling my hand out, I looked at him to register his reaction as my hand was coated in even more boy juice than his had been. I dove right in licking up everything I could, and to my surprise he had joined in sucking cum off my fingers.

Now out of his cum eating frenzy, he looked at me and started snickering.

"What?" I asked, not to be too loud as Erik and Priya weren't that far away.

"You have some...hold on..." He cut his sentence short as he leaned forward, his face only inches from mine. He looked me deep in the eyes and in one quick swipe, his tongue had bathed the area from my chin to the rim of my bottom lip.

"You had some on there. I didn't want you to waste it."

"...thanks" was all I could say before a group of people came stomping up the stairs. We quickly fixed our positions as a girl was screaming at her male counterpart.

"The bathroom's there! Right there! Go! Hurry!" She was angry.

He took her queue took off running. Within seconds he was praying to the porcelain goddess, and it sounded pretty rough. I couldn't help but giggle. I turned around to look back at Nate, but he wasn't there. He'd disappeared.

"What...just happened?" I silently asked myself as I made my way back downstairs.
 
Damn Man! Hot as Hell! Erik fucking Priya, and 2 other athletes eating cum.
 
Wow! The parties I went to were tea and crumpets compared to yours. Where was I??? Next time, drop me and invitation...lol This is becoming quite a college experience I wish I had had. Keep it coming, Nqyrwithin.

Craiger
 
Maybe I need to consider grad school at EMU.....lol Anything to get some of that college exuberance.....

Craiger
 
I'll try and have Chapter 3 out by Friday, at the latest Saturday. Lots of papers to grade since it's the end of the school semester.
 
Ok guys, big question...am I describing the characters ok? I take myself as a very descriptive person, and am not sure I'm doing a good enough job conveying what the characters look like.

Or is it good that the characters aren't fully realized, so you can fill in the gaps with your imaginations?

If you think I could be a little more descriptive, or if you think it's good how it is...leave me a quick post with your thoughts.
 
Filling 'em in OK here. Continue as you've been doing. It's fine, and more than fine.
 
I think your doing fine. When someone is over descriptive it tends to blot out my imagery and I have a hard time relating. I think subtle descriptions are more apt to stir someones thoughts and allows them to transcend into the story and become a part of it. That's what reading and listening is all about. Letting your imagination flow. Not that I don't like seeing photos sometimes to help put that zing into a story. But, you, Nqyrwithin. are doing great.

Craiger
 
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