White Reflection

[FameMonster]

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Chapter 7: Turning point​

I was twittering on my Blackberry in the library when I heard some firmiliar voices, whispering softly bethind some bookshelves. When I actually paid attention, I recgonized Wes and Taylor talking.

“.. don't know. I think Alex is really into the kid. I kinda like him.” Wes whispered.
“Yeah me too. But it kinda freaks me out. I've never seen Alex this way.” Taylor responded.
“Me neither bro, but if Daniël is what he wants. What other option is there?” Wes again.

The second I heard my name I froze, they were talking about me and Alex!
I leaned a bit in the direction of the sound to hear it better. But then Ms. Cole, the library assistent came to ask me about two books I borrowed and were due to bring back yesterday. Damn!

I talked soft and fast, hoping Wes and Taylor didn't hear me and that Ms. Cole would leave so I could hear the boys' conversation again. After which seemed like forever, she left again. And I prayed that Taylor and Wes were still there.

“... think it's the only option. And I don't mind, in fact I want him to” Taylor said
“Same here” Wes whispered. “But still I think we should talk to Paul.”
“It's gonna be tricky, and it'll be a lot of work. But I think we can do it, if Paul helps us.”
“Yeah me too, but promise me one thing.” Wes wispered. “Don't tell Alex.”

The boys stood up and I heard them walk away. What did they want to keep from Alex? And what was that stuff with me?

I cursed softly, damn now I still didn't what was up. The only thing I did know, was that they went to talk with Paul, it was about Alex, and I heard my own name. I was confused.

Sighing I focussed on my BlackBerry again while recapping last night's events in my head.

To the rest I didn't make it seem that big of a deal, but I was nervous like hell. My hands were shaking and it felt like my heart was about to pound out of my chest while Alex came closer.

It kinda surprised me when Alex' lips touched mine, I had no idea what to expect. Would Alex be into kissing me? I didn't know but he had to kiss me anyway. Rules of the game.
I didn't know what to expect, but I never would have thought he would act the way he did.

He answered my kiss with an incredible force. Like it was a need instead of a want. He kissed me really rough, but still it was soft and passionate at the same time.
He pulled me closer while his tongue danced in my mouth. He was so soft and so warm, I never wanted to let go.
One hand pulled me closer and touched my chest, while the other searched for my hand and intertwined our fingers.

I lost control over time and space, forgetting where I was, who I was with, everything. I didn't hear Alex and Paul yelling and laughing, I tuned it all out because right now, the only thing important was Alex, and his warm lips on mine.
He moaned softly in my mouth, which made me all the more excited. I pulled him even closer, our bodies touching. My arm around him, my chest touching his chest

That moment was perfect but it wasn't for long. While I was focussing on the lips of this Greek God, I felt something buzzing in my pocket.

Sighing I ended the kiss and got my Blackberry. My dad was calling, wondering why I wasn't home yet.

When I hung up, everyone was looking at me in a weird way and the room was silent.
“What?” I said, “Why are you guys looking at me like that?”
“Uuhm dude, that was really hot.” Paul bit his lip.
“Hell yeah, I wanna taste that lips.” Wes said, he touched his own chest and went over his stomach to his crotch. He started rubbing that and spoke again. “Damn dude, you got me hard.”

I was kinda turned on by his rubbing an touching but it was a school night and I needed to get home. Everyone hugged me before I left and Wes whispered in my ear that he wanted to 'play' with me next time and I felt his hardon poking at my thigh. He winked at me, and Alex drove me home. He kissed me softly before he said goodnight.

I got distracted by the bell. I still was at school and my free period was over. time for math.
During that day, nothing really happened and I didn't see Alex. Like nowhere.
I have to admit, I was dissapointed, kinda wanting to see how he would react to me in public.

That week nothing happened really. At school we didn't really talk that much but we hung out almost every day after school. (Me and the Brotherhood that is) I was so wrong about them. They were cool, sexy and really nice.

Wes teased me the whole time that I kissed Alex and not him. I have to say he is hot, I wouldn't mind kissing him once. Actually I wouldn't mind kissing any of them. Alex was the hottest of them all, obviously. But still, Taylor, Paul and Wes were sexy as hell too.

I was so busy with the Brotherhood that I almost forgot the holiday was coming up soon. That was nice, a few weeks without school meant more time with Alex and the rest.
The one thing that really got me excited for the holiday happened on a Wednesdayevening. We were hanging out at Alex' place again. Taylor texted me during the schoolday that they wanted to talk to me, privately.

So I sat there in the living room, waiting for one of them to tell me what they wanted to talk about. It was silent for a moment but then Taylor started.

“Sooo you've probably wondered why we wanted to talk with you tonight?” he asked.
I nodded and Wes answered. “Well, we've been hanging out for quite some time now, and we all enjoy your company very much.”
“Uhuuh” I said, couldn't think of something else. Where was this conversation going?
“So we all would like to invite you...” Paul said
“To become the fifth member of the Brotherhood.” Alex finished, he had a huge smile on his face and I could see that he was really happy. “If you like?”

I was stunned and it took a while before I realized what they were saying.
“You want me to...” I said slowly. I needed to get this straight in my head first. “to be a part of the Brotherhood?” It sounded surreal to me.
“We definetely do.” Wes said and Alex nodded, that smile still on his face.

“Don't get me wrong, I'd love to have you with us, but you need to change a lot. Are you up for that?” Paul said, and that kinda woke me up from this almost dream.

“Wow, change? Change what?” I asked.
Wes answered. “Well, you are hot and all, but you could be hotter. In the holiday we need you to work out for two hours a day, and your food must be clean.”
“Then we have your hair.” Taylor continued “I like it, but it could be better. We'll bring you to the best hairdressers in town.”
“And your clothes. You need to dress a bit more like us. Like tight shirts, show your body some more. And jeans, yours are screaming 'throw me away' seriously, you need some hot clothes.” Paul added.
Then Alex said “It's just like this make-over. We won't do anything you don't like. And trust me, you are hot.” he smiled. “But why stick with 'hot' while you could be perfect?”
“Like I said, you need to change a lot. Are you willing to do that?” Paul again.

I thought about that for some time. Going through everything they said just now. I doubted, didn't know if I was ready to let everything change. Amanda and Mike wouldn't be my friends anymore. They hated the Brotherhood and if I joined them. They would hate me. Was that a price I was willing to pay to be with Alex?
No, I decided for myself. Even though we kinda drifted apart as friends. They still were my friends, and I didn't let any of my friends down. And changing everything about myself to fit with them, did I want that?
I have to admit I was kinda excited to join them in the Brotherhood. But it would be a lot of work during the holiday to get ready. And did I really want to change who I was?

Then I remembered what my grandpa used to say when I was younger. “Your life is like an empty painting, it's up to you to choose the colours.”
Was I ready to change my painting and to start with a whole new bunch of colours?

The room was totally silent by this point. Everyone was staring at me, waiting for my response.
I looked in Alex' beautiful green eyes and realized my chioce was made, before I had ever consiously chosen.

“I'm in” I said, and all the faces in the room turned into big smiles.


To be continued...[/B[

 

[WildBeast]

Uh oh. I smell trouble.

 

[TimWhite07]

Great chapter.

Dan shouldnt feel that he has to change to be part of the group. If they like him enough to invite him to the group, then the way he looks should be fine.

What are his other friends going to think about all this?

 

[Craiger]

I agree with the others. I see that peer pressure has taken more control than Daniel would like, but sometimes it is hard to beat that type of pressure. I also can see that this may lead to real problems in the future. Great chapter, FameMonster. It's getting very intriguing.

Craiger

 

[FameMonster]

Chapter 8: Transformation, part one​

The 'Brotherhood training' started right after the holiday began. We had a lot to do in a little time. First things first, my diet. Taylor made a schedule for me with what I could eat and what I couldn't eat. When I quickly scanned it, it seemed like much vegetables, rice, pasta, and meat. No candy, obviously but I had to cut out bread as well.
Taylor said that I didn't need to loose weight, but I needed to build muscle so I needed to give the body what it needed or something.

My first exercise was with Taylor, they didn't wanna put pressure on me the first time I went to the gym. So only Taylor came.
Damn it was hard. Taylor pushed me to the limit and beyond. I needed to work every single muscle in my body and after that two hours, every one of them was sore.
When we came back at Alex' place all my stuff were there. A bag with clothes, showergel, tooth brush, everything.
I was tired, but not so tired that I didn't wanna know what that meant.

“Simple” Alex said. “It means that you are gonna be here for the next three days. We need all the time we can get, and driving you here, and home again takes a lot of time.”
I was too tired to give a normal response, or to fight against their decision. So I grabbed my bag with clothes, dragged it to Alex' room (which caused a lot of pain in my arms) and went searching for a shower.

After the shower I fell asleep on Alex' bed, too tired to pull the sheets over myself and too sore to move. Only vaguely realizing that someone putted a blacket over me. I felt some heat next to me and instinctively I pulled closer to it before falling back asleep again.

When I woke up I realized that someone had put his arms around me and that teh heat I pulled to earlier was his chest.
I looked up and saw Wes' face. He smiled at me.
I'm not gonna lie, I kinda felt uncomfortable at that moment. I mean I was into Alex. Not that the rest of them weren't hot, but still. I was at Alex' house, in his bed for heavens sake. And now I slept there with one of his best friends beside me. It didn't really feel right.

All that feelings faded when Alex came into the room, when he saw I was awake he smiled and joined Wes and me in the bed.

“I'm proud of you baby.” He said while rubbing my back, I still lay on Wes' chest. “You did really good for a first day according to Taylor.” Alex continued.

I rolled over to Alex and lay my head on his chest. Wes was hot and all, but no comparison with Alex.
He took me genty in his arms and kissed me on my head. I looked up at his face, wanting to see his beautiful green eyes and he kissed me on my lips, soft and passionate. Just like last time I felt a sudden urge to have him even closer to me then he already was.

I lost myself again in Alex' touch, his moans, his scent, his lips. He was the one thing I wanted and now I felt like I had it.
Behind me, Wes moaned as well.
I moved a bit and Alex pulled me on top of him. Touching my arms, chest, muscles, and everything his hands could reach.

Wes moaned again, louder now. Alex broke our kiss and looked at him. I followed his gaze and saw Wes looking at us, his hands rubbing his crotch again.
“Please..” he sighed, “don't stop now.”

Alex' eyes met mine again. “Why don't we make this a little bit hotter?” he said with a naughty smile on his face. I smiled at him, waiting for what he would do. I didn't get what he wanted.

Alex moved closer to Wes and kissed him, while his hand moved over my chest to my dick and he started rubbing it through my jeans.
I closed my eyes and focussed on the good feelings that went through me when Alex touched me. A little moan escaped my lips.

Alex broke the kiss with Wes and turned his attention to me again, still rubbing me. But Wes held him back and leaned his own head forward, he wanted to kiss me and I all too willingly obeyed.
His kiss was different, warmer, a bit more rough, but it felt good. Out tongues danced around eachother while Alex was still rubbing me and kissing my body.

I felt like I was going crazy, Alex' hands on me, Wes kissing me, it was too much to handle.
Was started touching me as well and my hardon was about to explode in my jeans
I wanted more from Wes. So I pulled his shirt off, breaking our kiss. I wanted to let my lips explore his body. His amazing pecs, his huge arms, his hot stomach, and further down.

I wanted to start on his right nipple first while Alex and Wes started kissing again. But then I heard Taylor screaming from downstairs. “Danny, wake up. Time for your lunch.”
I sighed angrily, this was not the time for stupid things as lunch.

“Just ignore him” Wes told me, but Taylor screamed again.

“Danny, wake up!” and I heard footsteps on the stairs.
I freaked out, he couldn't see me here with Wes and Alex. They seemed comfortable here but I wasn't. Not if Taylor was about to come in this room, so I rushed out of the bed and hurried to the stairs so Taylor could see I wasn't asleep.

“Oh, good there you are.” Taylor said when he saw me. “Thought you didn't hear me.”
“Yeah I did” I responded. “Sorry I still was asleep when you called the first time.”
“Naw it's okay. Made your lunch for you, how are those muscles feeling? Must be hurting right now huh?”
I hadn't really thought about that but now he mentioned it, yeah my whole body was freaking hurting here.
“Damn, yeah it hurts like hell.” I said. We were in the kitchen by this point and Paul was eating as well. He gave me an understanding look. “Dude, been there, done that. But trust me, it'll fade and you'll look better then ever!”

I sighed, “yeah I know but it's a lot of work to do. But I guess it will be paying off.”
“It will, just push through right now.” he said.

The rest of the week was just as tormenting as the first day. Working out two hours a day and a very strict diet was hard to hold on to (you seriously won't believe how much I would do for some junkfood). But I held on, just to please Alex. And let me tell you, he was pleased. And I started to see some changes in my body. My arms were getting bigger, legs more muscular and above all, my waist was tightening and my pecs growing. My body just became more toned.

Taylor kept is promise. All this hard work and the stupid diet started to pay off.
I had a feeling this was some kind of miracle, I always heard people whine and bitch about losing weight and stuff. But with someone like Taylor it was kinda easy.

When my body started to change, the biggest part of my transformation was completed. Now we needed to work on the clothes, hair and (what they didn't tell me before) mental powers. They tought me how to be confident, how to lie like a pro, how to control every situation and most important, how to get whatever I wanted, whenever I wanted.

Damn, there were so much rules. With lying for example, look the other one in the eye, act innocent, don't blink too much. Tell your story, shrug every now and then. Try to convince yourself when telling it, and so on.

Half past the second week I learned how to manipulate everyone and everything around me. So I put my knowledge to the test and I had to lie about everything. To the Brotherhood, and to strangers as well.
I liked it and kinda saw it as a game. It wasn't me who lied. It was a character I was playing, just like everything else, I played it, it wasn't me as a person. I wasn't like this, it was acting.

It didn't make any sense but since I was good at it. I did it for fun but manipulating really worked. I could easily make someone feel guilty, or lie straight to your face. I couldn't wait to try this out at school, wondering what the people there would think about the new me.

Since I had been changing myself so much (hair was due tomorrow and clothes for the day after) I hadn't realized how fast this holiday went by. School would be fun, the news about me joining the Brotherhood would probably freak out a lot of people. People who hated me or didn't know me, stupid jocks and bandgeeks, and my friends as wel.

My stomach turned when I thought about them. I hadn't seen Mike or Amanda since our last school day, not knowing if they'd ever talk to me again after the news about me and the Brotherhood comes out. It made me sad, I loved my friends to death but would they still love me after this? Would my choice destroy the friendships that lasted through so many things?

I kept wondering, not able to keep my mind off my friends.
“Dann, time to work out again!” Taylor shouted from the kitchen. Sighing I grabbed my stuff and went to the gym with Taylor.


To be continued...


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[Craiger]

Well, Danny is certainly changing. I feel that the lying and manipulation will get him into deep dodo...lol How strange it is that a little peer pressure can change someone so drastically.
I wasn't too clear on the sleep sequence. Was he dreaming that Alex and Wes were kissing and fondling him or have they really gotten that intimate? I know they played the game and kissing was involved, but I an not sure if the erotic parts are a figment of his imagination.
None the less, a interesting chapter, FameMonster.

Craiger