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The Tide Began to Rise

Ok guys, i have Chapter 9 and 10 written i just need to type them up. which io think that i will do today. It is stormy out and i dont feel like being naked in the rain and lightning. so i will get them up today. they are shorter chapters but at least it is an update. i havent been up to writing since i been here, so be happy that i got this done. lol
 
The Tide Began to Rise
Chapter 9


<Brent’s POV>
I watched Tyler walk up to his front door. I’m lucky to have met and become friends with him. Anyone would be lucky enough to have the chance to do so. He is the perfect example of how you shouldn’t judge a book by the cover. He hides his feelings underneath the long dark clothes. My guess is he does that in the hopes he won’t let anyone inside that could hurt him.

I watched as he went inside and closed that door. I reached over to put the car into reverse. I looked over and saw that Tyler had left his bag. I turned off the car, grabbed the bag, and started walking up towards the house. As I got closer, I heard screaming. Not yelling, but screams of someone in pain. I listened harder and realized it was Tyler that was screaming out. I pulled my phone out and called 911.

“911, what is you emergency?”

“You need to get to 208 Fairview Dr, Right now. It’s life or death. And send an ambulance.” I hung up the phone.

I ran the rest of the way to the door. I busted the door in. When the door flung open, I stopped dead, I was frozen in tracks. I couldn’t believe what I was seeing. This man, who had to be Tyler’s father, has one hand around Tyler’s throat and with his other hand held a gun. He was pointing it at a terrified woman. She had to be Tyler’s mom.

Without thinking, I raced towards the man. I tackled him with all the force I could muster. But I was too late. Just as I made contact with him, he pulled the trigger. She dropped to her knees and put her hands over her chest and fell to her side.

I stood up as fast as I could, and before the guy could regain his composure, I kicked him in the head. He was unconscious. I turned and went to Tyler. I bent down and heard “I love you Brent.” Tyler stopped breathing. I began CPR. I didn’t know what I was doing, just that I saw in movies.

Someone hit me from behind. I looked at who it was. It was Tristan. I stood up and punched him as hard as I could right square in the face. As I did I heard sirens outside. The cops had arrived. They came in and grabbed both me and Tristan. I managed to break free and rush back to Tyler.

I grabbed his hand and said “I love you to Tyler, don’t leave. You can’t be gone.” I started to cry. The paramedics came in and started CPR. They put him on a gurney and took him to the ambulance. I had to stay behind and tell the cops what I saw. I did the best I could with Tyler’s well being on my mind. Everything had happened so fast. After a while I couldn’t take it anymore. I told the cops that I would finish later. I went to me car and drove to the hospital.

When I got there, I asked where Tyler was. They told me he was in surgery. They told me they got him breathing but he hasn’t regained consciousness. I asked what he was in surgery for. They told me that for sure they know he was a broken nose, a broken leg, and a broken arm. The receptionist told me that when the x-rays are down, they will know more.

I sat down in the waiting room. “Was there more that I could have done?” I started to beat myself up. “I should have walked him to the door. That way I could have stepped in sooner.” Tears started to fill my eyes. “Tyler is the first guy that I have ever held feelings for.” The tears started to fall down my cheeks. They fell off my face. As they hit the floor, the only sound that I could hear was the one the splash the tear made. Time seemed to slow down. Everything went into slow motion. My sobs seemed to be the only thing that went normal speed.

After 2 hours, a doctor came out and asked for the family of Tyler Cox. I walked up and told him I was the only person here for Tyler.

“Well, I would prefer if you were family. I can tell you care about him, so I will tell you. As I’m sure the nurses told you, Tyler has a broken arm, nose, and leg. When we took some x-rays, we found that he also has two broken ribs. One of which pierced his lung. He is still in surgery, and should be alright. I will come back out and let you know if anything else comes up.

I told the doctor thank you. He walked away and I sat back down to wait. “Should I call someone to let them know? Who would I call?” I thought about whom Tyler’s friends are, who I saw him spending the most time with. Then it came to me, Brianna. “She might know what was going on with his dad.” I pulled out my phone. I looked though my contacts list. I realized that I didn’t have her number. "Who would have her number that I Know and talk to? ………………….. James would have the number.” I found his number in my list and gave him a call.

“Hello?”

“Hey James, its Brent, I’ve got a question for you.”

“Hey, what do you need?”

“I was wondering if you have Brianna’s cell number.”

“Yeah, what do you need it for?”

“I will let you know later.”

“Ok, her number is 402-971-0401”

“Thanks dude.” I hung up the phone and entered in the number that he gave me. I took a deep breathe and pressed send. Then phone rang 3 times, and then Brianna answered.

“Hello?”

“Hey Brianna, this is Brent, you need to come to the hospital. Tyler’s here………..”

“Be there in 15 minutes.” She said and ended the call.

I hung up then began to think. She is going to have to do at least 90 miles per hour to get here in 15 minutes. I guess I would do that very same thing if my best friend was in the hospital.

Just as she said, Brianna was here in 15 minutes. She came running through the doors and straight up to me. I could see she had been crying.

“What happened? Where is he? How is he doing? Have they told you anything? What do you know?”

“Brianna……….Take a breather, Tyler will be fine. The doctors told me that he has a broken leg, arm and nose. He also has two broken ribs. One of the ribs pierced his lung.”

She started crying again. I pulled her into a hug. Tears began to fill my eyes once more. We both stood there crying with each other in our arms. She was the first to pull away.

“So ……………………. How did this happen?”

“Well, we were hanging out at the mall. He told me that he should be getting home. I dropped him off and started to leave. I saw that he left is bag in my car, so I went to take it to him. When I got to the door, I heard yelling and the sounds of a fight. I kicked in the door, and his dad was trying to kill him.”
“Oh my god, how could his dad do that? Tyler is his son.”

“Didn’t you know that was going on?”

“No”

“Oh, I thought that he would have told you since you two are best friends. I only know because I saw all the bruises on his back and chest. When I asked him he didn’t come out and say it, but I knew.”

“If Tyler told me that was going on, he would not have been living in that house. I would have called the cops.”

We sat down in the chairs and talked. We talked about anything to keep our minds off what was happening. Not completely off, but enough to keep us from crying.

<Surgery room >

“Doctor, we patched up his lung. All of the fluids have been drained” said a nurse.

“Ok, let’s get this boy patched back up and get him into recovery.”

The nurses and doctors all began sticking Tyler up. All the machines that were monitoring his vitals were showing that everything was going great. The machine monitoring his heart was going beep….. Beep…..beep…..beep…..beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee………………………..

Doctor he is flat lining.”

“Get the defibrillator.”

The nurse got the machine and charged it up.

“CLEAR” the doctor called out. He shocked Tyler. The machine on his heart still flat lined.

“Turn it up…………………………CLEAR” he sent another pulse of energy through Tyler body. Still a flat line showed on the machine.

“One more time…………………………….CLEAR” for the 3rd time Tyler’s body got a surge of energy. For the 3rd tie his body jumped. For the 3rd time everyone in the room hoped and prayed that that shock would bring the boy back. For the 3rd time the heart monitoring machine held the long steady beep.

“One more time doctor?” asked a nurse with a tear running down her cheek.

“I’m sorry, but no more. We have to call it.

“The doctor left the room to go tell the people waiting what has happened. Just as the doctor was beginning to talk, he heard a nurse calling his name. He spun to see who it was. When he saw her, he rushed to her to find out what was going on.
 
That was a lot to take in. Very good chapter as far as writing. Meaning I hate our main boy all banged up and mom got shot. Wow can't wait to see where this is taking us. He is one tough guy! He will survive! I had tears running down my face the whole time I read after mom got shot.

Keep up the great work Tim!!

(*8*)
 
The Tide Began to Rise
Chapter 10​


“Where am I” as I spoke, my voice echoed around the room. At least I think it is a room. Everything was dark. I looked around, trying to find some glimpse of light. There was nothing. My feet were dangling. “Wait, I can see myself. What is going on?”

“Tyler……………” said this voice. The voice was thunderous, the sound shook my body. Yet somehow it calmed me.

“Who are you? Where am I?”

“All in good time, my child. For now take solace in the fact that you are safe. No one in this place can or will do you harm. Tyler, I have watched over you all your life. I have protected you.”

“PROTECTED ME? You say you have watched over me, and then you have seen what my dad has done to me. You let that happen. He has tried to kill me multiple times, and this last time…………………OH MY GOD, am I dead?”

To the world, at this moment, you are. I know what your father has done to you. You may not believe what I say at this time, but by allowing this and the other tragedies to happen; you have grown to cherish life. You have gotten a new understanding of what is means to love and care for those that love and care for you. Your mom was the perfect example. “

“Mom let it all happen as well. She doesn’t care.”

“Oh but she did Tyler. She gave her life to try and stop your father. Everyday she pleaded with him to be nicer to you, to treat you like a son. She cared for you, but was too afraid of your dad to push him.”

“My mom…….”

“She has gone to the house of our lord. She sacrificed herself to allow someone to save you from the wrath of your father. I cannot tell you who that someone is. When you go back you will see.”

“Wait, you’re sending me back?”

“Yes”

“Before you do, can I see you?”

“Yes, of course you may.” There was a blinding light that appeared in front of me. My eyes had gotten used to the dark. I had to cover my eyes. That did not stop the light from blinding me. After a minute I felt that my eyes could open. When I opened them, I beheld the most beautiful being I had ever seen. This person was neither man not women. It glowed with the intensity of the sun.

“wh…………..wh……………..what are you?”

“I, Tyler, am your guardian angel. The lord of lords has permitted me to speak to you, so that you may understand that your life is worth something. So that you may understand that people do care about you. You are loved by many people on earth Tyler. Never forget that…………Now it is time to return to your body and to return to the ones that have shed tears over you.”

With a flash of light coming the angel, I was sent flying through the air. I was flying toward a building. I landed in my body. My eye’s shot open. I screamed out in pain. I shot up I screamed in pain again. 5 people dressed in green gowns came up to me and held me down. A minute or so later a man in a white coat came in and gave me a shot. Within seconds I was falling asleep. I didn’t dream. The next thing I knew I woke to Brent and Brie standing over me. They both had tears in their eyes.

“Hey bud how you feeling?” Brent asked.

“Like shit. What happened?”

Brent and Brie looked at each other, then back to me.

“Your dad…………”

“Ok say no more. Is my mom………..gone?”

Brent took one hand and Brie took the other. “I’m so sorry hun, she is gone.” Brie said.

Tears filled my eyes. I screamed out my frustration. My anger for what my dad has done to me. The hell he made me live through. The constant belittlement I was forced to take. I cried because I know now that my mom cared. I know because that angel told me. I spent all this time thinking that she didn’t care. I cried because the only family that I have left is my brother and half brother. Both of which don’t care for me.

“What happened with my Dad?”

“He’s in jail, awaiting trial.”

“I hope he gets beat everyday he is there. I hope he cries like a fucking pansy. Then I hope he dies. NO I wish he would die.”

“Tyler………….You don’t mean that. He did some really bad stuff, but he is still you dad.” Brent said.

“He is not my dad anymore. My dad died the day that fucking piece of shit Tristan moved in. I don’t have a dad. I hope he rots in hell.”

A nurse came in and told Brent and Brie that I needed rest. Brent said that he is not leaving. I was given some pills, with the last bit of strength that I had, I said “I love you Brent, thank you.” I was out like a light.

Brent leaned down and gave Tyler a kiss on the forehead. “I love you too.”
 
OMG Tim this is a great story! You Keep writing like this and I am going to have to buy stock in a Kleenex company to keep my eyes dry. :cry:

Where does he go from here? :confused:

Keep up the excellent work Tim!!!!! (*8*)

Mike
 
SEXYcivilianXXX said:
okay the first part made me LMAO about the angle and shit but the last parent made me a little sad its how i felt when i lost my parents.

Peaace, Love, & Prosperity
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People really do have out of body experiences so it is possible. As for your loss sorry to hear of it and you have my condolences (*8*).
 
glad yall like it. we are going to be heading back to the main island tonight. have to get things ready for daddies wedding. gotta start decorating and stuff. Pick up the tuxes all the fun shit.

Sorry that chapter 10 was so short. i couldnt really thing when i was writting it and if felt a little rushed when i re-read it. but i wanted it out. i will try and make the next one longer.
 
OMG Tim, they were SO great! Honestly! His mum getting shot was so sad :cry:, and the angel bit was well thought up. Please keep writing like this! :=D: ..| (*8*)
 
Loved the updates. I'm so glad Tyler has 2 good friends in Brent and Briana. Hopefully they will watch out for him.:=D:
 
Tim,
It isn't always the length of chapters that matter, but the power in them. These were extremely powerful - gut wrenching and uplifting at the same time.

Thanks for taking time out from your R&R to share with us. I hope you've enjoyed your vacation. Good luck with the wedding plans for your dad.

Take Care. (p.s. This Is DonQuixote. )
 
Powerful ... Gut-wrenching ... horrifying, and sad... So many emotions packed into such a small chapter! :=D: ..| I confess I cried when he flat-lined for the 3rd time ... then wow! I have had many out-of-body experiences - so that's OK. What moves me is the Love that is the essence of this story ... :kiss:

Keep it up when you can ... Kudos for continuing to write while on vacation ... HUGS! Five stars!!
(*8*)
 
Well im really glad that you all like the story so much. You are really what keeps me writing this. I mean i get emails and stuff form the other places that i post this but i mean i love it here beucase i can get instant feedback. Weather it be good or bad. I love positive feedback, but i also like negative. it helps me work on something that i might not know is there. so if you feel that i should schange something to make the story better let me know and if i feel that i can do that without compermising the story line then i will try.

Love ya all. Tim
 
I joined this site just to comment on this story. It is great and I was enthralled by it. I went from beginning to end during my work hours. (luckily I work at home) The story brought back all sorts of memories and so left me with mixed emotions but it is very nice to see that someone can put this stuff into writing. You seriously need to publish this and even see if it can be made into video. I would definitely go see it.(*8*)
 
when i was writing or starting to write about this, it was not my intention to bring back any negative memories.

As for being a movie, im not so sure about that. it would be great but im not so sure. Book that i might do not sure yet.
 
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG....................

I have great news everyone. This was only supposed to be My dad's wedding here in jamaica, but Zach planned it so that we would have a douple wedding. He planned it behind my back. i have no clue how he pulled it off. i was with him the whole time. he got our tuxedos changed to the ones we pick out for the wedding, had our rings shipped to his parents and they brought them.

Im so excited. im actually married.(!)
 
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