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Anonymous Coward
This is a good and admirable project, FabG. I hope that you see it through and that it bears fruit.
One editorial comment: "scourge" is probably not the most appropriate word to apply to the HIV/AIDS crisis. Most definitions of the word have a connotation of "punishment." "Crisis" might be a more suitable term. Many of the recipients of this letter probably already view HIV/AIDS as a "scourge." Why not try to flip the script?
A missive asking for dialogue with the Christian community would likely receive a more positive response from members of the Christian community if that missive made explicit reference to Christ, Christianity, Christian values and the Christian community.
One editorial comment: "scourge" is probably not the most appropriate word to apply to the HIV/AIDS crisis. Most definitions of the word have a connotation of "punishment." "Crisis" might be a more suitable term. Many of the recipients of this letter probably already view HIV/AIDS as a "scourge." Why not try to flip the script?
A missive asking for dialogue with the Christian community would likely receive a more positive response from members of the Christian community if that missive made explicit reference to Christ, Christianity, Christian values and the Christian community.

















