Thankfully brief

[Lefty]

A cold day in hell? How stupid is that? Its a 110 degrees in here and the place is packed with fevered spastic throbbing bodies. At best barely clad and that in tatters...residual ecstacy dripping from noses. KY jelly and trojan foils on every table, the music screaming from 40 speakers and the band on stage don't even need the mikes.

OK. a stupid name for the hottest fucking gay gathering place in the Bay area. Only thing stupider is me, the owner and only guy in the place without a hook-up.

Fucking Larry done it again.....I can just hear him...Paul, Paul I promise, we open a new club...a fresh start...a new chapter in our book of life. Please Paul, I promise.

Right, what a gullible moron....got a fucking bridge for sale I'm buying. OK..suck it up. Reality time. Never mind those tousled gold locks and deep sea green eyes. Forget his impish grin and muscled torso. So what if his voice makes your cock tingle and his can barely be contained in an oversize Speedo, virtually 10 inches of magic wand he uses like the fairy godfather he is.........

Or was, he lays here backstage bleeding out. the rich little bookworm has finally turned..eh, for me 20 years maybe more...or just a really really cold day in the cell and then the peace that comes in the after life.

---maybe I should stick to reading

 

[Autolycus]

I somehow missed this short yet deep and provoking piece.

There could be a story here but its brevity tells more than just words can ever say!

 

[ShihTzuTylenol]

Wow, I get it...that's absolutely wonderful, Lefty.
I love that you've wrapped an entire novel's worth of material into a few choice lines and yet it's infinitely more than a mere blurb. Your prose read brilliantly.
I'd venture to say you've arguably created a piece of art here.

I can imagine Bill Curtis narrating this sorted tale on an episode of American Justice.

 

[Lefty]

It was going to be a poem but

The alliteration got me in a rut

Then I thought to write the tale

But knew with ADS I could fail

If you guys are telling it true.

I blush and honestly...Thank You.

 

[Kyanimal]

Thank You, Lefty!

Strong imagery and narrative, there! I'd say that piece of prose is just about as close to poetry as you can get, without it being considered such.

Truly ... pretty darned AWESOME!!

Keep smilin'!!
Chaz

 

[DonQuixote]

Lefty,
All these months and you didn't toot your own horn.
I didn't even know this was sitting out here, waiting to be read.

You wonder why I was confused?

As Chaz and Tzu and Auto have said - a very powerful, poignant piece.
Haunting. Leaves us reeling.

 

[Lefty]

Judge Judy type....bit dykey but steel moral backbone snapped her honey brown
eyes and deep from within that bountiful bosom pealed forth her final edict.

"Guilty, guilty but with mitigating circumstances." OH MY GOD...what was the
great ball buster Bitch doing? I shuddered and cursed my parents for that
sloppy tryst at the lake. Cussed Eros himself for conjoining those hot and
sweaty loins....that massive sword thrust into the too tight scabbard and then
his spilling my very essence allover he grass shooting torrents of seed deep
within her virgin..oh Christ...that wasn't her ass and at that moment...
the two little stars of the Homecoming Parade made a critical need
for a home of their own, cradle and all..

The Judge gave a surreptitious glance to the famed family jewels and grimacing
with distaste showed her true colors as a believer in human rights. The court-
room hushed as she continued..." The prisoner is guilty of animal lust of the first
degree...he is guilty of bestial rage in the first degree....he is guilty of an all
consuming love and jealousy leading to his final guilt which I deem as Second
Degree murder with aggravation."

" Let the record show that Larry Jones was ruled by his genitals and those
massive bits of flesh made him an unkind man. Paul Jubber has issues and
will undergo treatment while remanded as a guest of this state. Due to those
issues of blatant sexual need and consideration of his ahem endowments he
will be assigned to our Napa facility where his anatomy bot front and rear can
be covered and protected adequately. Paul, upon detumescence you may come
forth and approach the bench. We will give you a short period to plea for an
extended leniency and to prostrate before the court telling of your years since
puberty that caused you to run so amoral a life and eventually amok."
--------
Well jurors...should we leave this at thankfully brief or? It could get juicy....
My 'life story' didn't originally plan on extra chapters....but a few posters may have
stirred the flame of my trencher infested imagination.....
your call.

 

[DonQuixote]

Lefty,
Your keen, excising wit has kept the scalpel at the ready, trimming verbosity from your sad, yet somehow salacious, tale (careful, it sounds as if the honorable judge lesbo desires to take said scalpel and surgically excise your sexuality from your Tail).

You bring the roughness of one who has fought his way through life, tooth and nail, to the story. The whirlwind of emotions of being on a train headed for Hell, out of control. What happens next to our Rocky Balboaesque protagonist piques our pensive grey matter.

I bid thee caution, sir. We, your humble audience and harshest critics may have sprung a trap. I know another author on this site who started out intending to write nothing more than a short series of interest; said story now numbers over 250 chapters, with each installment perhaps 6-10pp of a typical word processed document.

Given your prolific, and perhaps penurious pen pertaining to other pen names on this platform, you have provoked(?) personal praise in kind from the most seasoned of JUBbernauts. Pray for mercy, for they are discovering your work and providing comment. May He grant mercy on your wretched soul.

Seriously, keep at it, our Loquacious Literary Lord. If you write it, we will come. (As to whether we Cum, that will depend on the twists and turns of your sordid story.)

 

[Kulindahr]

Whoa.

As usual, I fairly fail to follow your fluid flow of fanciful prose!

That first installment... just when I was starting to like the style, it flared off into some realm foreign to me... I lost it.

The second -- loads of laughs, literally!

 

[Autolycus]

Hey Lefty! How we love a man who rises to the occasion - a man who proudly fills his 'briefs'

 

[Lefty]

Larry gone. Departed. never again to darken my door or brighten my day.
That too turgid flesh, the crimson oozing from sparkless eyes. Oh god this
agony forever etched in my blackend soul.

Stop....stop, please god stop.. I can't forget those lust laden nights, my minds
ear vibrating moans of greedy lovemaking mingling with the oceans hungry roar.
His incredible rampant cock , the throbbing head bursting past my bladder deep..
oh god so deep within.. Even now feeling his swollen eggs sliding on my crack...
I sense his salty froth bursting the too tight trojan and the flooding of my bowels
like foaming waves hitting the shore.

the hairy chest sweating...heaving, muscles slack and penis sated. The bruised
lips first seeking mine..oh god how i remember...and my prick 10 enraged pulsating
inches of antagonized flesh hitting the bottom of his throat......sweet release...mo...
ther of god ....the steaming emotions laid even barer than our nerveless bodies.

Thankfully brief Larry, the rest of my life, thankfully brief....your guhguhgood bye to
me the tortured tormented gift of Aids. My gift to you a silver bullet and pain that was
thankfully brief.
-----------------------------------30 ??-----------------------------------------------

Well, shall Paul live or? Three ways to go...Judge Judy.... Paul carries on....

or the story ends here..... quite literally...........Thankfully brief

Thanks for looking in

 

[ShihTzuTylenol]

You're an amazing story teller, sir.
I'm so tickled that Autolycus found your note pad stuffed away in the bottom drawer and laid it upon the deck top. Don't stop writing Lefty, you have too much, nay, we have too much to lose without your wonderful little tales.

 

[freefall]

The jump of parts really perplexed me. Yet it is so charming and bewildering in its mischievous nature...

The first and the second part tickles my curiousity about something set half-covert in the half-tightly woven words---like feelings shown but only partially so as to make us ponder.

And just as I start to guess the underlying story, the third part abruptly introduce a brand new unexpected stage! Quite contrarily murders the prejudice set by the previous parts.

The story is so organic; it's like you're creating a living body that tells a story instead of words which are left to elaborate themselves. This is too exciting and too puzzling to end here. You must continue, dear Sir, you have to, the story has yet reached 10-inch long of thrill!

 

[DonQuixote]

Lefty,
I do believe our dear Freefall has enunciated it quite clearly -
You ain't off the hook yet, baby.
We want more.
You write quite vividly, if a bit chaotically, careening down the highway of love/lust, losing your soul in the process?

 

[EJMichaels]

What everyone else has been saying!

Lefty, you're an inspiration. I look forward to another wild ride with you.

 

[Kulindahr]

The manner of writing vividly conveys the torment in the mind of the narrator. Mangled prose here communicates more clearly than a smooth flow.

 

[Lefty]

Update or upchuck (right, just try getting chuck to hold still)

Paul, a very rich, very hung, very cursed with what has been DNA ladened
with hyper-testonerosity for years. The little bookworm and descendant of
a Royal British Lord, has been on trial in Ohio for the murder of his lover, the golden surfer boy Larry....Judge Judy (a bit of a butch biker aka "eJ"
on weekends) has remanded him to the State prison for the criminally Insane
in Atascadero, CA. Most of this diary is his penning of those thoughts on his
journey from the State Courthouse in Columbus to his new home and beyond.
Paul killed Larry after Larry mistakenly told him They probably had Aids as Larry
had been a bareback slut while Paul was visiting family in the old country and
tidying affairs in Yorkshire.

We will resume with Paul. hands shackled behind him and bladder about to
burst.....beinf led to the urinals by Baliff Don "Q" on loan from the protection witness programof Rochester NY.

-------------

Oh piss, I gotta go bad.....my dick is gonna rip out of the flimsy prison pants...
great...a fcking boner....10 inches of stiff meat and how the hell am I gonna pee. Oh fuck, I hope the Q on that guys tag means queer 'cause when he unleashes that monster....oh my god....his gentle fingers caressing my burgeoning cockhead.....I can almost feel him moving the hood.....oh..oh..uh oh....2 weeks alone...a 24 hr surveilence cell...oh god '''''''''''''''''''''qod Q's ass
and that obscene bulge....shit.....I just..oh Crumbs...bloody fucking hell how do
I explain the spunk across my trouser front......oh god I just want to die right nowl....Larry larry you barstid this is all your fault...burn in hell.

"honest Doc, 2years as a cop and I ain't never had one piss his pants and pass
out headfirst i my lap before. What? thathuge wet spot isn't no piss? what the fuck are you say...no, no way...I'm stuck with this fritfly all the way to....
no...no way....they don't pay me enough for this...not 24/7 not no how not no way.........What? Judge Judy says do it or 60 days for contempt of court...My ass, fuck this its the fucking tempt of my ass that scares me shitless. He has
syphliss or aids or crabs or something and I...I gots a wife and kids..man...I
don't need that shit rubbing off on me....Doc...ell 'em I'm sick....anything oh fuck me...fuck me...what did I ever do to deserve this."

Paper gown....arm cuffed to a bed rail....what the fuck is that itching at my ball end....and where is that billie berk I was off to the loo with when I went arse
over tit and kissed his bullocks on my ... on my what? oh kay I just can't recall except the bit with the blues and twos....dizzy now.....------------

______________________________________________________

Vote time folks.......I can always go make cream cheese and ham sandwiches
() easier than sitting here.......speak now or come hold my piece....oops.

was that a misquote?

 

[DonQuixote]

Lefty,
You are a SICK bastard, alright. And that's why we love you so much, lol.

I got potentially contaminated cum on me, huh?
Why am I itching so bad? Did that fucknut Larry give me crabs, or worse?
Just from trying to do the right fucking thing and help him relieve his fucking bladder?!

Damn that biker bitch judge. It's just not fair. Why the Hell is a convict from OH, found guilty of Murder - a STATE crime, being transferred to a fucking mental prison in California?! Ohio doesn't have their own mental prisons? And, how the fuck did I get myself caught up in this shit? Yeah, the travel/hazard pay is good.
Helps cover the bills. But, still. Shit, damn, piss, cocksucker, motherfucker, cunt, SHIT ON A STICK! He blew his fucking CUM Load? Just from me helping him get his peter out to take a fucking piss? And now I've got Crabs, or WORSE?!

Where's my gun? Where's my damed gun? I'm gonna go SHOOT the miserable cocksucking motherfucking (although, I guess in this case that would be FATHERfucking) ASSHOLE!

(Other than THAT, carry on. Where's the next chapter? I can hardly wait to see what you have cooked up for Gus and Chaz. And, I bet Freefall's gonna fall HARD when you get around to adding HIM to this little saga of yours)

 

[Kyanimal]

Hey! How the Hell did I end up getting (potentially) involved in this?

Other than being perched on the edge of my chair waiting for More?

Keep smilin'!!
Chaz

 

[DonQuixote]

Hi, Chaz.
Sorry if I invited you into the fray, lol.

I figured you were one of the gang and, the more the merrier.

See what you get for being such a great guy and member of the "club"? lol