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Four Miles and Counting

Well, you DID use the guys in more than one story, so far . . .
 
Wow ... thanks DonQ. I'm in reruns!

The Alameda stories have a sequence, so it might help to read them in order.
1. Alameda
2. Eric's Story
3. Rory's Stories
4. Four Miles and Counting.
5. Change at Gallery Place (The scene shifts to Washington, but some of the Alameda guys are in it.)
 
“Lemuel? That doesn't even sound Jewish. It sounds three genes short of Ozark incest.”
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Rory, you are slaying me with all these great lines. How in the world do you come up with all of these? We need a whole section on notable quotes from the writings of Rory. Wonderful stuff.
 
I seriously need to find the time to start re-reading the tales from my favorite authors.

You know how much I enjoyed them the first time around.
 
I would urgently like to insert your penile appendage into my oral cavity without encountering any dental protuberances.' How sexy is that?”
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Another memorable Rory line. They just keep popping up all through the story. Such a talent. I am in awe.
 
So sad the story is over. I feel like I have lost several wonderful friends. I wanted to live in their lives for a much longer time. I was sol relieved that Z and Eric got back together. Their split nearly broke my heart they were such a loving couple. Maybe we can get another sequel after Country Cousins??? This was some fantastic writing, Rory. You really are extremely talented with your insight into the human emotion. The sex was extremely erotic as well, and I have to admit, l learned some things I have never thought of before. Great stuff. The characters were extremely rich and your writing graphically displayed the depths of their individual characters. So much talent. Thank you for Alameda, Rory's Story and Four Miles and Counting. That was a wonderful gift you gave to all of us that had the privilege to read it. We can't that you enough.
 
Change at Gallery Place is next. You'll find a few Alameda friends in it. ..|

Thanks for all your kind comments.
 
EasyRory said:
The Alameda stories have a sequence, so it might help to read them in order.
1. Alameda
2. Eric's Story
3. Rory's Stories
4. Four Miles and Counting.
5. Change at Gallery Place (The scene shifts to Washington, but some of the Alameda guys are in it.)
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Actually, no, Change at Gallery Place preceded Four Miles.

Anyway, I can't thank you enough Rory, for the pleasure your stories have given me. Four Miles was wonderful too, a little darker in places than the preceding ones, and totally satisfying.

Once again, you played with your readers' emotions. I laughed out loud in many places, I was devastated at Eric and Z's breakup, so angry with Eric. I was shocked at Neil's death, was frustrated with Nicky as he lost his way, but then felt a bit sorry for him. I felt warm in every scene with Tom and Heiko.

The last chapter was a very satisfying finale, quite moving in the way it gave us a little update on most of the major characters (except for Darren). But it had an air of finality that suggested we've seen the last of your Alemeda characters. If I'm wrong about that, I'll be very happy.

I'm pleased that I still have several of your stories left to read, so I expect I'll be enjoying your writing for some time yet.

Cheers, HF
 
Loved reading your story for the first time Rory. The name Lemuel brought back memories of a relative who was involved in the US Civil War.

I am now reading your story "Change at Gallery Place" it's a very good story so far.


Brian
 
highflyer99 said:
Actually, no, Change at Gallery Place preceded Four Miles.

Anyway, I can't thank you enough Rory, for the pleasure your stories have given me. Four Miles was wonderful too, a little darker in places than the preceding ones, and totally satisfying.

Once again, you played with your readers' emotions. I laughed out loud in many places, I was devastated at Eric and Z's breakup, so angry with Eric. I was shocked at Neil's death, was frustrated with Nicky as he lost his way, but then felt a bit sorry for him. I felt warm in every scene with Tom and Heiko.

The last chapter was a very satisfying finale, quite moving in the way it gave us a little update on most of the major characters (except for Darren). But it had an air of finality that suggested we've seen the last of your Alemeda characters. If I'm wrong about that, I'll be very happy.

I'm pleased that I still have several of your stories left to read, so I expect I'll be enjoying your writing for some time yet.

Cheers, HF
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Thanks for the nice review. I tried to get back into finishing the latest one, but real life keeps getting in the way.

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bs29697 said:
Loved reading your story for the first time Rory. The name Lemuel brought back memories of a relative who was involved in the US Civil War.

I am now reading your story "Change at Gallery Place" it's a very good story so far.


Brian
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Thanks to you also, Brian
 
I thoroughly enjoy your use of different languages and knowledge of different areas of the US and Europe. And the Peralta and Wittelsbach families are really. I finally looked up the last name of Afragola out of curiosity, wondering where you got it, and found out it was a location in Italy. I know there is so much of those little details that I have missed in your writings. Thank you for writing.
 
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