Yay, i finally catch up with the stories. Dang. There are multiple occasions that I want to comment sooooo badddd, but I try my best to resist until now. I'm so glad I find this through your blog, seriously, you wouldn't click on "Show me your arse mate"

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I am not sure if I'm happy or sad that I catch up, since now I can comment, but then I have to wait and wait and wait, and be cliff-hung just like everyone else did.

I demand one chapter per day! None of the guys here would object to that.
JAG<3, this is such a beautiful story! I'm such a sucker for romantic plots.

I love all the scene with the couple together, it's so romantic, what they say, what they do. I also love how you describe little details throughout the story, the tiki, the ruru, the eyes, the wind,... I love the spiritual part of the story, it's great to read about someone like Rawiri (I like to read: Ra-Wee-Ree, like Kiwi [Kee-Wee]

) being so strongly believe in his ancestors and it had a great meaning to him. I like the way you use "mate" and "arse." You make it sound so...classy.

And I got a chance to learn more about the Kiwi.
My favorite chapter so far is chapter 39 when Dave turned around, give Ra the NZ plane model and let him pursue his dream. Dave seems pretty unsecure throughout the chapters and now getting himself into some trouble! @#$%&* I hope Dave won't do anything to jeopardize it.

Somehow, I have never liked Matt. He can be funny at parts, but he is just like the extra leg and finds every f$%#king chance to put it in someone's way. (I'm so frustrated when he interrupted the hotness between Dave Mate and Ra.
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) lol. And now I don't like him even more that he has long hair. That's totally a no no for me.

Go Ra! Hoping the surprise in the next few chapters is not bad....
This is probably one of the most interesting stories that I have read on here since 'Watching Brad' and 'Fiery Angels.' Five Stars!





(I can't find the star smiley, so I will give you bananas instead

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p/s: This is probably the longest comment I leave on a story.

pp/s: at first I always wonder why they didn't call their cell phones, then I remember the settings is in the 1980. I bet Dave and Ra wish they live in our time now, since they can chat over the internet, facebook, email, use webcam and might do some dirty things

and Dave mate can even show Ra his sexy, sexy arse.
