POETRY - Can you write a Poem?

[Lefty]

if it hurts you know its real
thats the way its sposed to feel

not just bruised or pus filled crud
there more to pain than just the blood

theres other ways to make it hurt
drag their souls deeper through the dirt

just pick the race and then pick the creed
slake your thirst and on them you may feed

oh my god it's plain they can not see
they ain't as good as you and me.

 

[Lefty]

His pole was stiff
Still smelled of quiff

But I licked it very dry
And that was the very first try.

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Hold this thought

It is far better to have a small prick...
then it is to be a big one

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Penis..penis on the wall
into the pussy it did fall
Penis..penis in the hole
was that really your final goal
Penis..penis come back here
We can suck then have a beer.

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See what happens when you guys ignore me and make me play with myself?

 

[ShihTzuTylenol]

Tzu,
I wasn't quite sure which direction you were coming from with Human Pyramids I & II.
The Pyramids made by the back breaking labor of the mass of humanity, or were WE the actual "stones made of bones" - then where is the mortar locking you to me?

Way-da-seck

...**touchin' it with finger**
that ain't mortar dq.......EEEEWWW! I'ma need a wet wipe dude -- where'd I put the fuckin' diaper bag?

 

[ShihTzuTylenol]

about human pyramids part iii
by
ShihTzuAllenPoe

a hummingbird feeder
hangs away from frisky
an aging cheerleader
limps around all misty
eyed and stiff as wire
his veins are on fire
he misses the game
the friday night fame
the friends -- the cock
now in bed @ ten o'clock

 

[ShihTzuTylenol]

His pole was stiff

You got my attention!
Good start sir.

Still smelled of quiff

Quiff? Does that mean pussy fart? *spoiler alert* censored for vulgarity

But I licked it very dry
And that was the very first try.

Taking one for the team, that's a happy ending with a happy ending. hehe

Hold this thought

It is far better to have a small prick...
then it is to be a big one

Timeless and profound with a hint of social commentary to make it poignant.

Penis..penis on the wall
into the pussy it did fall
Penis..penis in the hole
was that really your final goal
Penis..penis come back here
We can suck then have a beer.

suckin' suds and beer, two of my favorite pass times hehe

See what happens when you guys ignore me and make me play with myself?

**plays wiv Lefty's thingy to help out**

 

[DonQuixote]

LeftyCuss PoetiCuss,
Mayhaps, dear Sir,
with a bit o' Fur,
We more oft should leave you
to your own device,
Your first offering was quite nice.

Your second set,
a trio of rhyme,
merrily did help us
pass the time.

Then there is Tzu,
How we've missed you,
and your merriment strange
some might e'en say "queer"

But, from us,
you've nothing to fear,
For we're accustomed to
your manner and mirth,
and have from your levity
had laughs give birth.

I wonder how Edgar,
our Mr. Allen Poe,
Would react if he were to know
You're masquerading around here as kin
to the master of macabre, him.

 

[DonQuixote]

Molotov,
There was only a tiny bit of non-symmetry.
Against the weight of the monumental Poetry
and the message conveyed by the "innocent beast"
Who asked not to be this immortal threat
in the least.

It was powerful imagery, leaving us rooting for the werewolves
and against the inhumanity of man.

 

[EJMichaels]

See what happens when you guys ignore me and make me play with myself?

Good to know.

And thanks, Tzu, for help with that word. I learn a lot here.

 

[DonQuixote]

JUB,
A TRUE Service Venue.
Happy to educate and inform - whether you're ready for it or not, lol.

Happy Halloween, one and all.
Welcome to the Celebrity Ball . . .

I understand Craig Ferguson did the Monster Mash on his show the other night.
Damn, I wish I could stay up late and play.

 

[ShihTzuTylenol]

Good to know.

And thanks, Tzu, for help with that word. I learn a lot here.

lol I'm just impressed that our Lefty is so in touch with contemporary pop culture to know the medical term for pussy fart.
mmmm yeah, aaaaw, aaaw *poot!* AAAAW YOU DI'IN'T! GROSS!

 

[Lefty]

^
Don't you mean

Contemptible Poop culture?

 

[DonQuixote]

WHAT am I going to DO
With the Two of YOU?

He smelled of Quiff
But still was stiff
when you took a sniff

So you went to town
and got down
to lick all around
with nary a frown

Then you flipped on your back
So he, your Crack
Could Pack

Full of Cream,
It was like a Dream
You almost did Scream.

Now you "Kiss" and tell
Did it NOT go well?
I'm sure it was "hell"
getting pumped in the well
as his tree did fell.

 

[freefall]

Tzu, your human pyramid sets are amazing. I'm working on a project which approaching is exactly like yours---a simple thing viewed from many points that it's dispersed yet convergent. The second part is the most powerful, especially when the first two verses supports the horror of the last two...

And somehow I enjoy the idea of throwing bodies down from top of high structure

Will there be another Human Pyramid series?

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Qui, your latest work is---I don't know; maybe it's just me---disturbing. I imagine a lover who witnessed his lover having affair and killing the affair after sex.

Graphic. Intense. Mischievous. Yet enticing...

Like watching Pulp Fiction.

 

[freefall]

Forget my latest works --- it has direct link to Madonna's Bedtime Story, which is partially the source of inspiration for this work

Diabolic Sacrament

A girl immersed in ink-stained water
Twin dancers and mimics assuring grooves
Children as statues, gasp to the passing
The pale goddess of disquieting creepy tales
Eyes to speak, a single mouth to witness
Thin scarves serve as sails for dreams
Develop doves in scaffolds and set free
A trembling bedside superstitious monster

Not a while
I drown a breathe
You can bend not
My sly smirk
Stimulating you
My lust clutches
Tight to the screen
I am knocked
I am vulnerable
To be raped
And to satisfy
Your vicious satire

Thoughtless manners
Thoughtless speeches
Thoughtless doings

Climax is near
You know you yearn it
Do not yield for
Logical feelings
They do not exist
Here and there
Now and then
I open my lock
Paralyse the minds
You shall be my prince
Ready to claim
The long sought prize

Let us impregnate
Let us impersonate
Let us participate
Let us precipitate
Let us communicate
Let us complicate
Let us fascinate
Let us facilitate

Mindless actions
Mindless passions
Mindless searchings

Words are useless, especially sentences
They fail to explain my emotions
Not functioning anymore again

Levitating alone in the dark emptiness
While sighing and moaning in pleasure
Here the diabolic sacrament creates a realm
Fearing dimensions of underrated fantasy
Embraced by ancient cursed skeleton guardians
For lifeless symbols used to be engraved
On the bottom of pools soaked in sorrow

I jerk off
You rock on
I inhale
You exhale
Tremors vibrate
The sweat screams
The blood reacts
Rhythmically pulsates
Yet irregularly leaps
To a higher level
Where all reveries
Shall come true

Let us untie
Let us unite
Careless surges

 

[DonQuixote]

Qui, your latest work is---I don't know; maybe it's just me---disturbing. I imagine a lover who witnessed his lover having affair and killing the affair after sex.
Graphic. Intense. Mischievous. Yet enticing...
Like watching Pulp Fiction.

FreeFall,
I find your reaction to my "latest work" amusing.
I was just trying to put to rhyme my comments on the "intercourse"
of our two funky friends, Lefty and Tzui, lol.


So, if you need anyone to [STRIKE]blame[/STRIKE] give Praise to, it would be THAT dynamic duo, lol.

 

[Lefty]

You weren't meant to curse
When you read my simple verse
I've written so very much worse
That was far tougly and adverse
And some they said was sad and terse

Some tried to put me in to the back
of something shiny long and black
It probably was just a cadillac
To leave me as a buzzards snack
All this because of skills they said I lack

I rode a bit in that old hearse
Thinking thoughts I had made perverse
Seething angers I craved to nurse
And Yet no tears would I disperse
Nor trembled lips could I make purse

Now I take a different tack
And my brain I will soon rack
To find words I once did lack
As these threads I did hack
Now again I'll take a crack.

(GROAN)

 

[DonQuixote]

Tzu - Leftyls looking for Volunteers, again.

Freefall, I haven't forgotten your verse - need more time to read it.
Gotta depart for a bit.

 

[Lefty]

I didn't realize that was going to be a new page. I hate to be the start of

a page.....if it's bad or dumb, it seems like forever before the page is full

and you're off the hook.

Just as bad as being last if (for the same kind of reason) you want it to be

done 'cause lots of people look to see what they missed.

Getting sloppy in my super parachronistic stage I guess .

 

[DonQuixote]

Freefall,
Talk about "disturbing" verse, lol.

Methinks I'm going to have to read your poem a time or three
afore it begins to sink in to me.

That's pretty heady and discordant verse.
Methinks it might even be perverse!

 

[DonQuixote]

Lefty,
Be EVER vigilant and full of care,
if you're afraid that Shite might be there, lol.