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Best Buddies Play Hard

hey is the little kevin big kevin's son? did marty get pregnant?

just kidding, it was really good. I feel complete now that i've finished it.
 
wowsers30 said:
hmmm...great story. was there any truth in it?
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None of which I'm aware, although it is not uncommon to read about it in the news.

It was an easy story to write, but it was extemely difficult emotionally as well. I just wanted to know what would happen if a young man 'came home again' to the only person who had really taken care of him. How would he deal with the love he knew he felt for him.

I won't apologize for the way I ended it, though. In Kevin's mind, that's why he came home. To say 'goodbye' forever. What happened between himself and Marty just let him feel better about doing it.

Sadly, far too many young people are driven to suicide by society. They see no other way out. A way must be found to stop it and give these kids a chance at life instead, and acceptance of them as human beings is the first step.
 
gsdx,

This story is far above and beyond anything I expected to read here. I couldn't help but get a bit choked up as I read those last few paragraphs, and there are tears in my eyes as I write this. I've read the original short story version of "Brokeback Mountain" and I can honestly say your story is just as well-written and emotionally powerful, if not even moreso. You should definitely consider getting it published.
 
kevtronics - I've neither read the book nor seen the movie of Brokeback Mountain, but thank you for your kind words. This story had me shedding more than a few tears. It was easy to write story-wise, but, emotionally, it's the most difficult story I have ever written. I guess I get into the characters too much and make them real in my mind.
 
a wonderful mix of pain,pleasure.laove,hatred and passion!!!!!!
kudos!!!!!!!!!!
Jijo
 
a wonderful mix of pain,pleasure.love,hatred and passion!!!!!!
kudos!!!!!!!!!!
Jijo
 
gsdx,
Thank you for the wonderful story. The emotions of this one was all over the place. Sizzlerz is right on with a mix. A very sad but all too often of an ending for Kevin.
Thank you.
 
Sorry for the emotional ride, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

With everything that was going on in Kevin's head, there was little choice. I thought it was important to do it 'first person', meaning 'told by Marty'. That way, you could put yourself in Marty's place and see what he saw and heard and felt.

I don't think I'll write another one like that, though.
 
I read this last evening, and decided to give myself 24hr. to figure out what I wanted to say. I'm still not sure ... it was that powerful!

The ending was well done! But ... in a way ... I felt it was a little abrupt. I guess I was hoping for more from the lake to the next morning. But that's only because I had enjoyed, so much!, all that had transpired before. There seemed to be a lot of potential for Hope! But, yes, sometimes that's all there is. Just a note ... suddenly out of the blue. And this was from Marty's perspective, who could only witness, and guess at the depths, of Kevin's turmoil.

I enjoyed the way Marty's life was put in perspective. All that had happened in 30yr.! His family, his acquisition of the land, his honor to his memories of Kevin, and his arrangements to have that all carried on, were quite touching!

Having provided "Us" with such an amazing roller coaster ride of emotions, I can only imagine how much it must have meant for You to have written this!! :=D: ..|

THANK YOU!, Neil, for sharing this with "Us"!! (group)

Keep smilin'!! :kiss: (*8*)
Ky ;)
 
I probably could have carried it on, but for Kevin, the story was over. He had already done more than he had expected (he had really returned just to say goodbye), and the blowjob was his dream fulfilled. His suicide had already been decided, and, if I had carried the story on any longer, I'm afraid that it couldn't have ended the way Kevin intended it to end.
 
and_rew said:
Neil,

please accept this. i cried like a baby.

andré(*8*)
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Wow. I never even won a boy scout badge and now I win this.

Thank you.

PS... I cried like a baby, too, and I knew what was going to happen!
 
gsdx said:
I probably could have carried it on, but for Kevin, the story was over. He had already done more than he had expected (he had really returned just to say goodbye), and the blowjob was his dream fulfilled. His suicide had already been decided, and, if I had carried the story on any longer, I'm afraid that it couldn't have ended the way Kevin intended it to end.
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I agree with you 100%, and am sorry if my comments sounded, in any way, "critical" ... not my intention. And I wasn't really talking about the sex, which was described Very Well!, but rather the bonding between the two of them. THAT is what really enthralled me! A Tribute to your writing Talent! Any disappointment, on my part, was a selfish desire for MORE of it!!:=D:

You did GOOD, Neil!! Awesome!! (group)

Keep smilin'!! :kiss: (*8*)
Ky ;)
 
Trust me, Ky, I would have liked it to have gone on and ended on a happier note, but I don't think that would have happened in real life. I'm not even sure counselling would have helped repair the damage, and I'm not sure Marty could have 'brought Kevin back' entirely. What he went through would have stuck with him for the rest of his life.

I wasn't offended by your comments at all. I was just afraid I had goofed and it looked like I had 'copped out' and cheated everyone by not taking it any farther. Marty offered hope to the readers (and even to myself), but Kevin was already lost. The only thing Marty could do was to allow him to die with happy memories.

Actually, I'm quite pleased with the discussions. At least I know that people are thinking. Some things just can't be fixed, no matter how much you may wish to fix them.
 
Seriously ... no need for a "fix" here, Neil! What you created was "spot on" Right! Your story was done in it's Purest sense! You managed to convey an essence of Life's experiences! Including the regrets we often come across! This done in such a way that it had the same Impact on your readers! Not an easy thing! Actually, quite an accomplishment! The "abruptness" hit Home!! (With it's own effect!)

Again ... Well Done!! (group)

Keep smilin'!! :kiss: (*8*)
Ky ;)
 
Even though this story had a sad ending and we all would have liked to see Kevin live on. Marty and Kevin to live happily ever after. Life just doesn't always happen that way. A lot of the time humans are dealt some pretty shitty cards. It's life. It is very sad that there are too many suicides among young people today. There is something very wrong with society today.

The story was emotionally powerful and has a moral to be learned here. I found it riveting and soul searching. Beautiful job.
 
[font=&quot]OH MY GOSH!

I have read this remarkable story three times and bawl my eyes out each time. The plot of the story was written and handled with sensitivity and compassion. It would be a very trying and tedious task to attempt writing any story of this magnitude.

A wonderful well written story.

Thanks,

Kevin
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Thank you, Kevin. That is high praise indeed.

Maybe someday I'll take the time to just sit back and start reading some of these stories myself. But, with three of them on the go at them moment, I will have to wait awhile.
 
I really don't know quite what to say Neil.....I think I hate you for making me bawl like a baby...but at the same time, I'm so glad you wrote....and shared this story with us. The emotions are raw and powerful, but none the less real....in my mind.
I think I now need a new box of tissues. Thanks Neil, for sharing.

Trent

BTW....I don't really hate you...(*8*)
 
Neil, thank you
I agree, not everything in life turns out as we might wish it to.
This is a very sensitively written story & shows clearly the emotional trauma
suffered as a result of such horrendous abuse. Your ending, though painful to read,
was the only one possible. Marty gave Kevin his love & also the courage to escape the thunderstorms in his mind. There was nothing more that Marty could do for his Buddy.
A beautifully tragic story & so very moving
Thank you again
Harry
 
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