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Post 888

Once upon a time, in the far away Kingdom of Adelaidia, there lived a young man named Crelwyn but as that was too difficult for the townspeople to pronounce, they just called him Crowboy. One day, while in the field tending to his pigs, Crowboy came upon a small, polished stone. As he leant over to pick up the stone, Crowboy heard a sharp, harsh voice behind him telling him to back away slow.

Crowboy turned around to face this stranger with a smirk on his face. Due to the sun in his eyes, he couldn't quite make out the mans face. Crowboy said in a seductive tone, "If it's sex you want, than sex you'll get" and with that, he proceeded to unbutton his pants. The stranger was mortified, as his only intention was to preserve the field in its original state. As Crowboy approached, the stranger ran back to his house.

Later that night whilst Crowboy was watching his favourite program "Bag Girls Club", he was interrupted by a phone call. It was the local police. They informed him that due to an earlier incident, someone was pressing charges against him for sexual assault.

Little did Crowboy know, that stranger was well respected in his town. In fact, that stranger just so happened to be...

his father.

A well known subversive and lefty who had a reputation for going down...under

and always taking sombody with.

Crow boys straight right rite practices so incensed his dear old dad the poor man

flamed out and blew the erection to City Father. Seeking revenge on that tight

ass boy he stopped in at the Jiffy Lube and...

...and approached the counter. Crowboy wasn't sure what they were doing there. As his father approached the counter, Crowboy stood and waited. The Jiffy Lube was hot, and stuffy. Having spent his day in the field, Crowboy had had little to drink and was not beginning to feel particularly parched, and somewhat nauseated. The room began to spin, and not knowing quite what to do, Crowboy made a dash through the door.

The cooler air hit him with unabashedly, and he ran faster and faster, trying to capture as much of it as it could. It was calming, he felt. As he ran, he heard behind him his father yelling for him to stop. He didn't want to. He ran further, and further until he couldn't hear anything.

Not quite knowing where he was going, and still a little dizzy from the spinning room, Crowboy tripped, and tumbled, and then everything went dark...

:gogirl:
 
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Oh, dang. It's my story.

Um.

Can someone bump this thread for a day or so until I work out what's happening with Crowboy in my story?
 
...and approached the counter. Crowboy wasn't sure what they were doing there. As his father approached the counter, Crowboy stood and waited. The Jiffy Lube was hot, and stuffy. Having spent his day in the field, Crowboy had had little to drink and was not beginning to feel particularly parched, and somewhat nauseated. The room began to spin, and not knowing quite what to do, Crowboy made a dash through the door.

The cooler air hit him with unabashedly, and he ran faster and faster, trying to capture as much of it as it could. It was calming, he felt. As he ran, he heard behind him his father yelling for him to stop. He didn't want to. He ran further, and further until he couldn't hear anything.

Not quite knowing where he was going, and still a little dizzy from the spinning room, Crowboy tripped, and tumbled, and then everything went dark...

:gogirl:


Crowboy regained consciousness after feeling drops of water falling on him. He had fallen down an old, abandoned (but thankfully shallow) mine shaft. He stuggled to his feet and looked up at the sky some twenty feet above him. He was surely trapped.

Stumbling around, he noticed that there was a small, low passageway, long since forgotten, leading horizontally away into the darkness. There was nothing to do but follow it, hoping that it would lead to freedom. He brushed away some loose rocks and foliage, and crawled, slowly, on his stomach, into the pitch black.

It was alarming how quickly the light faded, and he scratched his hands on the rock, fumbling around for the way forward. It was damp and claustrophobic, and Crowboy had to muster up all his courage and strength to proceed.

After what seemed like an eternity, he had to stop and rest. His eyes had got adjusted to the dark, and now, he spotted something he hadn't noticed before - a very faint light emanating far ahead of him. Encouraged by this, he pushed on, the faint light guiding him.

The passageway rapidly opened up into what seemed to be an enormous cavern, and, struggling to his feet, Crowboy gasped in wonder, because, now in front of him, was................
 
Crowboy regained consciousness after feeling drops of water falling on him. He had fallen down an old, abandoned (but thankfully shallow) mine shaft. He stuggled to his feet and looked up at the sky some twenty feet above him. He was surely trapped.

Stumbling around, he noticed that there was a small, low passageway, long since forgotten, leading horizontally away into the darkness. There was nothing to do but follow it, hoping that it would lead to freedom. He brushed away some loose rocks and foliage, and crawled, slowly, on his stomach, into the pitch black.

It was alarming how quickly the light faded, and he scratched his hands on the rock, fumbling around for the way forward. It was damp and claustrophobic, and Crowboy had to muster up all his courage and strength to proceed.

After what seemed like an eternity, he had to stop and rest. His eyes had got adjusted to the dark, and now, he spotted something he hadn't noticed before - a very faint light emanating far ahead of him. Encouraged by this, he pushed on, the faint light guiding him.

The passageway rapidly opened up into what seemed to be an enormous cavern, and, struggling to his feet, Crowboy gasped in wonder, because, now in front of him, was................

...the vast empty blackness of the cavern, broken by the light of a small flickering flame. Around it, four hooded men stood, head bowed, solemnly chanting something he could not hear.

He held his breath, not wanting to draw attention to his inadvertent intrusion.

As he watched, the hooded men slowly circled the flame. He curiosity piqued, Crowboy slowly crept closer. His attention fixed on the chanting men, he did not watch where he was going and slipped on a loose pebble with a low dull thud.

The hooded men stopped their chanting and turned to him, their eyes piercing into the intruder. Crowboy turn to run, but was not quick enough to elude two of the men, who caught him by the arms and dragged him back towards the flame. Crowboy did not know what to do. Near the flame, his eyes burned as they adjusted.

Up close, he could see the hooded men a little better. One of the hooded men turned to address him, his voice sharp and unfriendly.

"Who dares intrude upon the High Priests of JUB? SPEAK!"

Crowboy opened his mouth to answer, but did not quite know what to say.

"SPEAK! WHO ARE YOU?" Another of the hooded men asked him.

"I...I...I don't know," Crowboy answered, surprised at his inability to answer so simple a question. As the four men stood staring at him, he thought again, and again no answer came. The question remained.

"Who am I?"
 
"Who am I?"

Were these fellas Vorlons?

Where is the shadow to ask me "what do I want?"

Nerd Alert

This would be a possibly obscure nerd reference.

If you know what I am talking about I would like to :kiss: you.

If you know what I am talking about and smiled when you read it, I would like to :sex: you.

btw I think I should say I am claustrophobic. :confused: :eek:

Next update, next update, pleeeeeease. :D
 
^ Dammit - I should have got that! ](*,) I knew full well who they were, and all about them!

I was initially thinking about the creatures that lived underground in The Time Machine, but they turned out to be the Morlocks. #-o

And now I won't get a :kiss: from crowboy. :cry:

...the vast empty blackness of the cavern, broken by the light of a small flickering flame. Around it, four hooded men stood, head bowed, solemnly chanting something he could not hear.

He held his breath, not wanting to draw attention to his inadvertent intrusion.

As he watched, the hooded men slowly circled the flame. He curiosity piqued, Crowboy slowly crept closer. His attention fixed on the chanting men, he did not watch where he was going and slipped on a loose pebble with a low dull thud.

The hooded men stopped their chanting and turned to him, their eyes piercing into the intruder. Crowboy turn to run, but was not quick enough to elude two of the men, who caught him by the arms and dragged him back towards the flame. Crowboy did not know what to do. Near the flame, his eyes burned as they adjusted.

Up close, he could see the hooded men a little better. One of the hooded men turned to address him, his voice sharp and unfriendly.

"Who dares intrude upon the High Priests of JUB? SPEAK!"

Crowboy opened his mouth to answer, but did not quite know what to say.

"SPEAK! WHO ARE YOU?" Another of the hooded men asked him.

"I...I...I don't know," Crowboy answered, surprised at his inability to answer so simple a question. As the four men stood staring at him, he thought again, and again no answer came. The question remained.

"Who am I?"

"I.... I'm C-Crowboy," he stuttered, still in shock.

"Crowboy? What sort of foolish name is this?" barked the Priest Master. "This was a name given to you by the unbelievers from up above!" He was clearly angry, and losing patience fast. "Speak your real name! Now!"

"Crelwyn."

There was a stunned silence. The four priests stood in disbelief for what seemed forever.

The Priest Master moved towards Crowboy, and lowered his hood, revealing an aged, white-haired, but harsh-looking man, tired and drawn in his face, and with a piercing stare. His expression was aggressive, yet somehow quizzical. When he next spoke, it was with a quieter, but still threatening voice.

"You claim to be Crelwyn, of the Kingdom of Adelaidia?"

One of the other hooded figures spoke from the side before Crowboy could answer further.

"Master, could the prophecy be true after all?"

He was quickly put in his place by a sharp stare and a raised hand from the Priest Master. Attention was returned to Crowboy. Skepticism, almost to the point of mockery, was plain to see on the Priest Master's face.

"We shall soon determine the truth of this matter!" He finally pronounced. "Bring him! Quickly!"

The Priest Master set off at a brisk and purposeful pace towards the back of the cavern. Crowboy was urged along between two of the hooded figures. At length, a large passageway, this time clearly man-made and paved, with torches hanging from the walls, stretched before them. At a distance in front, the Priest Master abruptly turned into another, more hidden, corridor, at the end of which stood a large, bolted wooden door, set into the wall. A large and ornate silver key was produced from the Priest Master's robes. Crowboy noticed, as he was ushered towards the door, how the other men seemed to fall back slightly. One of them voiced his concerns.

"Master, is it wise to show this stranger and unbeliever such things without any proof?"

"We need to know the truth of the matter, and we need to know it now!" was the reply, as the door was unbolted and the key was turned in the lock. "You say you are Crelwyn, ha!" mocked the Priest Master. He was now smiling grimly.

"Then prove it!"

And with that, the door was flung open to reveal................
 
^ Dammit - I should have got that! ](*,) I knew full well who they were, and all about them!

I was initially thinking about the creatures that lived underground in The Time Machine, but they turned out to be the Morlocks. #-o

And now I won't get a :kiss: from crowboy. :cry:

Is a :kiss: all you were after. There was something else, if you smiled. ;)

Oh well have (*8*) one of these instead.

Kuli seems to have gotten it.

I looooooove B5. One of my favourite shows.

Loving the story too.

I want to know, what is behind that door?

:( :eek: :help: :D
 
The very heart and soul of the Crowboy/Crelwyn. Twisting turning searing from the intense heat generated by the hatred and jealousy of misbegotten souls forced
to labour until the millenium falcon would be able seize the day.

Alas, the blast furnace effect smote Crelwyn within his breast where once is caring loving heart and nurturing soul resided. With an ear piercing shriek the poor boy succombed to the gut wrenching internal anguish melting to the blackend earth in a quivering mass.

At that very moment in time the wall and the ceiling overhead began.........
 
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