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Disaster Vacation

Sam,
A bit of the back plot revealed - we now know "who dunnit"!

Something the kids don't - but, when will it come to one of them just whom the scarf belonged to? Is she MIA?

The man is a twisted bastard, even his wife can see it.

You are keeping us hooked, that's for sure.
Thanks for the installment.

Looking forward to the next.
Thanks for keeping us reaching for the next one . . .

Thank you for your ongoing support of my story, it really has helped me to keep motivated and keep writing some more - especially when I get a little stuck on what's going to happen next.

I just wanted to let you know how much what you tell me, means to me and means for the progress of this story. (I have never managed to get as far as this in a piece of writing before, although it probably helps that I'm really enjoying and feeling what I'm writing as I'm writing it. As sad and perhaps "Cliched" as that sounds)

MIA? I love her! 20 dollar is one of my favorite songs. Back to your tale though.

Dearest Sam, I've become ever so dependent on your story. It's rather intoxicating, really! Words simply cannot express how much I appreciate the time, effort, energy and thought you've put into this.

However, if I should ever find myself across the pond, I shall look you up and thank you properly mate. Rather enthusiastically, might I add?

Right, having said that I'd like to encourage you to continue the fine job you've done thus far and which will no doubt continue with each subsequent installment.

A favor, mate, if you will? Once you've completed this piece to your satisfaction, would you consider crafting another tale for your fans?

Cheers Sam. Look forward to hearing more from you soon mate!

Thank you very much, if you read what I just said to Don, then I mean it exactly the same for the both of you; you have been very helpful to me. :D

Words simply cannot express how much I appreciate all the time, effort, energy and thought you've put into reading my story and leaving me excellent feedback ;)

And, I'm sure that, without a doubt I will begin a new story for you all. However I might need some time to sort things out in my head and come up with some sort of semblance of plot and a plan first. That okay?


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Anyway, on with the posting!!!



Part 12

It was 3am when Ben woke up. The wind had picked up and whistled as it battered against the window panes. Emilie groaned sleepily as he tried to gently slide his arm out from underneath her, and woke up.
“Where you going?” She whispered, breathing in sharply through her nose and rubbing her eyes.
“Toilet.” Ben whispered in reply. “I’ll be back in a minute, you just go back to sleep.” He got up off of the couch and tip-toed around all the sleeping bodies.

*​

Once in the bathroom he switched the lights on, the extractor fan started up loudly and he quickly switched the light off again so as not to wake up his friends; if he made a mess he would clean it up in the morning. He unzipped his fly and began to relieve himself in the toilet when, all of a sudden a came out of nowhere and wrapped itself over his mouth. He tried to yell out but he couldn’t make a sound. A flash of silver and Ben began to struggle with all of his might, he tried to bite his attacker to free his mouth, he kicked out behind him but it had no effect. Finally, an elbow connected with a rib and the assailant let go. Ben yelled out and bent over struggling to catch his breath. When he looked up his assailant was gone. He breathed a sigh of relief but something icy cold was pressing against his throat. With a quick swipe Ben fell to the ground his fingers closed tightly around his throat as the blood oozed out from between them, a dark pool of red coated the floor.

*​

Emilie was the first to wake up as the first rays of sunlight filtered through the easterly facing windows. Immediately she felt around for Ben who wasn’t there. She smiled dumbly to herself before heading to the kitchen where she thought he might be.
She came wandering back out a second later with a thoughtful look on her face.
“Have you seen Ben?” She asked, shaking Leona awake who shook her and groaned.
“What time is it?”
Emilie ignored her and wandered off to the bathroom, the door was locked. She knocked.
“Ben, are you in there?” She called. No answer. She tried the handle; she could turn it all the way. It wasn’t locked. “Leona.” She called. “Can you help with this door? Something heavy is stopping it from opening.”
Leona got up quickly and they both began to push the door gently inwards. Leona suddenly jumped back and gasped in horror, pointing at the floor just inside the door.
“Is that blood?” Emilie squealed and pulled the door shut again. “It’s Ben!” She cried. “Ben’s dead!” She screamed, collapsing onto the floor in a flood of tears. Sobbing hysterically, she promptly threw up. Leona held Emilie for a second.
“You don’t know that that is Ben, and what’s more, you don’t know that whoever that blood belongs to is dead.” She whispered in her ear. “Now, I’m going to get Barry and Kevin to open the door and see okay? I’ll be back in a minute.” Leona made to get up but Emilie was clutching desperately at her wrist.
“Don’t leave me.” She croaked, barely able to speak, her face glistening with tears. Leona smiled glumly.
“I won’t. I’ll stay right here.”
Paige wandered in then, clueless as to what was going on she bit into an apple and went to sit down.
“Paige.” Leona said, just before Paige managed to get comfortable. Leona beckoned her over when she looked back.
“What is it?” She asked worriedly, looking at Emilie’s tear stricken face.
“Nothing. It’s nothing.” Leona lied. “I need you to get Kevin and Barry for me okay? Just bring them over here.” She added. Paige looked at her sceptically.
“Seriously, nothing’s wrong?” She whispered.
“Nothing’s wrong.” Leona confirmed. “Will you just get them for me please?”
Paige nodded, clearly not believing any of it.

*​

Kevin and Barry hurried over to where Leona and Emilie were crouched on the floor, Kevin wiping a little drool from the side of his mouth and Barry wiping a little from his neck.
“What’s wrong?” Kevin asked, still not fully awake.
“I need you and Barry to open the bathroom door and take a look inside. Something is behind the door stopping it from opening. Don’t ask questions.” Leona added as Kevin opened his mouth to speak. “Just do it.”
Barry nodded and pulled Kevin along with him to the bathroom door. “Look.” He said pointing to the blood under the door. He began to push the door with urgency. “Kevin, help.” He grunted.
Kevin joined him in pushing the door open, horrified by the amount of blood he could see as the door inched open. Barry twisted his arm in and flicked on the light. Blood was everywhere; it had splattered all over the lengthy bathroom mirror, dribbled down the sink and spread in a huge puddle on the floor.
Kevin gasped and clapped his hand to his face covering his nose and mouth; the smell that filled his nose was ghastly, the smell and the sight of the blood was making him woozy and Barry pushed him away and went in alone. He twisted his head behind the door, took one quick look at Ben’s mangled body lying there in a twisted heap and stepped quickly out, almost slipping on the congealed blood on the floor. Kevin ran to him as he collapsed on the floor sobbing.
“It’s Ben… h-he’s… he’s gone. He’s dead. He’s been fucking killed!” He cried, pressing his head into Kevin’s chest. Kevin wrapped his arms around his boyfriend and sobbed into his hair.
“We need to get out of here.” He whispered. Barry looked up at him tearfully and nodded.

*​

They all sat in the living room, once more, huddled together. Kevin pulled the red scarf out of his pocket once more and twiddled it between his fingers. Paige looked at it warily looked away quickly as Leona looked up at her.
“It’s you.” Leona snarled standing up and pointing a shaky finger. “You’re doing this to us.” She snatched the scarf out of Kevin’s hand and waved it in her face. “This is your scarf!” She yelled. “What the fuck do you think you’re doing?”
Kevin sat up attentively. “This is your scarf?” He asked her, more calmly than Leona was.
“I’m telling you Kevin, that’s her fucking scarf! I knew I recognised you from somewhere Paige, I just couldn’t quite place it.” She laughed hysterically. “I can’t believe that this geek is the one doing this to us all!” She looked at Kevin as if he should know what she was talking about. Emilie sat with her knees pulled up to her chin, looking bewildered. Barry was lying with his head on Kevin’s lap, fast asleep, with Kevin running his fingers through his hair.
“Geek?” Kevin questioned.
“Yes, do you remember that loner girl in the year above us, with huge glasses and this red scarf?” She waved the scarf in Kevin’s face this time. “She was really spotty. Well, this is Paige. Not ugly and geeky anymore, but still…”
Kevin looked over at Paige. “Do you deny that this is your scarf?” He asked her. She shook her head no, looking at her feet the whole time.
“Ha!” Leona yelled triumphantly. “We’ve caught her!”
Paige shook her head no, again. “It’s not me.” She said quietly. “I wish it were for your sake, but it’s not. Sure I’m not the nicest person – and you have every reason to jump to conclusions, but it’s not me. I recognised the scarf as soon as you showed it to us…”
“Then why didn’t you say anything?” Kevin interrupted.
“Because you would have thought it was me!” She said quickly, her eyes wide. “If I had told you that was my scarf, I would have been accused of putting it up there and then Emilie,” She cast Emilie a wary glance, who was watching her intently, “would have blamed me for Ben falling down the hill. I promise you though,” she added, close to tears, “it wasn’t me. I didn’t do this to Ben; I couldn’t do it to anybody.”
Barry suddenly woke up. “I thought all the doors were locked.” He said, sitting up quickly.
“They were.” Kevin replied.
“Then it must have been one of us. It had to have been one of us who killed Ben; nobody else could’ve gotten in.” Leona said, not taking her eyes of Paige in case she tried anything.
“As willing as you can imagine I would be to assume that it was Paige that did this, I don’t.” Emilie said suddenly, putting her feet back on the floor. “And it’s not strictly true that only one of us had access to this house last night. We know, full well, that Bella has keys to this place…”
“Right.” Barry said suddenly, standing up and running his fingers through his hair. “We’re going to see her. No, not all of us.” He added when they all made to get up. “Kevin and Leona, I want you to wait here and keep an eye on Paige. I’m not sure if I trust her yet. Emilie and I will go.”
“But I can’t.” Emilie pleaded. “Don’t make me go; besides it’s silly for just two of us to go. If whoever did that to Ben is in that house then they can surely do it to two of us… we should all go.”
“But what about Paige?” Barry asked desperately. “I don’t know if we can trust her.”
“Well I know that we can.” Emilie retorted. “I woke up when Barry went to the bathroom. How long does it take one of you lads to pee? None of us got up and followed him to the bathroom I would’ve heard you. And it definitely wasn’t Paige because she was on the floor right next to me.” She added. “We should all go.”
“Though, that does increase the body count if the killer is in there.” Paige muttered under her breath.
 
Wow I decided to give your story a read this morning, and I am hooked!! Now I guess I will have to wait for the next chapter. I found the shower scene with Kevin and Barry to be very powerful and wonderful!! Being someone who came out later in life and denied the real me, I really felt Barry's feeling with finally getting what he wanted!!!

Keep up the good work!!!

Yay! A new reader!!!

Thanks a lot, and I'm glad that I managed to do that scene justice.
 
Sam,
Are you sure you're not at least related to Stephen? lol

Certainly a captivating, if mildly gruesome chapter.
The owner of the scarf "unveiled". The owner isn't MIA, after all. I wonder, did good ol' "teach" ransack her luggage?

How else did it wind up on the hill?
There's strength in numbers, so it's probably better that they all go over to the house, together.

What they REALLY need to do is get the Fuck out of "Dodge", and get to the police!

I feel for all of them. And, yeah, poor Ben. and Poor Emilie and her unborn child!

Thanks, again, for another captivating installment.
 
Sorry I'm too tired to continue writing tonight so I thought I would just post what I have for now. I'll post the other half as soon as I have done it. I need sleep now since it's a LONG day at work tomorrow. Thanks and sorry it's not as long as usual parts. :D

PART 13 - 1 OF 2

The wind had died down from the previous night and, ironically, the sun was shining. The dew soaked their ankles as the five of them made their way across the lawn to the little annex at the edge of the woods.
Paige looked anxiously about her while twiddling her thumbs as she strategically placed herself directly in the middle of everybody.
“Guys, are you sure this is the right thing to do?” Kevin asked. “I mean, surely walking into the killers house isn’t the wisest thing to do…”
“Kevin, this is our only ticket out of here safely… if Bella has a vehicle stashed away some where it could be our way home.” Leona stated breathlessly, picking up her pace and striding across the lawn. “And I for one want to get out of here as soon as possible without having to walk blindly through the woods. Don’t you feel the same?”
Emilie strode forwards her eyes fixed with a steely determination, Barry followed behind Paige constantly looking about him just in case.
Leona, being at the front, reached the door first and she twisted the knob, which turned but the door refused to open. “It’s locked.” She stated through gritted teeth. “Barry, do you want to try kicking it in?” She asked seriously. Barry nodded in reply and stood in front of the door. Quickly and as powerfully as he could he kicked, the flat of his foot connecting with the door at the same level as the knob, and it creaked a little but didn’t budge. He stopped.
“What are you doing?” Kevin asked. “Keep going, you’ll eventually get it.”
Barry shrugged, rolled his eyes and kicked it again in, more or less, the same spot. It still didn’t budge. Paige slumped down on the wet grass and sighed, resting her head in her hands with her elbows propped on her knees. Emilie wandered off a little way looking distracted. Leona leaned against the wall eyeing Barry expectantly. He kicked again and again but still the door did not budge. He was just about to go again when they all heard the sound of smashing glass.
“Where’s Emilie?” Leona gasped. Everyone looked around quickly; no-one had seen her. “She’s gone!” Leona wailed. “No, that’s not fair… my sister, she was my sister.”
Kevin quickly hurried over to her and wrapped an arm around her before she collapsed and pulled him to the floor with her, sobbing into his chest.
“I found a way in!” Emilie called coming around the side of the house.
Leona stood up, wiping her eyes quickly. “What?”
“I found a way in; I broke a window over there.” Emilie replied simply.
“Don’t do that again, Emilie. I thought I’d lost you… and you know how mom would have killed me if that had happened.” She added, laughing tearfully and pulling Emilie into a hug.
“Stop it.” Emilie muttered, pushing Leona away. “Let’s just get inside.”
“I ain’t climbing through no window.” Paige said stubbornly. “What if I hurt myself.”
“Fine then, wait outside.” Barry replied coldly. “Alone.” He smirked at Kevin as her brow creased with worry.
“None of you will wait out here with me?” She asked desperately.
“It’s best if we don’t split up, Paige.” Emilie replied, taking her hand gently and tugging her toward the broken window. “I got most of the glass out of the pane, but I think some of us are going to need a leg up – Barry it looks like it’ll be you giving us a hand.” She added, looking up at the kitchen window.

*​

Kevin went first, using both of his hands he grabbed hold of the inside of the window frame and pulled himself up, using his feet to push himself further in. He spotted Emilie’s tool of destruction, a large rock about the size of his head, lying in the sink surrounded by shards of shattered glass. Clambering down off of the kitchen counter and looking around the dark room, which was thankfully empty with the doors closed, he turned back and called through the window.
“Be careful when you come in, there’s glass in the sink.”

Paige came in next, Barry lifted her, pushing up on the balls of her feet while Kevin took her hand and helped pull her into the kitchen and safely onto the floor. He put his hands back through the window to grab Emilie’s hand when Paige began pulling drawers open frantically.
“Where’s the darned cutlery draw?” She said through gritted teeth and brushing her hair roughly away from her face. Eventually, she found a large chopping knife in the drawer and held it in front of her face examining it. “This’ll do.” She said brutally.
Kevin eyed her nervously as he pulled Emilie into the kitchen.
“Paige, what are you going to do with that?” Emilie asked simply when she had taken a look around and noted that the room was empty apart from them.
“It’s just in case we come across the killer.” Paige replied, holding her arms apart. “I want to feel like I have a chance if he suddenly pops up. You know?” She asked, running her finger along the blade.
Leona came in next and she jumped down from the kitchen counter and immediately walked over to the door and opened it a crack. Glancing up the hallway she grinned nervously.
“Coast is clear.” She whispered. “Now we need to find keys to a vehicle; there has to be something we can use in here to get help.” She closed the door again to see Kevin reaching out of the window to pull Barry in.
“You seriously need my help to get in?” Kevin joked. “I managed to get in by myself…” He stretched his arms out half way and stopped. “Oh, I can’t reach y…”
“Shh.” Barry interrupted. “I hear something. Quick Kevin,” He stretched his hands up into the window. “Give me a hand. Someone’s coming.”
“Oh don’t give me that!” Kevin laughed. “As if…” But he heard it now too; someone was coming. He quickly stretched his hand out and took Barry’s hand and began to pull him in, but Barry slipped and fell backwards.
“Shit!” Kevin yelled. “Leona, come and help!” He gasped, close to tears. “Grab one of Barry’s hands.” Leona climbed onto the counter and reached out as Barry got up off the ground quickly.
“Help me…” He whimpered. Leona and Kevin both pulled with all of their might and Barry started to rise up from the ground. He used the wall to aid in the climbing and they pulled the top half of his body in; his legs still dangling.
The noise stop, the person had stopped.
“Barry, quick, get your legs in!” Kevin yelled desperately.
Barry was pulled suddenly backwards as someone latched onto his ankle. He cried out desperately, tears forming in his eyes. Kevin let one hand go and grabbed a hold of Barry’s waistband on his jeans and heaved.
“Emilie, Paige, come and help. Grab a hold of Barry!” Leona yelled, she too, pulling with all her might.
Barry kicked out furiously behind him, his foot hitting nothing but air. He slipped further backwards. Paige screamed shrilly as he slipped and grabbed a hold of his arm and began to pull. Barry continued to kick out, his foot finally connecting with something that cracked like a nose breaking.
Barry flew forward and in through the window as his assailant let go of his ankle and everyone in the kitchen fell to the floor.
 
Sam,
A great installment, with a suitable cliffhanger of a stopping part!

I look forward to your next installment.
Rest well. Work is important.
We'll keep - anxiously, but we'll keep.

Thanks!
 
Great story, Thanks !
So there is now a killer .... getting more gruesome by the minute !!
How many of our group will survive??
Please continue
Harry
 
Here we go. Managed to get his done faster than I had expected. Enjoy! :D

PART 13 - 2 OF 2

“Grandma, mommy hasn’t phoned yet. Do you think she’s forgotten?” Mitch asked his grandmother, Liz, as he sat in front of the television.
“Forgotten you? That’s not possible!” Liz said brightly, pulling him onto her lap and snuggling him. “I’m sure she’s just got a little busy, I’m sure she’ll phone soon.” She assured him with a little smile. Mitch smiled in return and went back to watching the T.V. Liz shook her head lightly, disappointed in her only daughter and though her eyes were fixed on the television her mind drifted off. She and Mitch were not going to be living here when Paige came home. That was for sure.

*

“Well that was a close one.” Emilie said standing up and brushing herself off. “Nearly got you then Barry!” She laughed.
“This is hardly the time to be laughing, Emilie.” Leona scolded. “Barry could have been killed just then!” Leona glanced to the side and Kevin had flung himself onto Barry and was kissing him all over.
“Well he still might if Kevin doesn’t get off him.” She joked.
Paige stood up and picked up the knife she had dropped on the kitchen counter when she rushed to help pull Barry in and walked to the door, poking her head around it.
“We should be quick.” She whispered. “The killer could be in here any minute.”
“She’s right.” Leona answered. “We should split up. We might find Bella faster and get some information and help from her.”
“I’ve got an idea.” Kevin said suddenly. “BELLA!” He yelled, with his hands cupped to his mouth. “ARE YOU HOME? WE’D LIKE TO HAVE A WORD WITH Y…”
Barry cut him off. “Stop it. That could be potentially dangerous; for her and for us. We need to be as quiet as possible.”
“Well, I’m going with you.” Kevin said, folding his arms. “If we split up, then I’m going with you. Do you know how afraid I am of losing you after that?”
“Fine. Kevin and I will go together. One of you girls want to come with us?” Barry asked, looking at the uncertain faces around him.
“Erm, not trying to question the value of your relationship…” Paige began.
“But, you have only been together, what, a day?” Emilie added.
“I’m sure that what the others are trying to say is that we feel, if we are splitting up, then a boy should be in each of the groups.”
“Why?” Kevin asked furiously. “Sure, Barry would be useful; he’s bigger than me. But I wouldn’t be able to defend any of you better than Emilie. Look at what she did to Paige’s face! I can’t compete with that.”
“There’ll be three of you remember?” Barry added.

*

“Thanks for backing me up in there.” Kevin said as they walked quietly along the hall and found the lounge. “I know it has only been a day, but the amount of time I spent waiting for this time with you has been excruciatingly painful and, now that I have you, I don’t want to let you go. Whoever was trying to pull you back out of the window just then wasn’t getting you without me.” Barry smiled and looked at Kevin, who wasn’t smiling but looking at him intensely. “I mean it Barry. I’m sorry if this freaks you out, but I am never going to let you go.”
“It doesn’t freak me out at all, Kevin. I feel exactly the same as you do. It’s just that we have other pressing matters on our minds here, or at least we should have.” He winked.
“I can’t stop thinking about you. No matter what is going on, all I can think about is you.” Kevin responded earnestly. Their eyes met again neither of them smiling, and as if a magnet was pulling them together, their lips locked in a heated frenzy.

*

Leona, Emilie and Paige walked the opposite way and up the stairs at the end of the hallway.
“So, what we need to do is find Bella, get her car keys or whatever, get the boys and get out of here. If you happen to find a phone, try and use it. Call the police, whoever. You got that?” She asked seriously looking them both in the eye. They both nodded in reply. “Let’s go then.” She sighed nervously.
They reached the top landing and headed to the only room on the floor, which turned out to be Bella’s bedroom.
“Look for car keys, look for car keys…” Paige muttered under her breath as they pulled drawers from their cabinets, looked under the bed, and inside jewellery boxes.
Emilie walked over to the closet, her heart beating loudly as she nervously reached for the handle expecting something to jump out at her. She tugged at the doors and wrenched them open.

*

“Did you hear that?” Kevin asked, pulling his lips away from Barry’s.
“What?” Barry murmured. A bloodcurdling scream came from upstairs.
“That!” Kevin answered, racing for the door, down the hallway and up the stairs with Barry following closely on his heels.
They burst into the bedroom just as the three girls were running out. They all screamed as they startled each other.
“Bella’s in there… dead.” Leona gasped, pointing into the bedroom.
“I’ll go.” Barry volunteered.
“Why?” Paige asked. “It’s a dead body.”
“She might have keys on her.” Barry replied simply disappearing into the room.
“Oh yeah, ‘cause the killer is going to kill her, hide her in the closet and forget to take her keys when it’s our only way out of here.” She muttered, loudly this time, so that everyone could hear. They all just looked glumly through the open door.
“I found them!” Barry called, rushing back out from the bedroom, the keys dangling from his forefinger.
“What were you saying about the killer, Paige? That he’s not as clever as he seems?” Kevin smirked.

*

When they got outside, leaving via the front door this time, they all breathed a sigh of relief. They were filled with a new hope. Yes they had lost Ben, but there was the possibility that the rest of them could make it out alive.
“What is that?” Emilie shrieked, pointing toward the tree line.
Orange flames licked at the air and a pillar of black smoke reached the clouds. Looking closer they could see the shiny metal of Bella’s car twisting in the heat of the flames. The car was on fire.
 
Sam,
I'd say Dylan was pretty succinct in the statement!

Another nail biting chapter. I hope the all grabbed something to fight back with.

That mother fucker is crazy ass mad.

Not to put too fine a point on it!
 
PART 14

Barry collapsed onto the grass and lifted his knees to his chin, curling into the foetal position. Leona clapped both her hands to the side of her face which was streaming with hot tears. Emilie stood with a blank expression on her face, her arms hanging limply by her sides.
“What is it?” Kevin asked, looking around at them all worriedly.
“Do you need fucking glasses?” Leona yelled. “The fucking car is on fire!”
“Well, I’ll guess we’ll be leaving on foot then.” Kevin replied simply. “Forget the car; we have no other choice but to get out of here. Preferably now.” He added.
“Hold on.” Emilie said quickly. “Someone’s missing.”
Barry lifted his head up from the ground. “Where’s Paige?” He asked worriedly, looking around at the others who all shook their heads or shrugged their shoulders.
“When did you last see her?” He asked desperately.
“Back inside the house.” Kevin answered quickly. “I saw her back inside the house.”
“We did too.” Leona added, pointing at herself and Emilie.
Barry made to rush back inside but Kevin stopped him.
“You’re not going in there…”
“But we can’t just leave Paige to die!” He yelled. “What? You would leave her to die in there?” He continued looking around at all of their uncertain faces.
“I’m not sure that she’s trustworthy.” Emilie said quickly.
“Says the one who was forcing us to bring her with us just a few hours ago? Please. She had her chance to kill us all in there with that bloody great knife!” He shrugged himself out of Kevin’s grip. “I don’t care. I’m going back in to get her.”
Kevin caught him again. “You’re not going in there alone.” He said determinedly. “I’m coming with you.”

*​

Paige blinked heavily, lifting her hand to her thumping head. She looked up about her and saw that she was lying in a heap at the bottom of the stairs; she must have tripped when they were all rushing out of the house after finding the keys. The knife, luckily, had flung a few feet in front of her as she fell and she was left unscathed, apart from her thumping head.
“Great.” She muttered, standing up on shaky legs and picking up the knife. “I bet they’ve all just left without me.” She made her wobbly way along the hall right to the end and into the living room. The front door was right there in the centre of the far wall. She began to make her way over to it when something made her turn around slowly; the television was on. “What the…” she mouthed, walking over to it to turn it off. She flicked the button and walked away again. It switched on again. She just flicked her head behind her this time, one eye squinted, her brow furrowed. There was no-one in the room besides her. She went and flicked it off again and brought her hand to her side, her other clutching tightly to the knife. She turned around quickly and screamed as she came face to face with the man who was doing this to them all.
“Mr. Menzies?” She asked shocked. “Oh thank goodness! I thought I was going to be killed.” She smiled in relief and brought her hand to her chest. “What are you doing here?”
His eyes glinted menacingly as he smirked, flashing his white teeth at her. “You are going to be killed, Paige, that’s why I’m here. Oh, and your friends will too.” He added gruffly, still smiling.
“What? I-it’s you… who’s doing this to us?” She asked shocked, fear creeping back inside her. Her hand was grasping the knife so tightly now that her knuckles went white.
“It is indeed. I’ve been after students for years… it’s actually relieving to find ones that I know.” He said, stepping forward, closer to her.
He had no weapon on him, Paige noted. How did he intend to kill her?
“Come any closer and I’ll hurt you. I will have no choice.” Paige raised her voice in panic. He stepped even closer. “I mean it, I’ll stab you!” She added, her bottom lip trembling. He took one more step and she swung the knife at him, missing by inches. She stepped to the side trying to edge towards the front door. He got a little to close once more and she swung heavily again, missing. She had reached the edge of the couch now and that was when he pounced on her forcing her backwards and toppling her over the back of the couch. He threw himself on top of her, wrestling her to the ground. She swung the knife up desperately and caught the side of his face, his hot red blood dripped into her eyes and she blinked furiously still swinging the knife, unable to see. She felt his tight grip on her wrist as he forced it to the floor, he squeezed tightly, cutting of the circulation and her hand, unwillingly, opened letting the knife free. She tried to get up and crawl away quickly, but he pushed against her chest and forced her back to the floor.
“It’ll be a shame to kill a beauty like you.” He whispered.
Paige began to cry, her lips trembling, tears running down the side of her face. “Please don’t kill me.” She sobbed. “Please don’t kill me.”
He grinned evilly, examining the knife slowly.
“You don’t have to do this! Why are you doing this?” She wriggled trying to get free. The television remote was inches from her hand, if she grabbed it and turned the television volume right up it might distract him enough for her to get away, and, if that didn’t work she could always smack him around the head with it. She began to reach for the remote slowly stretching her arm out, Mr. Menzies still keeping a tight grip of her upper arm.
Mr. Menzies stopped examining the knife and caught her, she tried to pull her hand back in but he was too quick and had already swung the knife down. Three of her dismembered fingers lay on the carpet as she lifted her bleeding hand to her mouth sobbing. She was suddenly filled with an unexplainable rage, a survival instinct. Ignoring the pain, she shoved her index finger into his face and poked him in the eye. He howled in pain, clutching his face and rearing back. Paige wriggled her leg free and kicked him in the face. She clambered out from underneath him and used the couch to pull herself up.
He grabbed at her ankle as she made to run away and she tripped falling flat on her face. He climbed on top of her, angrier and less forgiving than before, he flipped her over.
“I want you to see me do it to you.” He growled. He raised the knife above his head, holding her still. She screamed.

*​

“PAIGE!” Barry yelled as he raced back into the house with Kevin hot on his heels. The sight of Paige’s mangled body was not a pleasant one, and with the killer on top of her eyeing them menacingly it made it even more disturbing.
“RUN, KEVIN!” Barry yelled. “I’m right behind you!” They dashed right back outside, they could hear Mr. Menzies following close behind them.

*​

Leona and Emilie stood nervously huddled together, murmuring to each other. Suddenly Barry and Kevin came hurtling out from the house.
“Where’s Paige?” Emilie asked.
“RUN!” Barry yelled, waving his arm at them. “He’s right behind us, GO!”
The four of them ran full pelt towards the woods.
“Not that way, it’s too steep.” Kevin yelled breathlessly. “Keep going that way!” He added pointing to the patch of thicker forest.

*​

“I think we lost him.” Emilie said, stopping, doubling over to get her breath back. The others stopped too, not wanting to leave her behind.
“It’s just about over.” Leona said, patting Emilie on the back. “But I do think we should keep moving while it’s light and we can see.”
“Leona’s right Emilie, even if we just walk. It’ll be safer for us.” Barry said, urging her to keep moving. “You didn’t see what he did to Paige. We all need to get out of here.”
“Barry.” Kevin scolded. “Have a little compassion; I don’t want to discuss Paige here. It’s not right.”
“Let’s keep moving then.” Emilie said, standing back up. “I’m not sure if I’ll keep up with you though.” She added.
“We’re running?” Leona asked her, just to be sure.
“We’re running.” Emilie said determinedly.

*​

After running for at least half an hour the four of them came across a ditch, a very deep ditch; approximately thirty feet deep.
Barry jumped it cleanly and turned around to face the others all standing on the other side. “You’re going to have to jump it.” He said earnestly. “There’s no choice. Come on Kevin.”
Kevin jumped and slipped a little, grabbing Barry to keep himself balanced. Leona jumped next; she landed elegantly and turned around with her arms outstretched to catch her sister.
“Come on Emilie.”
“I can’t make that jump.” Emilie whined.
“Yes you can. Of course you can!” Leona yelled. “What if he catches up with you?”
Emilie looked behind herself quickly and yelled out. “He’s here!”
“Then jump” Kevin yelled.
“I can’t!” Emilie burst into tears.
“Don’t think about it.” Barry said gently. “Just jump and one of us will catch you. I promise.”
“You promise?” Emilie asked.
“We all promise.” Leona soothed.
Emilie, prepared herself for the jump but just as she was about to spring herself forwards Mr. Menzies had caught her and pinned her arms to her sides.
“EMILIE!” Leona shrieked, taking a running jump back over the ditch. Kevin made to go after them both but Barry stopped him.
“What are you doing?” Kevin asked furiously.
“Exactly what you did to me.” Barry replied. “I won’t lose you Kevin, I couldn’t bear it.”
“Barry she’s my best friend, I can’t leave her over there alone.”
“Well I’m your boyfriend, we can’t all die.”
“I went in with you to save Paige, why won’t you help me save Leona and Emilie?” Kevin cried.
“Because it’s no use.” Barry answered, looking at the ground. “At least one of us is going to die saving the other. And it’s not going to be you Kevin.”

*​

Leona punched Mr. Menzies in the face and wrenched Paige free from him, running for the ditch Leona practically threw Emilie over it. Barry caught her just like he had promised. Leona was mid-air when it happened; Mr. Menzies threw the knife and it hit Leona between the shoulder blades. She plummeted into the ditch.
“Leona!” Kevin yelled leaning over the ditch, sobbing. “Leona, say something!”
“Kevin, we have to go.” Barry said pulling his arm. Emilie was on his other side pulling him too.
“The killer’s coming Kevin. We have to go.” She said quietly.
“How can you just leave her, she’s your sister!” He yelled angrily.
“And she knew the risk when she jumped back over to save me. She wouldn’t want to have died for nothing Kevin. Please. We need to go before another one of us dies.”
Kevin shrugged them off and stood up, storming off into the woods.

*​

Going further into the woods, walking slowly, they assumed that the killer was not after them anymore and were looking for a direct route out onto a road, or at least into the open somewhere.
“It gets lighter over there.” Emilie said pointing in a south-easterly direction.
“That could be a way out.” Barry said, speeding up.
“You both make me sick!” He spat. “And you!” He turned on Barry. “If you had let me I could have saved her. She could be walking away from this right now! It’s your fault she’s dead!” He yelled, punching him in the chest. Barry held him tightly. “If I had let you go Kevin, it could be you lying in that ditch and I couldn’t live with myself. I love you and I won’t lose you if I can help it.”
Kevin began to sob into his chest. Emilie burst into tears as well.
“Are we safe?” She asked tearfully. Barry pulled her into the hug.
“We’re safe.” He said warmly. “We’re safe.”
 
I'm not really good at ending stories - it's rare that I actually get there! ;)

Anyway, I think there is going to be one more chapter for you all. For whoever reached this far - an epilogue of sorts.
I think it'll be more for me than for you though, since I need closure from this story! lol

Thank you so much for reading my story and supporting me through it all. It's been an exciting experience and hopefully you'll help me with another one in (hopefully) the near future.

That is all I have to say. xxxx
 
WOW. Its sad that Paige died leaving her son motherless, and Emily's unborn child is now without a father :( Well I cant wait to see how you wrap the story up.
 
Sam,
That was a powerful and horrific almost ending.

I hope they manage to get home safely - one can never be sure. AND get the authorities out there.

This was not my normal genre of preferred reading, but you certainly grabbed onto me and kept my attention.

Thanks for a compelling, if nightmare inducing, read.
 
Skittles,
I love the sentiment!
I fear there's a bit o' geography betwixt and between us to grant you your wish.
 
I am very sad to see the story end!

I'm not. I'm very glad to see it end, actually. It means that I actually managed to finish something and that has given me more confidence for when I go into my new one. :D

Sam,
That was a powerful and horrific almost ending.

I hope they manage to get home safely - one can never be sure. AND get the authorities out there.

This was not my normal genre of preferred reading, but you certainly grabbed onto me and kept my attention.

Thanks for a compelling, if nightmare inducing, read.

I don't think there will be an epilogue anymore I'm afraid. It's finished and, for me, it's done. I need to move on. I hope you can forgive that since I got your hopes up and everything ;)

Shit! Looks like I'm REALLY late to the party. Shall we get the after-party started? ;) Sam, as usual, well done mate. :=D: I love the way you've ended this. It leaves me aching for something more. I seem to recall you mentioning an epilogue? Perfect. I truly would like to thank you for sharing such a wickedly suspenseful story with us, from the bottom of my heart. Cheers mate! (UU)

Thank you so much, you've all been so brilliant in leaving me such nice and encouraging comments - I truly do not think I would have got to the end without you (at least, not as quickly as I managed to anyway, and probably not in the same way!)

Brought tears to my eyes.....but i loved it

Bloody hell!!! Thank you VERY much! :D

WOW!! Will any of them survive??
Well written, Thank you
More please
Harry

Well since this is the end you'll just have to guess whether they live or die... won't you?

Nah. The three of them live and Emilie goes to her parents and eventually has her baby. Barry and Kevin break up because Kevin can't live with Barry after Leona's death.

See I bet you wish I hadn't told you that huh?

Oh wait there's more.
Barry and Kevin get back together and they get a surrogate mother (gorgeous blonde little thing)

And guess what. Leona comes back and demands to know why she isn't the surrogate mother.

There you go. Finished.

Thanks for all of the support, I shall be involved in the NanoWriMo and will, no doubt, put things up here as I type them. Although that may affect my chances of a possible novel publication...
 
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